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  1. As i venture the world, seeking for a way to redeem the trust of my people, I look for a home, a home befitting of an elf like I, A home that is accepting and has no form of government to control the actions of its people, as I venture out to the world, as an adventurer, I also seek a home.

    sorry for the random post everyone! I just wanted to try and post here >.> sorry btw

  2. [b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
    Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

    Minecraft Account Name: B3ast_mod
    How old are you?: 15
    Time-Zone: Philippines
    Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes
    What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Played in Some RP servers, sadly they are all dead/shut down
    How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: The ancient scrolls of Googe'l (Google)
    Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: [link]
    Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): None
    Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes

    Definitions
    In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

    Role-playing: Acting as if you are one with your character.This is the most basic skill needed to play in a role play server, for example. You want to say to another player that you want some bread, instead of just simply saying that you want some bread, you use your characters name and a sort of "dialect" in chatting with the other player according to your race etc.
    Meta-gaming: It is giving your character knowledge that only the player should know about, for example, the player knows another player in real life. And that player told him where his house is located. Your character should not be able to know this unless another player told him/her where it is, or by locating it by chance.
    Power-emoting: For me,its not giving your opponent a chance of beating you, it is because you either did not give them a chance to respond, or what you did was simply to OP. For example, you cannot simply say, *runs to the dragon then cuts its head off*, it is because you did not give the person roleplaying the dragon a chance to respond. It should be, *runs to the dragon and prepares to strike* so you will give a chance to the other player to respond to you action.

    In-Character Information:
    Complete the following biography on your character:

    Full Name:
    Súrion Orodreth
    Current Age: 507
    Sub-race (if any): High elf
    Past /
     History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

    Surion Orodreth was born in a royal family, rich, esteemed and everyone had high expectations of him. He grew up being trained by expert swords men, and trained in the art of archery, and studied under alchemists. The boy's Parents had expected him to be involved in politics when he grew up.
    Surion had what every boy would have wanted, Money, a family, and servants, but he lacks one thing that every normal child his age had. Freedom to choose his destiny.

     

      Because of this, Surion grew up to be a rebel, and saw politics as a waste of time. Growing up in the capital city of Malinor, he lived in luxury and had no worries. This made Surion's denial of the government even bigger, seeing the weasels and rats of society become politicians and slowly corrupt the government. When he was old enough, his relatives had forced him to be involved in politics. Soon, he was elected as Medi'iran of the city. He stayed in this position for 6 long years, and in these years he had gathered enough evidence to prove that the government was corrupted and unworthy of their positions. From lies and broken promises, to assassinations and mass murders, he kept these secrets for 6 years and he was ready to let the citizens know.
     

       The night before he was to tell these secrets, he informed his most trusted friend and relative. His brother, Mak'thul Orodeth. They met at the town square and went to a near by tavern. Before they reached the tavern Surion had noticed someone following them. He then told his brother to keep up with him, and his brothers response was "Keep up with you in what way?" at that moment, Mak'thul had noticed the strange men following them, and he followed his brother. As they were running they heard shouts from nearby guards instructing to close all exits. The two brothers went through alleys , around houses, and climbed some walls leading to a dead end. As they were losing hope, Surion spotted a small hole, large enough for one man to pass through, seeing this, his brother told him to go first and said that he will follow. As Surion crawls through the hole he hears the guards coming closer and closer, until he heard his brother shout these words "Go brother! Escape! Do not let them find you!". With this, Surion crawled so fast that by the time the guards voices had faded away, he had reached the exit of the small tunnel. As he stands up, and looks at the wall of the great city he hears a twig break behind him, as he turns around, his expression turned from tired, to seemingly lifeless as he sees a a group of heavily armed elves lead by a familiar face. El'thero, the man that he had beaten as Medi'iran of the city, before his head was covered by a bag, he sees a small grin on El'thero's face.As the bag was removed he saw himself chained to a steal chair in front of the Maheral and Sohaer. Then he heard a voice say "Let the trial on the cases of Surion Orodeth and Mak'thul Orodeth begin!". and as some light was shed on the room. he saw next to him. his brother bruised and beaten. Before he could react, the mysterious voice said "Under the law of the city, No treason shall be committed against the government of Malinor, or the ones who break the said rules would be persecuted and judged under the eyes of the Maheral and Sohaer!". Then the Sohaer speaksm "As the mastermind of the said treason, *Surion's eyes widen up* Makthul Orodeth shall be Executed!- NO! I am the master mind not him!" interupted Surion."SIlence!" said the mysterious voice. "Ehem, and as an accomplice, Surion Orodeth shall be banished from the city, and stripped of his Wealth and rights as a citizen of Malinor!" continued the Sohaer. As Surions face turned pale, he turned to his brother, whos face was as pale as his, as his brother's head turns to him, he hears him say: "Live on brother, never falter.". These brought tears unto Surions eyes as his brother was carried by two large elven men to the exit of the court room. As he sat there, depressed and confused, he sees El'thero walk to him as if he had won a competition and say : "Too bad the great Surion had to betray his city, I guess I will be the replacement Medi'iran.hahaha" whith that, Surion is taken away by the elven guards out of the room and threw out through the gates of the city, Never to return again. Through the years of isolation, Surion learned to love animals, but in turn, hated any other race. He now lives in the forest near the great crossing, selling herbs,potions and enchanted books to Adventurers who stumble upon his shack.

