creepyelites

OOC: Mc Name: Creepyelites Timezone: UTC + 00:00 Skype Name:Sonny olive Teamspeak is needed for more effective communication. IC: Full name: Rythian Age: 25 Gender: Male

How did you even become self taught ?

thanks for all the feedback acornlad im regulary in salvus

Okay i was accsepted yesterday and wanna be a mage or priest but the problem is no one accsepts me :(

I was looking to become a mage or priest and have done some searching but I can't seem to find anyone well atleast admitting they are and are willing to teach me. So basically I want to become a mage or priest and need a person to teach me any advice on how to find one?

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - Creepyelites How old are you?: - 13 What time-zone do you live in?: - UTC±00:Greenwich Mean Time Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - Iv role-played on garry's mod a couple of times iv also roleplayed on a minecraft server that had about 25 people on but it got shut down to lack of donations Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - Yes as stated above Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - yes http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/96156-creepyelites-application/ How did you hear about us?: -I searched fun role-playing minecraft server i though i would find ones like garrys mod (gangsters and that) But i found one even better! This one with dwarves humans ect What do you think the server will be like? - I think this server will be amazing and friendly and when i log on there will be others in the race i want to be offering me a place to stay and teach me the basics. Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes iv read the rules What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most: Number 7 "When you set up a minecraft skin make sure it suites that role you play" because it would make no sense to be talking to an human and hes minecraft skin is a goblin for example or a animal What is roleplaying?: - Roleplaying is making/taking another characters position and make some choices they would make What’s metagaming?: - For exsample i see someones minecraft name lets say mine creepyelites and i walk up and say "Hey creepyelites" but he does not know me/met me in a roleplaying style hes just looked up and saw my name and talking in ooc in a roleplaying way What’s powergaming?: -Powergaming is where you give your character unrealistic power lets say like a falcon punch that one hit kills everyone they would not be able to do that What’s your character called?: - Rythain What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Human,Northener What sex are they?: - Male How old are they?: - 21 Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family: - Rythains family were farmers, they lived away from all citys to avoid trouble. When Rythain was young his mother and father taught him how to farm when he was 12 he started to help on the farm regularly he had to harvest and replant all the wheat, and during harvest time he had to help his dad travel to Abresi to sell their crops when Rythain was 18 he wanted to help out in the army so he left but his parents told him if he leaves he cant get a job here again. Rythain left and went to Abresi to try to join the army, he was put into training. Every day after Rythain finished training he sat down on the path without a place to stay and read a book untill some man named joe came up to him and offered to take him in joe cared for him as his own child,he fed him,gave him clothes and a place to stay. What are they like (personality)?: - Rythain is kind and friendly he wants to become part of the army so he can get out of Joes way What are their ambitions?: - To join the army Do they have any special skills?: - Hes good at farming and hes good at thinking fast What are their weaknesses?: - Rythain has a weakness he cant run for to long or he gets to tierd and needs to rest Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - He has brown hair he has a green shirt and trousers they are all muddy and have lots of holes in Anything else you want to say about them?: - His skin is him when he left his family. EDIT:Sorry its not letting me post my skin correctly its just not working its laying out my one i put on minecraft.net sorry about that hope it does not affect this!

Thonthen is a mountain dwarf who loves to fight he lives in city Kal'Azgoth he regulary helps train troops he protected the king for many years he was one of the finest soilders he will do anything to protect the city he lives in and the king hes seen lots of men die in battle he was put into training as a kid then hes skills developed when he was young the city was attacked a orc smashed down the door then his mum pushed Thonthen down a trap door to hide him Thonthen peeked through the gap the orc had a slice in his face in a X shape the orc took he big hit and killed his mum this filled Thonthen with rage when the orc left he swore to his mum who was about to bleed out i promise you i will not let this happen again i will defend this village and the king. Thats my bio is that good enough you think?

Thank you i think iv perfected what hes asked me to i just need to sit down for a couple of hours and right a biography :P

