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  1. 5 minutes ago, Luciloo said:

    Looks like the same lore y'all had for the past four years, I don't see any specifics on how weaknesses should be roleplayed, and polymorph still gives an Azdrazi unlimited disguises. There doesn't seem to be any addressing of the obviously broken facets Azdrazi have had since Jake's rewrite.

    keep my name out of ur mouth, 

     

    i like the rewrite, reading it can cause you to see the differences 

  2. MC Name:

             JEEGK

     

    Character's Name:

             Rahtol Wick

     

    Character's Age:

             old

     

    Character's Race:

             Human

     

    Link to your accepted MA:

            https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/175516-kani-sa-jakefsf-becomes-the-third-pillar-men/?tab=comments#comment-1653201

     

    What magic(s) will you be teaching?

             Kani

     

    Describe this magic or a creature as a whole:

             

    Kani is the art of using resonance to manipulate the caster’s environment, more specifically by manipulating passive and active mana. Resonance can be applied to control friction, inertia, and movement. Liquids and gasses being the easiest to reform. The most important part of Kani is the user’s breathing, as it is what allows them to cast their magic. If they cannot breathe, they would be unable to cast.

     

     

    Are there different sections or subsections of magic? Can those be elaborated upon?

             

    N/A

     

     

    Can you give an example of a casting emote, of a spell of your choice?

             

     

    ____ would halt. He began extremely still, carefully catching his balance. Would try his best to cease his rapid breathing, inhaling through his nose slowly. 

     

    ____ began to breathe rythmically. His focus kept him sustained in such a manner and he started to become one with the mana around him.

     

    ____’s eyes shot open, gaining a renewed fervor. His breathing has gotten into the perfect rhythm. His fists at the wrist became engulfed in a ring of roaring flame, which burned quite brightly. 

     

    ____  looked down to the pond before him. With a slow step he’d press his foot against the surface of the water and with a swift exhale the water would allow his foot to rest easily upon its surface. 

     

     

    Can you give an example of a teaching-emote (interacting with another) of a spell of your choice?

             

     

    The student looked to his teacher with a side eye as he’d slowly close his eyes, inhaling through his nose. “Now, release your thoughts. Become one with the world around you.”

     

    ____ took a torch from the wall and began to waff the smoke towards his student, allowing it to fill the room around him. “Now, send it off, like I’ve showed you.”

     

    The student took in another breath, two attempts it would take for him to get into the proper rhythm. After doing so, he’d slowly open his eyes and raise his hands into the smoke and press his flat palms against the seemingly solid matter, before pushing it outwards.

     

    After three successful motions, the student would collapse to his knees with a huff - a laugh escaping ___. “Not bad, not bad. You need to get your breathing down, remain calm - we’re in no rush.”

     

     

    Say your student powergames during or after teaching, how do you reprimand that?

             

    If it is during a lesson or during a battle with me there, I would let them know privately what they've done is incorrect and give them the correct information. If it were to happen when I am not available and someone comes to me in fear that they have PG'd, I would apologize to them and speak to the student OOCly and tell them, again, where they went wrong and help the victim where I can.

     

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

             No

     

    Do you agree to keep the ST updated on the status of your magic app?:

             Yes

     

    Have you applied to teach this magic on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app.

             No

  3. Rahtol Wick knew what day it was, he knew just exactly what was bound to happen this day. Through all the strife and tribulations he was put through by his Father, he could still not see him perish in such a way. The boy ventured far out of reach until the time had come. Next to a tan woman he sat, defeated knowing there was nothing he could do to stop them or his Father. 

     

    "I still think there was a good man shrouded beneath that ego of his, no matter what he did, he was my Father through and through." he wretched out, even though his body told him otherwise.

     

    He began towards the door, readying himself to leave back home to Rubern for the aftermath. There was no anger, there was no hatred, only an aching in his chest he could not fight.

     

    "Perhaps he will become anew in his next life... da?" 

  4. MC Name:

             JEEGK

     

    Character's Name:

             Alwyn

     

    Character's Age:

             stupid old

     

    Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

             human

     

    Transformed form:

             Azdrazi

     

    Creator's MC Name:

             Valayron

     

    Creator's RP Name:

             Tytos the Drake

     

    Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

             

    They are children of Azdromoth, created to serve his will, creatures of man and dragon-kin. These beings have their own form of magic, all persisting around the inner-flame. Such a flame works as their mana-pool, allowing them to utilize a blaze for multiple different spells. The previous magics they knew are all faded from memory, their ability to use them are no more. In harsh weather of strong colds, a Nephilim holds the inability to cast any sorts of magic and in the end, pass away in the icy tundra. Xan's boon takes affect largely upon such dragonkin, as if it drains them from their life 

     

    If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look? 

    They get scales and horns and their eyes turn lizard like when casting or not hidden behind a disguise.

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

             No

     

    Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:

             Yes

     

    Do you understand that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?:

             Yes

     

    Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

             I understand

     

    Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             No

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