ninjaarcherdude

I do understand your concerns, but this is not an app it even says though, and second, it is also just a story because it would seem that i may never get accepted... however, besides that point, don't forget, an role play may have stuff that happened in the past that hasn't quite been explained. And the part about the soulstone, maybe in his perspective time seemed to slow down, as he had focused on one thing and one thing alone. Learning the move in which his parents had created. And the move would not be in server lore if Jacob's parrent's hadn't thought anyone this move and it was only able to be done by the family. And, maybe the healing went wrong some how and it cuased the scar! The only point I'm attenuating to make is that this will probably never ever come back up again... unless i fail AGAIN for the fifth time and i can't try anymore for the month, and i begin to give up and slowly move away from trying. Again, it's just something for me to do until i realize I'm not going to get in, and probably never will :P Well, until next time!

b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b] Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate. Minecraft Account Name:ninjaarcherdude How old are you?: 12 Time-Zone: Eastern Time Zone Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I have been on many servers and constantly rp in real life How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I was looking for a rp server that would full fill my needs Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthe...-new-applicant/ http://www.lordofthe...pplicant-try-2/ http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/94469-denieda-eleven-hero-new-applicant-try-3/ Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Yes Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes Definitions In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!: Role-playing: Being completely different in real life then your character Meta-gaming :Knowing something in real life that my character doesn't that may or may not affect the story Power-emoting: Forcing someone else's actions through your words. In-Character Information: Complete the following biography on your character: Full Name: Jacob Falcon Current Age: 49 Sub-race (if any): Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):As a small child Jacob Falcon wasn't liked and to this day he still isn't People still hate him but of course, the people who hate him know are mostly people attempting to kill him rather than asking for assistance. Now, he doesn't live in a village as he left in order to find people who would finally understand and respect him. He now works as an assassin taking out people who would rather see the entire world die out rather than making peace. He is incredibly stealthy and talks next to none while on a mission. As an orphan, Jacob learned pretty quickly that no one in his current village would like him,so he learned how to hunt and how to fend for him self. He also decided it would be better to be stealthy and not draw attention to himself. He decides to be quiet and not talk much. He talks at key moments in time, and he isn't mute, but his life has been to traumatizing for him to speak much...So at the moment things seem to be going fine for Jacob Falcon (He prefers to be called Jake). He is in love with a girl named Ashley and his parents are safe for now. Wait why did i say for now? Because a band of Dark Elves are going after Jake's parents. Why? The reason is unknown. However Jacob is convinced that the reason lies in Anthos. So he has left his girlfriend (Ashley) back in his home village and set off for the world of Anthos. Since then he has given up the life of assassins and now live a bit more peacefully then before, however he does not pass up the opportunity to help someone in need. He currently works as a Sentinel as he can sometimes here tidbits about stuff that's going on. So, his soulstone had protected him until the age of 40. And now, unfortunately, the magic has died. And he is no longer protected, which scares him. As he was never raised to be a fighter, but a runner. But that all changed when Jacob was almost killed due to 1000's of bandits. And of course, Ashley had to swing in and make his life more complex... Ambitions for the Future: Figuring out why his parents are being hunted. And why he's hated. Personality: Ambitious, Modest, and carrying as with stealthy and deadly Skills:Morale boost, rapid fire arrows, and knife throwing. Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): Any other details you wish to share about your character: He has a scar on his back from when he was 16 years old and stabbed by a band of thief's and it sometimes cause's him immense pain which sometimes even prevents him from moving. [b]Open-Response-Questions[/b] [i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i] ____ [b]1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Uponinspection you realize that a group of older elves are mocking a small elven child. How do you react?