hypercrit

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It's like looking at a wall of blue nothingness. Fix the formatting up please. Wait 2 hours to repost.

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Best application I have read so far, but I suggest you find a paladin skin that shows a bit more of the facial features, just ask for one around here. I welcome you in open arms!

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First thing I'm going to say here is you are SO close. The only thing wrong here was that your bio was a tad unrealistic, and showed some areas of powergaming. I honestly feel really bad denying you, but it has to be done. You state in the start of your bio that he was good at everything but swordsmanship, but then you progress to have him a killing machine, not realistic at all. I really hope you understand what I am saying, because you are THAT close. I cannot wait to RP with you, I have no doubt you will be joining the server soon.

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Reading your writing was very hard with the unneeded capital letters everywhere I turned. Because of this, it gave me a bad feel about your roleplaying skills and I don't think that this style of writing may annoy people when roleplaying and you should fix it. I'm sorry, but that is just how it is. Also, your biography is a bit cliched. Fix up those two things then I can welcome you onto this server!

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I see your improvements from your first app, although the bio is a tad cliche, I am willing to let it pass because I feel you would be a good addition to the server. Please wait for an GM to implement you, congratulations.

A very nice app! I see you have corrected yourself, but trust me, if the skin is in anyway non-RP, your time on the server will be short. Could you please try to PM me it? If you don't know how to upload images, go to imgur, click upload, upload it, then copy the BBCode and paste it. Please wait for a GM to implement you, and welcome to Lord of The Craft!

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Why did I deny you? Incorrect Law First off, Halflings don't grow up in Kal'Urugan, secondly, they cannot mine as they have weak arms. Also, I believe a Halfling is a subrace of the elven race, not Human. Also, your ambitions should be what your CHARACTER wants to do. What does he want to achieve? Does he want to be a farmer, or does he desire something more? That was the biggest issue I had with your application, you HAVE to read the Lore on this server, and understand that a halfling isn't a super duper mining machine, that also dabbles in farming. If you want to commit to being a halfling, I suggest you go and read all the guides on it, as you have to be a very good roleplayer to do it. Other than that, your definitions for power and metagaming were a bit short of what we expect on the server, I suggest you go read up on it via the wiki. You can repost in 2 hours, so this will give you time to edit your application. I hope to see you on the server soon.

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You listened to my instructions exactly, and I am proud of you. Congratulations on your very nice English too, it is to be commended, considering you live in a non-English speaking country. Please wait for an admin to implement you, and welcome.

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Looking at your other applications, I see you have made a lot of improvement. The two things I think are wrong here is: Incorrect Lore You mentioned Aegis alot in your application, and we have moved from that world. Your characters ambitions should not be to open a tavern in Aegis, as that is a lost world now. Change the places you mentioned, and that will get that sorted. Your Definition of Roleplaying Because of how short it is, it isn't really correct in all aspects of what we believe the standard of the roleplaying definition should be. Beef it up a bit, and that problem should be solved, and then we will welcome you to the world of Asulon. Please wait 2 hours before reposting, go grab a cookie, and edit this. You are so close, I can see you as a part of this community soon.

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