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    ~ Greetings Applicant! ~

    Your application has been [Accepted]! As a member of the Application Team,
    I'd like to welcome you to the server as an official member! Please wait patiently
    for an Application Team member to whitelist you. While you wait, you may browse
    the wiki, found here, or you may browse more Human Lore, found here.

     

    If you have the software Discord installed, it is recommended that you join the New
    Player Help Discord Chat, which is where you can be assigned a Player Helper to
    help get you acclimated to the server! The link can be found here.

     


    If you have any questions, feel free to privately message me by clicking
    on my profile and messaging me.

     

    Have a nice day!  

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    ~ Greetings Applicant! ~

    Your application has been [Accepted]! As a member of the Application Team,
    I'd like to welcome you to the server as an official member! Please wait patiently
    for an Application Team member to whitelist you. While you wait, you may browse
    the wiki, found here, or you may browse more Human Lore, found here.

     

    If you have the software Discord installed, it is recommended that you join the New
    Player Help Discord Chat, which is where you can be assigned a Player Helper to
    help get you acclimated to the server! The link can be found here.


    If you have any questions, feel free to privately message me by clicking
    on my profile and messaging me.

     

    Have a nice day!

     

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    Greeting Applicant!

    Your application has been put on [Pending] for the following reasons:

     

    Alright, so before I get into it, I am offering a time extension for you,

    as well as my assistance over forums messages. I am here for you to

    smoothly enter this community with the required knowledge and set-up,

    so if you have ANY questions, please don't hesitate to ask over these forum messages.

    Now, let's get started;

     

    To start off with, you asked why you needed so many roleplay details in your 

    application. The answer is plain and simple; We want to make sure that you have

    the required knowledge about our server before you hop into it! 

     

    Next up, I'd like for you to tweak and balance your character's strengths and

    weaknesses. Did deep into your character's backstory, and think of what strengthens

    him as opposed to any other character, but also what weakens him as opposed to others.

     

    Lastly, I'd like you to use a different skin. Your current one is too modern for 

    LoTC standards. Polyester has not been invented yet. If you're having trouble

    finding a lore appropriate skin, I'd be happy to help you out. You can start by looking

    here for a human skin.

     

    Do not worry, this is not the end! This just means that your application
    does not quite meet our standards. Please make the stated changes within
    48 hours. Failure to do so will result in a denial of your application. To make
    the changes, do not make a new application. Instead, click edit at the bottom
    of the page! 

     

    If you have any questions, feel free to privately message me by clicking
    on my profile and messaging me. Remember, you have 48 hours and

    please  do not make another application.

     

    Have a nice day!

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    ~ Greetings Applicant! ~

    Your application has been [Accepted]! As a member of the Application Team,
    I'd like to welcome you to the server as an official member! Please wait patiently
    for an Application Team member to whitelist you. While you wait, you may browse
    the wiki, found here, or you may browse more Human Lore, found here.

     

    If you have the software Discord installed, it is recommended that you join the New
    Player Help Discord Chat, which is where you can be assigned a Player Helper to
    help get you acclimated to the server! The link can be found here.


    If you have any questions, feel free to privately message me by clicking
    on my profile and messaging me.

     

    Have a nice day!

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    Greetings Applicant!
    Your application has been put on [Pending] for the following reason(s):

     

    Your biography is very well written, but you must include atleast

    1 reference to the lore in your character's biography. The reference you

    use can be anything; A person, place, or thing. Have it tie to your character's

    background in some way. You may find lore to use on the wiki, found here, or,

    more specifically, the human lore page, found here.

     

    This isn't anything about your application in general, but if you'd like your

    character to continue down a road of banditry, I would recommend you take

    a good long read of the rules regarding banditry, found here and here.

     

    Do not worry, this is not the end! This just means that your application
    does not quite meet our standards. Please make the stated changes within
    24 hours. Failure to do so will result in a denial of your application. To make
    the changes, do not make a new application. Instead, click edit at the bottom
    of the page!