[/b] Answer: Jacob: "Hey, elders back off the kid. NOW" Elder's: "Whatcha going to do about it. Your just another hated elf. You cant touch us!" Jacob "You wanna fight for the kid, Ill fight, but i cant promise you guys will be able to stand up again." Elders: "You don't scare us! Come on guys lets teach him to respect hiss Elders!" Jacob: "I'm warning you. Don't. You wont like the out come. I promise" All of a sudden, all the Elders attack and 1 by 1 they charge. Jacob pulls out his short, duel sword's and and 1 by 1 they receive a scar on their face. However, the elders stand right back up again a continue to charge. However, this cycle stops once Jacob begins to leap from tree to tree and jumps in the air and slams on the ground HARD with his sword. The elders stumble back and realize that charging will no longer work. This is great new for Jacob, But he has been fighting for about one and a half hours, and is beginning to feel weak. So Jacob switches his sword over to bow mode, and perches himself on a tree. From his position, he begins to snipe one of the elders. Of the first 4 elders, only 3 remain. So, Jacob finally snipes down one elder as the final 3 (or now 2) elders began climbing up the tree. Jacob understands that a bow will no longer cut it and switches over to sword mode. However now its been 2 and a half hours since the fight begin, and he cant keep it up much longer. And the scar on his back is beginning to prevent him from moving as fast. A soon as one climbs up Jacob greets him and uses his sword to cut the branch that the elder is on, Causing the elder to fall to his death. However, the last elder sneaks up behind Jacob and stabs him off. As Jacob is falling, the elder rises his sword too, and jumps down going directly for Jacob. Jacob notices this action and uses all his will to make a branch hit the elder JUST enough so that the elder looses his balance and falls to his death. Jacob uses his sword, and stabs it into the tree and begins to slow his desert. Once at the bottom, Jacob finds the kid has ran away. Jacob thinks to himself: "Smart kid. For a second there, I didn't even think i would make it out alive". Then, out of nowhere, Jacob feels 4 great blades, all at once, go through his back. The only thing Jacob though about on his way to death, was, after 48 years of running and barley staying alive , this where i die. Mulilple tears fall down Jacobs face, and then out of nowhere, Ashley comes in and grabs Jacob. And Jacob is brought to a medic tent and almost dies, but because he has too much to live for, he clings on and makes it. [b]2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. Hecollapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there,defenseless - what do you do?[/b] Answer: Jacob runs over to the old man. Grabs the old man and put's him on his shoulder.He notices a stab wound and decides to heal it with the last peace of cloth that he was saving for himself. He puts the old man down and collects his coins, and puts 50 more in as well. He go's back to the old man, and puts him on his shoulder and go's tree to tree to the nearest village and drops the old man at a healers tent, and leave's the sack with the old man. Old Man: "Oh. Are you... the one who saved me?" Jacob: "Yes." Old Man: "What's your name young man?" Jacob: "My name? Jacob Falcon. The Archer division for the elf army, at your pleasure." Old Man: 'Wait. I hate you! Get out, get out , GET OUT. HELP SOMEONE PLEASE SOMEONE ANYONE ELSE HELP ME PLEASE!" [b]3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved). Answer: Jacob; "What do you got." Trader: "I've got rapid fire bows, long swords, short, duel swords, gems, arrows, slaves, Magic scrolls, and many more!" Jacob: Wait you've got slaves? You understand that i should probably turn you in right now right?" Trader: "Please don't! I'm only doing this for my family. If you don't turn me in I'll do what ever you say. I promise!" Jacob: "Anything?" Trader: "Anything" Jacob: "Fine. Release the slaves. NOW." Trader: "But!" Jacob: "NOW" Jacob takes sword out of his sheath and puts it up to the Traders neck. Trader: "Okay okay. I release them." Jacob: "And i would like to have "your" Falcon family sword." Trader: "Okay. That will be 450 gold coins." Jacob: "How about free for two reasons. One that's MY SWORD. And two i will kill you if you don't" Trader: "Fine fine. Here you go. Jacob holds the blade in his hand. It's so agile and light, but packs a PUNCH Jacob: "And sir?" Trader: "Yes?" Jacob: "How long were those slaves with you?" Trader: "I don't know maybe a week?" Jacob: "Hmm well, you've got a family right?" Trader: "Yes" Jacob: 'My last request is that you tell them. And if you don't." Takes out sword and "misses" the merchant. Jacob: "That tomato that i just killed? Will be you! So I'm not quite sure why but it kept saying that my skin upload had failed so here's a link to a app in which the upload did work: http://www.lordofthe...pplicant-try-2/ Now please don't rage at me for posting twice on the forums. I didn't think the post went through and i had updated my app so i had decided it would be better to re post and say I'm sorry in advance, rather than being told i cannot join because people couldn't find my post, and waiting another 24 hours as i would love to begin the role play as i have been nerding out for the last 2 days hoping that i got in. Thanks for your time

