hypercrit

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I absolutely LOVED IT! Such a unique character. BUT BUT BUT! WAIT! BEFORE YOU GET EXCITED! This application is PENDING! Your definition for powergaming was the type of powergaming seen in RPG's. This is a roleplaying server not an RPG, please fix it up, and then I will accept you! I'll give you 2 hours.

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Why did I deny you? Answer All Questions You must answer all questions. You HAVE to answer the roleplaying question, and you HAVE to answer the meta/powergaming question. You will never get on here without it. Your Biography A bit too short, and five year olds can't plow crops. Please fix it so it is a bit more believable. Your Answers to the Open Answer Questions A person will never become a king when they threaten shopkeepers for all their money. Also, the elf question showed instances of powergaming. How did the bandits react? Did the elf help you or run? Lack of Skin Without a skin, you won't be accepted. Please repost in 2 hours, if you post before then, you will be denied.

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Errmmm....what?

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You lied about your skin, it is a superman skin. It is not a craftsman. Your definitions for roleplaying and meta/powergaming are incorrect, look them up on the wiki. Don't lie to the App Team, it only decreases your chances to join. Thank you, and please wait 2 hours to repost.

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I like your application! Please wait for an admin to implement you!

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Denied. Please answer all the questions. Wait 2 hours before reposting.

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Denied. Please use the proper format.

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Denied. Please use the proper format. Understand that the biography is a biography of your character, not yourself. Thank you.

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I liked your application, but you need to improve on the biography. What does your character feel on a day to day basis? Personality? Physical traits? Flaws? Also, try not to use the word aint, it is 'bad' and somewhat ugly English. Try using isn't. Expand on the answers to the open answer questions. How does Sender help the elf? Does he get hurt in the process? Is the shopkeeper a con-artist? Is he trying to take your money? Please wait two hours before reposting, thank you.

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Why did I deny you? You described yourself when you said your biography. The biography isn't about yourself, it is about the character you are creating. The race is the race of your character, (Elven, Dwarven, Human, Orcish). They didn't have video games when the time period of the server is set. Also, your answers to the questions showed powergaming. You definitions for powergaming and metagaming are wrong, I suggest you look them up on google.

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