Hi friend, I see you made your comments above so it is great you have a forum account now! However the edits you have to make are a bit too large and confusing for just comments so I am going to have you remake your application and move this to
For when you are already the best, who bothers with daggers or poisons? Silently ending his victims anywhere and anytime, in the dead of night, or in the middle of the day, he became feared by all.
As such I have little to no magic abilities, aside from basic ones such as blinding or other assassin magics.
-Currently your character is bordering power gaming. I recommend refining his strengths and weaknesses. A character on LoTC needs to have a balanced set in order to play out well for the player of the character as well as the other players around.
he became feared by all.
-Currently your character is unknown to our wold, this may be difficult to claim.
As such I have little to no magic abilities, aside from basic ones such as blinding or other assassin magics.
stumbled upon his savior, a ring. This ring, along with bestowing the user with near-immortality, also showed him the way to escape the prison. However, if he ever took the ring off, or tried to destroy it, he would break the contract he made with the ring, forfeiting his very soul.
a magical sword on his back
He posseses a magical ring that increases his lifespan by several thousand years. However, if he ever takes it off he will break the contract he made with the ring, forfeiting his soul. He possesses large amounts of dexterity and strength, fit for an assassin, but as a result of murdering people for many years, has a very low charisma level, and makes people around him uncomfortable.
-These aspects would not exist in our lore and include magical abilities. Currently you cannot apply with magical abilities or items. As you will need to learn and obtain these in game.
Your character can't be royal/noble/child of a famous person, an important character, come from lands other than those in the server lore or have any form of magical qualities. If you wish to learn magic after being accepted, you may find a teacher in game.
He is from a different continent than Atlas, a large continent by the name of Alagarin
-The Kingdom of Erix is not within our lore and will need to be edited to fit our lore, as well as he cannot wash up into our world as he would of already been living within it.
teleported into Sutica
-Your character would not be able to teleport into areas. Current travel is done by boat, foot, horses, llama caravans, wagon, ect
Farfolk also have a different appearance than your character does currently. I recommend viewing them on our wiki
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Farfolk
-Please feel free to reapply when ready. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord to ask questions or chat with us
https://discord.gg/eySYjqw