"Wow our baby is quite. He doesn't really like to talk does he. He's pretty at least. But he's not a warrior really. "If he's not beneficial...AND can't help much..." What are you talking about!" "Well, the city might have to... release him." "DON'T say that. He's as good as any elf out there! And at least he's a wood elf" In Anthos, a baby boy eleven child was born. However, not being a warrior, (when the elf clans needed a warrior). Unfortunately for the baby as well, he wouldn't turn out to be as useful as the elven people would need him. So, at the age of 39 he set off to do something great... Jacob: "Hey you. You there what are you holding back there?" Bandiest: "Oh hey guys look! It's that terrible elf. Oh the one that can't fight? Yeah that's him!" Jacob begins to think (I don't think i can take them...) For the longest amount of time, Jacob's soulstone had protected him against animals, but on his 40th birthday the magic dispersed, evaporating, or at least what little of it had protected him. For the last 9 years Jacob had been running between towns. Trying to avoid eye contact. Most elf's you think of are pretty nice and helpful. However, Jacob knew that some elf's were cruel first handed. As a small child he was beat and would have to hunt to stay alive at all. He was never fed by the towns people and his par rents were usually to busy in the current war to be at home long enough to make him something. They would come home, sleep, and go back to the war. So, this meant that when he was alone, some of the nasty people would beat him. So, from this experience, he has learned not to make eye contact with anyone. The bandits all of a sudden pulled out weapons, and Jacob knew he would have to fight to stay alive. One of the bandits snapped his fingers and all of a sudden the entire buildings in the ally ways had there roofs lined with bandits. And at the very moment that they all charged Jacobs soulstone glowed, slowed down time a little, and thought him a legendary (or somewhat. It was more of a famous, INCREDIBLY hard move that his par rents had invented), and then time continued. Jacob ran strait for the back wall of the ally. Bandits: "All right elf. Well let you make one move, and then we'll attack" But Jacob didn't care. He did a back flip strait from the wall, and made his entire body spin. Jacob drew his sword and kept it strait in front of him. As he did this maybe 20 bandits charged in front of him, and Jacob went right through them, and hit a wall. He plumented almost 50 feet before he stabbed his sword in the wall to slow his descent. And do to the fact that his sword went into the building his only hope of surviving (the entrance to the ally way) was now filled with rubble. And unfortunately for him, he was exhausted and his scar was about to "help" See when Jacob was a child he was assaulted by abusers who all had stabbed him. Lucky for Jacob, his parents shot the Bandits, but in order for the healer to get his wounds healed, she had to put a curse on the scar that meant too much movement, and the scar would paralyze him. Jacob was tired, and had quite a bit of blood on him from earlier when he had to fight a tiger. At least some of the blood, about 5% of it was the enemies. Then, at least 1000's of bandits lined the roof top, and that was it Jacob thought. Years of living hell had lead to this. A defeat due to bandits. Then, just before he was stabbed, a elven girl named Ashley, had swung down on a rope, picked up Jacob, and swung off. (Out of character ending/thanks/please don't lock this topic) So, i noticed that this ISN'T against the rules. (Moderators please don't ban me!) This is merely something for me to do untill i can finally make a decent enough application that i can get accepted... Also this will be a way go more in depth in case anyone has any questions. So as long as this topic isn't locked i will post again at 12:00 oclock tomarrow pce yalls

Well, i appreciate the feedback and i LOVE that no one has locked this topic. And i hope that everyone and anyone will post there not so success posts that everyone can hopefully learn about the mistakes that are made and the steps to fixing them. However, there is a small part of me that (and i mean like a 0.00000000000000009%) that feels like this will be the only thing that my apps do :(. Using your advice at the end of the battle all 4 elf elders will come back and stab me in the back, all at once, and i will fall down and be knocked out for a WHILE. Second, i will... erase (I'm a bit sad that even though its part of my character that's LONG gone, i cant include it :(), and elaborate more on why people hated me and how i more or less "desalinated" animals versus humans for a source of food. Third: I shall be including (For those of you who wanted to hear this) a love scene in my bio. Don't worry, it wont have THAT many details (Or maybe it will? You'll have to read it to find out! Lol'z I'm just kidding). I will take note on my definitions and modify them. And i will probably set my character more in the Anthos region (If you created a region where Ageis was the name of a BEAUTIFUL city, you would probably be a little confused too...) and I would like to ask. Is it okay to post "Fake apps" just to get feedback? I mean i DON'T want to break the rules, and i don't remember seeing that as being against the rules in the app rules. Please anyone who knows post a reply to this topic, and ill see you guys tomorrow at 12:00 with my 4 app for the month. Untill then peace guys!

