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This piece of lore is rather well done but I find a need to delve deeper into each of the stances. Each stance represents an element and the fighting stance is similar to characteristics of that element. Water: Flows Wind: Speed Fire: Fast, Powerful Earth: Sound,strong Defense You have already supplied wonderful descriptions of the physical characteristics of each of the stances but other than water, there wasn't any depth spirtually. Someone who is so skilled in the art of an element should behave likewise. That element should make up the fiber of their being. Also I might add that I don't understand why water was the only stance to have such characteristic and such drastic characteristic. If someone taps into the "flow" without being prepared thenc they are corrupted? Are all elemental stances based off nature and this "flow"? Or do I misunderstand something? Anyways continuing... An expert of the the Earth Stance would be calm and would be able to make sound decisions in the heat of any moment. Things such as this would help to create a more deeper lore and more interesting roleplay. On the note of deeper lore I think it'd be interesting to see something about where fighters using this stance draw their power from. Maybe something like the deceased enter into the flow and one calls upon that flow for certain intense manuveurs. On a final note, more diverse stances would be interesting. Such as a combination Fire + Wind stances to create Smoke stance or something similar to that where its a combination of the two stances but also has its own properties. Goob job, I hope to see some changes to make this lore all the more interesting. *cough cough shovel*

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