    Ambitions for the Future: He wishes to avenge his brothers death, and one day return home to Malinor.
    Personality: Although serious and tends to stay away from people, He has a deep emotional wound , because he thinks that it is his fault his brother was executed.

    mDdOJdn.png
    Skills: Alchemy, archey and swordsmanship 
    Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):

    He has light yellow hair. think eye brows and still wears his old "royal crown".

    R68G5Db.png
    Any other details you wish to share about your character: He has a soft spot for Animals and has turned vegan, when he goes to a city, he wears a black cloak and covers his face. 

    He has a scar on his right arm that he got from combat training.

    [b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
    [i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
    ____

    [b]1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Uponinspection you realize that a group of older elves are mocking a small elven child. How do you react?[/b]

    Answer:Surion would say: "Hey, you, yes you! Are you not ashamed of what you are doing. Bullying someone who cannot fend for them selves?" And goes and and helps the small child home. (still wearing the all black cloak to cover his face)

    [b]2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. Hecollapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there,defenseless - what do you do?[/b]

    Answer: I first pick up the coins. put them back to the pouch and place it in the old mans pocket, I take him to my hut to be treated, and when he is fully healed, I will help him walk back to his home.

    [b]3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).

    Answer: Surion: Ughh, another merchant trying to sell me an item that i do not need,
                Trader: oh but you do need it, My shop has everything and anything you would ever want!

               Surion: oh? and I suppose that you have a philosophers stone!?

                 Trader: You betcha! How many do you want? 5? 10? 20?!

             Surion: *takes a stone*hmmm *inspects the stone* Bah! how dare you try and trick me, I studied alchemy under esteemed alchemists and scientists! I cannot be fooled by amateur forgery!Do You want me to report you to the city!?

              Trader: ohno, I dont want any of that! please accept my apologies sir! Please do! To compensate you, I will give you this! *hands a pouch full of gold coins*
             Surion: Hmm that sounds fair, I guess i wont report your shop.

             Merchant: ah yes, thank you good sir, ah will you excuse me, i hear someone calling me *goes out the door*

           Surion: *inspects gold* Wait! You scoundrel how dare you try and fool me again! *chases the Trader*

          Trader: *sees Surion * Oh boy *runs away as fast as he can*

        -END-
     

  3. [b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
    Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

    Minecraft Account Name: B3ast_mod
    How old are you?: 15
    Time-Zone: Philippines
    Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes
    What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Played in Some RP servers, sadly they are all dead/shut down
    How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: The ancient scrolls of Googe'l (Google)
    Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: [link]
    Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): None
    Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes

    Definitions
    In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

    Role-playing: Acting as if you are one with your character.
    Meta-gaming: For me its to act as if your choices wont only affect your character, but also you.
    Power-emoting: For me,its not giving your opponent a chance of beating you because of the over powered skills such as "shooting an arrow from 1000 feet away, Surion hits every target dead in the middle of their eyes". = Over Powered

    In-Character Information:
    Complete the following biography on your character:

    Full Name:
    Súrion Orodreth
    Current Age: 507
    Sub-race (if any): High elf
    Past /
    History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

    Surion Orodreth was born in a royal family, rich, esteemed and everyone had high expectations of him. He grew up being trained by expert swords men, and trained in the art of archery, and studied under alchemists. The boy's Parents had expected him to be involved in politics when he grew up.
    Surion had what every boy would have wanted, Money, a family, and servants, but he lacks one thing that every normal child his age had. Freedom to choose his destiny.

     

      Because of this, Surion grew up to be a rebel, and saw politics as a waste of time. Growing up in the capital city of Malinor, he lived in luxury and had no worries. This made Surion's denial of the government even bigger, seeing the weasels and rats of society become politicians and slowly corrupt the government. When he was old enough, his relatives had forced him to be involved in politics. Soon, he was elected as Medi'iran of the city. He stayed in this position for 6 long years, and in these years he had gathered enough evidence to prove that the government was corrupted and unworthy of their positions. From lies and broken promises, to assassinations and mass murders, he kept these secrets for 6 years and he was ready to let the citizens know.
     