So to anyone that might be following this post I yet again got denied for the second time :(. If you would like to read my second app click here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/94338-a-eleven-hero-new-applicant-try-2/. So after the 24 hours that It took for me to be denied and allowed to re post again i re applied. Now i understand i can only apply 2 more times this month as i reach the 5 time per month limit. So any elves that would like to see me on the server please give me a morale i boost in this topic, anything like Yeah i like your app however try this instead of this! It all helps. So if you guys wanna check out my third post for this month click here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/94469-a-eleven-hero-new-applicant-try-3/ Until next time, this is ninjaarcherdude signing off! -Ninja~

b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b] Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate. Minecraft Account Name:ninjaarcherdude How old are you?: 12 Time-Zone: Eastern Time Zone Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I have been on many servers and constantly rp in real life How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I was looking for a rp server that would full fill my needs Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthe...-new-applicant/ http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/94338-a-eleven-hero-new-applicant-try-2/ Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Yes Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes Definitions In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!: Role-playing: Being completely different in real life then your character Meta-gaming:Knowing something in real life that my character doesn't Power-emoting: Killing someone using action before the other player can type or say something back In-Character Information: Complete the following biography on your character: Full Name: Jacob Falcon Current Age: 49 Sub-race (if any): Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):As a small child Jacob Falcon wasn't liked and to this day he still isn't People still hate him but of course, the people who hate him know are mostly people attempting to kill him rather than asking for assistance. Now, he doesn't live in a village as he left in order to find people who would finally understand and respect him. He now works as an assassin taking out people who would rather see the entire world die out rather than making peace. He is incredibly stealthy and talks next to none while on a mission. As an orphan, Jacob learned pretty quickly that no one in his current village would like him,so he learned how to hunt and how to fend for him self. He also decided it would be better to be stealthy and not draw attention to himself. So at the moment things seem to be going fine for Jacob Falcon (He prefers to be called Jake). He is in love with a girl named Ashley and his parents are safe for now. Wait why did i say for now? Because a band of Dark Elves are going after Jake's parents. Why? The reason is unknown. However Jacob is convinced that the reason lies in Aegis So he has left his girlfriend (Ashley) back in his home village and set off for the world of Aegis. Since then he has given up the life of assassins and now live a bit more peacefully then before, however he does not pass up the opportunity to help someone in need. He currently works as a Sentinel as he can sometimes here tidbits about stuff that's going on. Ambitions for the Future: Figuring out why his parents are being hunted. Personality: Ambitious, Modest, and carrying as with stealthy and deadly Skills:Morale boost, rapid fire arrows, and knife throwing. Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): Any other details you wish to share about your character: He has a scar on his back from when he was 16 years old and stabbed by a band on thief's and it sometimes cause's him immense pain which sometimes even prevents him from moving. [b]Open-Response-Questions[/b] [i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i] ____ [b]1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Uponinspection you realize that a group of older elves are mocking a small elven child. How do you react?[/b] Answer: Jacob: "Hey, elders back off the kid. NOW" Elder's: "Whatcha going to do about it. Your just another hated elf. You cant touch us!" Jacob "You wanna fight for the kid, Ill fight, but i cant promise you guys will be able to stand up again." Elders: "You don't scare us! Come on guys lets teach him to respect hiss Elders!" Jacob: "I'm warning you. Don't. You wont like the out come. I promise" All of a sudden, all the Elders attack and 1 by 1 they charge. Jacob pulls out his short, duel sword's and and 1 by 1 they receive a scar on their face. However, the elders stand right back up again a continue to charge. However, this cycle stops once Jacob begins to leap from tree to tree and jumps in the air and slams on the ground HARD with his sword. The elders stumble back and realize that charging will no longer work. This is great new for Jacob, But he has been fighting for about one and a half hours, and is beginning to feel weak. So Jacob switches his sword over to bow mode, and perches himself on a tree. From his position, he begins to snipe one of the elders. Of the first 4 elders, only 3 remain. So, Jacob finally snipes down one elder as the final 3 (or now 2) elders began climbing up the tree. Jacob understands that a bow will no longer cut it and switches over to sword mode. However now its been 2 and a half hours since the fight begin, and he cant keep it up much longer. And the scar on his back is beginning to prevent him from moving as fast. A soon as one climbs up Jacob greets him and uses his sword to cut the branch that the elder is on, Causing the elder to fall to his death. However, the last elder sneaks up behind Jacob and stabs him off. As Jacob is falling, the elder rises his sword too, and jumps down going directly for Jacob. Jacob notices this action and uses all his will to make a branch hit the elder JUST enough so that the elder looses his balance and falls to his death. Jacob uses his sword, and stabs it into the tree and begins to slow his desert. Once at the bottom, Jacob finds the kid has ran away. Jacob thinks to himself: "Smart kid. For a second there, I didn't even think i would make it out alive". [b]2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. Hecollapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there,defenseless - what do you do?[/b] Answer: Jacob runs over to the old man. Grabs the old man and put's him on his shoulder.He notices a stab wound and decides to heal it with the last peace of cloth that he was saving for himself. He puts the old man down and collects his coins, and puts 50 more in as well. He go's back to the old man, and puts him on his shoulder and go's tree to tree to the nearest village and drops the old man at a healers tent, and leave's the sack with the old man [b]3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved). Answer: Jacob; "What do you got." Trader: "I've got rapid fire bows, long swords, short, duel swords, gems, arrows, slaves, Magic scrolls, and many more!" Jacob: Wait you've got slaves? You understand that i should probably turn you in right now right?" Trader: "Please don't! I'm only doing this for my family. If you don't turn me in I'll do what ever you say. I promise!" Jacob: "Anything?" Trader: "Anything" Jacob: "Fine. Release the slaves. NOW." Trader: "But!" Jacob: "NOW" Jacob takes sword out of his sheath and puts it up to the Traders neck. Trader: "Okay okay. I release them." Jacob: "And i would like to have "your" Falcon family sword." Trader: "Okay. That will be 450 gold coins." Jacob: "How about free for two reasons. One that's MY SWORD. And two i will kill you if you don't" Trader: "Fine fine. Here you go. Jacob holds the blade in his hand. It's so agile and light, but packs a PUNCH Jacob: "And sir?" Trader: "Yes?" Jacob: "How long were those slaves with you?" Trader: "I don't know maybe a week?" Jacob: "Hmm well, you've got a family right?" Trader: "Yes" Jacob: 'My last request is that you tell them. And if you don't." Takes out sword and "misses" the merchant. Jacob: "That tomato that i just killed? Will be you! So I'm not quite sure why but it kept saying that my skin upload had failed so here's a link to a app in which the upload did work: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/94338-a-eleven-hero-new-applicant-try-2/ Now please don't rage at me for posting twice on the forums. I didn't think the post went through and i had updated my app so i had decided it would be better to re post and say I'm sorry in advance, rather than being told i cannot join because people couldn't find my post, and waiting another 24 hours as i would love to begin the role play as i have been nerding out for the last 2 days hoping that i got in. Thanks for your time -Ninja~