Ill post my app here just so you guys can see feel free to tell me what went wrong dont go soft on me i want you to be kinda harsh so i can get it almost perfect :) Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - Iv role-played on garry's mod a couple of times iv also roleplayed on a minecraft server that had about 25 people on but it got shut down to lack of donations Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - Yes as stated above Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - I have not applied before this is my first ever application How did you hear about us?: -I searched fun role-playing minecraft server i though i would find ones like garrys mod (gangsters and that) But i found one even better! This one with dwarves humans ect What do you think the server will be like? - I think this server will be amazing and friendly and when i log on there will be others in the race i want to be offering me a place to stay and teach me the basics. Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes iv read the rules What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most: Number 7 "When you set up a minecraft skin make sure it suites that role you play" because it would make no sense to be talking to an human and hes minecraft skin is a goblin for example or a animal What is roleplaying?: - Roleplaying is acting in a way that others can join in and help with the flow so everything runs smooth and you don't get a conversation like this "James my dear human we need your help to rally against the elves" then someone says "Why this is just a game..." they take everyone out of the "zone" and cant stop them playing how they like to play What’s metagaming?: - For exsample i see someones minecraft name lets say mine creepyelites and i walk up and say "Hey creepyelites" but he does not know me/met me in a roleplaying style hes just looked up and saw my name and talking in ooc in a roleplaying way What’s powergaming?: -Roleplaying but giving the other person no chance so it could be like this "draw your sword fellow human we will settle this in a duel" and then the other human trys to reason "No sir I would wish not to" then the other guy just say "no we are dueling" then starts to hit him What’s your character called?: - Thonthen What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Dwarve, The Mountain Dwarf What sex are they?: - Male How old are they?: - 27 Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family: - They grew up with their dwarf parents in a mountain like most dwarves and they trained long hard days his childhood was nice and calm no attack had been. What are they like (personality)?: - My Dwarf is a friendly dwarf but if you get on the wrong side of him he will try to fight you he also has a bit of an anger issue (short temper) What are their ambitions?: - To defend his fellow dwarves Do they have any special skills?: - Just a good axe wielder What are their weaknesses?: - Because of his short temper he can easily be annoyed on purpose then "baited" into places he does not want to go without noticing with the only attempt to hurt the other person Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - Hes a dwarf with a brown beard reach just above his waist with a gold band round each and he has some sorts of armor on and he also has his favorite axe on his back Anything else you want to say about them?: - He loves a good old fight he defends his village when ever he can and rushes to an ally's aid when needed I will take any advice i can get :) Oh yes also " Unfortunately, your application has been denied for the following: - Your roleplaying definition was incorrect. -Your definition for powergaming was slightly incorrect. While the definition its self was correct, your example was a little bit off. - Your bio was lacking in subtance. Try and add some back story into your character, as well as lore. If you aren't sure about our lore, you can read up on virtually everything here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Main_Page If you need any help with your definitions, or biography, do not hesitate to pop me a private message; I'd be more than willing to help You may reapply in 24 hours" Thats what he said so if you mark of that it will be great thanks

Yeh I just super badly wanna get on and play :( but i guess iv gotta wait 24 hours and known my luck it will get denied again :( allways denied here ;(

Yes thanks i hope i get in and see you around i was just abit annoyed after 2 hours of making that :L but he did say my power gaming definition was right but example was wrong is there anywhere i can get help with making my applications since im not a good writer?

I think the application requirements are not fair, as of my first time applying i got removed for 1 "Powergaming needs to be correct" then they said "you got power gaming definition right but example is wrong" so its saying i need every little thing right basically and im not much of a story right so i wrote a small bit of information on my guy hoping it would be fine since im allready 1 and half hours through this application. (messaged the admin about getting help with biography) and my roleplay definition was incorrect so i got about 17/20 things right I think surely that would be enough? Who exspects people to get 20/20 ? I think its ALOT over exsessive and people should not be put on so high standards and after watching some youtube videos of this people are saying this servers no good, but i still want to try it and give it a go.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - Creepyelites How old are you?: - 13 What time-zone do you live in?: - UTC±00:Greenwich Mean Time Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - Iv role-played on garry's mod a couple of times iv also roleplayed on a minecraft server that had about 25 people on but it got shut down to lack of donations Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - Yes as stated above Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - I have not applied before this is my first ever application How did you hear about us?: -I searched fun role-playing minecraft server i though i would find ones like garrys mod (gangsters and that) But i found one even better! This one with dwarves humans ect What do you think the server will be like? - I think this server will be amazing and friendly and when i log on there will be others in the race i want to be offering me a place to stay and teach me the basics. Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes iv read the rules What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most: Number 7 "When you set up a minecraft skin make sure it suites that role you play" because it would make no sense to be talking to an human and hes minecraft skin is a goblin for example or a animal What is roleplaying?: - Roleplaying is acting in a way that others can join in and help with the flow so everything runs smooth and you don't get a conversation like this "James my dear human we need your help to rally against the elves" then someone says "Why this is just a game..." they take everyone out of the "zone" and cant stop them playing how they like to play What’s metagaming?: - For exsample i see someones minecraft name lets say mine creepyelites and i walk up and say "Hey creepyelites" but he does not know me/met me in a roleplaying style hes just looked up and saw my name and talking in ooc in a roleplaying way What’s powergaming?: -Roleplaying but giving the other person no chance so it could be like this "draw your sword fellow human we will settle this in a duel" and then the other human trys to reason "No sir I would wish not to" then the other guy just say "no we are dueling" then starts to hit him What’s your character called?: - Thonthen What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Dwarve, The Mountain Dwarf What sex are they?: - Male How old are they?: - 27 Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family: - They grew up with their dwarf parents in a mountain like most dwarves and they trained long hard days his childhood was nice and calm no attack had been. What are they like (personality)?: - My Dwarf is a friendly dwarf but if you get on the wrong side of him he will try to fight you he also has a bit of an anger issue (short temper) What are their ambitions?: - To defend his fellow dwarves Do they have any special skills?: - Just a good axe wielder What are their weaknesses?: - Because of his short temper he can easily be annoyed on purpose then "baited" into places he does not want to go without noticing with the only attempt to hurt the other person Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - Hes a dwarf with a brown beard reach just above his waist with a gold band round each and he has some sorts of armor on and he also has his favorite axe on his back Anything else you want to say about them?: - He loves a good old fight he defends his village when ever he can and rushes to an ally's aid when needed Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - Sorry did not have enough space to upload a back screen shot Also thanks for reading