       The night before he was to tell these secrets, he informed his most trusted friend and relative. His brother, Mak'thul Orodeth. They met at the town square and went to a near by tavern. Before they reached the tavern Surion had noticed someone following them. He then told his brother to keep up with him, and his brothers response was "Keep up with you in what way?" at that moment, Mak'thul had noticed the strange men following them, and he followed his brother. As they were running they heard shouts from nearby guards instructing to close all exits. The two brothers went through alleys , around houses, and climbed some walls leading to a dead end. As they were losing hope, Surion spotted a small hole, large enough for one man to pass through, seeing this, his brother told him to go first and said that he will follow. As Surion crawls through the hole he hears the guards coming closer and closer, until he heard his brother shout these words "Go brother! Escape! Do not let them find you!". With this, Surion crawled so fast that by the time the guards voices had faded away, he had reached the exit of the small tunnel. As he stands up, and looks at the wall of the great city he hears a twig break behind him, as he turns around, his expression turned from tired, to seemingly lifeless as he sees a a group of heavily armed elves lead by a familiar face. El'thero, the man that he had beaten as Medi'iran of the city, before his head was covered by a bag, he sees a small grin on El'thero's face.As the bag was removed he saw himself chained to a steal chair in front of the Maheral and Sohaer. Then he heard a voice say "Let the trial on the cases of Surion Orodeth and Mak'thul Orodeth begin!". and as some light was shed on the room. he saw next to him. his brother bruised and beaten. Before he could react, the mysterious voice said "Under the law of the city, No treason shall be committed against the government of Malinor, or the ones who break the said rules would be persecuted and judged under the eyes of the Maheral and Sohaer!". Then the Sohaer speaksm "As the mastermind of the said treason, *Surion's eyes widen up* Makthul Orodeth shall be Executed!- NO! I am the master mind not him!" interupted Surion."SIlence!" said the mysterious voice. "Ehem, and as an accomplice, Surion Orodeth shall be banished from the city, and stripped of his Wealth and rights as a citizen of Malinor!" continued the Sohaer. As Surions face turned pale, he turned to his brother, whos face was as pale as his, as his brother's head turns to him, he hears him say: "Live on brother, never falter.". These brought tears unto Surions eyes as his brother was carried by two large elven men to the exit of the court room. As he sat there, depressed and confused, he sees El'thero walk to him as if he had won a competition and say : "Too bad the great Surion had to betray his city, I guess I will be the replacement Medi'iran.hahaha" whith that, Surion is taken away by the elven guards out of the room and threw out through the gates of the city, Never to return again. Through the years of isolation, Surion learned to love animals, but in turn, hated any other race. He now lives in the forest near the great crossing, selling herbs,potions and enchanted books to Adventurers who stumble upon his shack.

    Ambitions for the Future: He wishes to avenge his brothers death, and one day return home to Malinor.
    Personality: Although serious and tends to stay away from people, He has a deep emotional wound , because he thinks that it is his fault his brother was executed.

    mDdOJdn.png
    Skills: Alchemy, archey and swordsmanship 
    Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):

    He has light yellow hair. think eye brows and still wears his old "royal crown".

    R68G5Db.png
    Any other details you wish to share about your character: He has a soft spot for Animals and has turned vegan, when he goes to a city, he wears a black cloak and covers his face. 

    He has a scar on his right arm that he got from combat training.

    [b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
    [i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
    ____

    [b]1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of older elves are mocking a small elven child. How do you react?[/b]

    Answer:Surion would say: "Hey, you, yes you! Are you not ashamed of what you are doing. Bullying someone who cannot fend for them selves?" And goes and and helps the small child home. (still wearing the all black cloak to cover his face)

    [b]2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?[/b]

    Answer: I first pick up the coins. put them back to the pouch and place it in the old mans pocket, I take him to my hut to be treated, and when he is fully healed, I will help him walk back to his home.

    [b]3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).

    Answer: Surion: Ughh, another merchant trying to sell me an item that i do not need,
                Trader: oh but you do need it, My shop has everything and anything you would ever want!

               Surion: oh? and I suppose that you have a philosophers stone!?

                 Trader: You betcha! How many do you want? 5? 10? 20?!

             Surion: *takes a stone*hmmm *inspects the stone* Bah! how dare you try and trick me, I studied alchemy under esteemed alchemists and scientists! I cannot be fooled by amateur forgery!Do You want me to report you to the city!?

              Trader: ohno, I dont want any of that! please accept my apologies sir! Please do! To compensate you, I will give you this! *hands a pouch full of gold coins*
             Surion: Hmm that sounds fair, I guess i wont report your shop.

             Merchant: ah yes, thank you good sir, ah will you excuse me, i hear someone calling me *goes out the door*

           Surion: *inspects gold* Wait! You scoundrel how dare you try and fool me again! *chases the Trader*

          Trader: *sees Surion * Oh boy *runs away as fast as he can*

        -END-
     

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