So before this is judged i have 1 thing to say. I don't remmeber giving an ages so he's 23 and the file is an image of my skin. And i plan to be on the server and enhance the server as much as possible as i feel like being on so many.... not so good servers i owe it to the rp community to join a nice a serever and i really wanna have some fun too!

So i just finished my new app and it took me a few hours but I'm proud! Click here to see new app http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/94338-a-eleven-hero-new-applicant-try-2/?p=844509

So I'm sorry i didn't catch htis earlier so here are those other two definations RolePlay: Customizing a character and be able to act as that character in real life and/or video games Meta Gaming:Make choices in the real world the affect the roleplay or other games

Thanks man!

I do thank you guys. However when i go to aquire the format and i click on the spoliers button, i get quite a few links, but none of them say format. Help!

Now the only thing I'm not sure about is WHY i was denied? If someone such as staff or anyone else can read my application that would be great and the just re post what you guys think i did wrong. I don't care what you say about don't worry i wont take it offensively

An elven hero was killed, almost massacred and this is his story. Jake Falcon was his name. He was hated. He was the only one who had survived The Great Giant War. The gods bestowed upon him a magical green and gold silk robe which turned into a battle vest. And a magic sword which had turned into a bow as well. He had even fell in love with this girl named Ashley. And before his first meaningful kiss he was assassinated. He pleaded with the gods to let him go and fight! But the god did not want to. They had already given him to gifts. So he said that as long as he still had his memory he would allow the sword and chest plate. The gods thought this was fair and brought him back to life. But an evil dark elf God had decided to remove his memory. So when he was brought back to life he only knew 2 things 1: He was an elf and 2: he loved a girl named Ashley. So its your descion what you do with him now. Hes at your control!