     

    If you have any questions, or would like me to review your application again,

    feel free to message me privately either on the forums or in-game. Remember,

    you have 24 hours to make the changes previously mentioned.

     

    Have a nice day!

  6. I won't talk about how a great guy he is and what his personality is like, cause I could just say that to his face. I'll just say that Jallen is very well versed in not only Ascended and Aengulic lore but as well as other Deific Lore, Dark Arts Lore, Creature Lore, and even some Voidal Lore. He's a dedicated person, and really puts forth his 100% into the work he's involved in. A big +1 from me.

  7. Dwalin Irongut sits solemnly in his abode, his mind being swept away with his thoughts. Thoughts of his family, his friends, of his children. However, one place bright thought kept resurfacing amongst the black of the void of his mind. The thought of his Kingdom... His people. The Dwedmar. But, ever so as the dwarf of yore did, he sat at his desk, thumping his tenets and smoking his pipe. But as the old dwarf sat in his own resolve, he pulled out a quill tipped in ink and a few pieces of dried parchment.

     

    “To whomever might find these letters. Whether ye be Dwed, Human, Elf, er Orc. My name is Dwalin Irongut. Son of Grand King Skippy Irongut. Like many of the aged dwarves, I remember a strong Urguan. A proud Urguan. I remember when Frostbeards weren’t slaughtered, and when Kings lasted for more than a few stone months. And while many claim to know what Urguan was, can we really look back at what it could have been? All these kings claiming to do these amazing things! Whether they be for Yemekar, for the Dwedmar, or for Urguan himself. And people seem to be surprised when they go back on their word. Well, I say nae to those who covet the jewels in their crown, or the hilt of their blade, or the pouch of their gold to find their right to rule our home. Now, more than ever, however gone she may be.. Urguan needs a King fit for her throne. I ask that this King, whatever Clan name he bears, that they look to what Urguan could be. For times are gone for honest Dwedmar, and sometimes even far too gone for snakes.” ~ Signed,

    Dwalin Irongut

    Warden of the Aerielian Flame

     

    And with his opinion written, he stamped the letters with the sigil of Clan Irongut, and as he sent away the crows bearing his words, the hope in his eyes diminished. His home is no more.

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    ~ Greetings Applicant! ~

    Your application has been [Accepted]! On behalf of the Application Team,
    I'd like to welcome you to the server as an official member! Please wait patiently
    for an Application Team member to whitelist you. While you wait, you may browse
    the wiki, found here, or you may browse more Human Lore, found here.

     

    If you have the software Discord installed, it is recommended that you join the New
    Player Help Discord Chat, which is where you can be assigned a Player Helper to
    help get you acclimated to the server! The link can be found here.

     

    If you have any questions, feel free to privately message me by clicking
    on my profile and messaging me.

     

    Have a nice day!

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    Greetings Applicant!

    Your application has been put on [Pending] for the following reason(s):

     

    . I would like for you to define your character's strengths and weaknesses a bit

    more. Perhaps dig into your characters backstory and and pull out some more 

    traits from it. Balance the positives with the negatives as well; Have each category

    loosely formed around the other.

     

    Please flesh out your character's ambitions as well. The 'swordsman' line is 

    very cliche. As mentioned previously, you could dig more into your character's

    backstory and traits as to how his ambition should look.

     

    This isn't something about your application in general, but if you would like to

    continue your character down a path of villainy, I would recommend taking a good

    read of the villainy rules, found here. Just a suggestion :)

     


    Do not worry, this is not the end! This just means that your application
    does not quite meet our standards. Please make the stated changes within
    24 hours. Failure to do so will result in a denial of your application. To make
    the changes, do not make a new application. Instead, click edit at the bottom
    of the page!

     


    If you have any questions, or would like me to review your application again,

    feel free to privately message me, either in-game or on the forums. Remember,

    you have 24 hours to make the previously mentioned changes.

     

    Have a nice day.

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