Johann
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"UNITY...", recalled the knight Gael after perusing a copy of the missive, whilst trimming and nurturing a bonsai to make up for the DARK KANI he had accumulated throughout the war.
"A dream not so distant now.. Sunforger was right", He admitted.
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before anyone asks about the ta i promise i didnt play the long con i promise i promise i promise
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MC Name:
Geidleth
Character's Name:
Mayelasiol Aen Tarem
Character's Age:
not antiquated not juvenile
Character's Race:
Acaelanite Elf
What magic(s) will you be learning?
Air Evocation
Teacher's MC Name:
NotAPan
Teacher's RP Name:
Vulmir
Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:
n
Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your magic app?:
y
Are you aware that if this magic is shelved, it will be unavailable to use?
y
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News of the fugitive Yokai-at-large quickly reaches Nichijin. The presiding knight Gael passes the missive over to his trusty quartermaster during one of their morning strolls.
"Yare yare Richard... looks like we've got free target practice for our boys. Double our patrols in the Norowareta Mori..." @SacredSource
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- Please redo your explanation of Kani as a magic, you've neglected mentioning Kani involves fusing/manipulating ambient mana with your soul as a fourth source of power, etc.
- Example emotes are lacking. In combative scenarios aggressive resonance involves breathing over all three connection emotes, you've only mentioned it in one.
- Mechanics for teaching emotes are also a bit scuffed, water remains solidified for 2 emotes after hardening and condensing doesn't even achieve the effect you're describing.
Overall I urge you to redo your app as a whole with genuine detail and clarity as what you've written so far is frankly really lacking. I'll have this on pending for the time being but let me know once you've properly read the lore and rectified the mistakes I've mentioned.
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done this before can do it again +1
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Path chosen: Wyrmstalker
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YOU CANT BE ON BOTH SIDES BOY
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Within a Rael'uvuliran meadery an idling Tarem pours through the deputy clerk's accounts of the eclectic yet venerated clan and their exotic doctrines.
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OOC
((MC Name: Geidleth))
((Discord: Geidleth))
((Timezone: GMT))
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What is your name?
May
Why seek membership to the Mages Guild?
Pursuit of power for stewardship of the world, and a yearning to understand its messages and meanings. God's an enigmatic absolute and I'd like to do better.
What arts, if any, do you currently practice?
Non.
What position do you desire to attain upon acceptance?
Apprentice-equivalent, whatever that's called.
When should you be contacted for an interview?
Whenever.
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Looks good, not to be too nerd emoji but just make sure u specify bluefire/combustion both add a tiers' worth of manacost to spells it's applied to unless its t5 in which case it's the same. Small point but it's a p important distinction
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[Air Evocation] [MA] SeanVEVO2
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