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Chorale__

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    Your application has been placed on...

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    -Your application is good, but I would like for you to expand your biography. I like for there to be at least a paragraph or two of backstory.

     

    If you find yourself confused then LotC has a new player Discord where we have helpers in there to help alongside the Application Moderators. Here's a link: https://discord.gg/brPt8We

     

    You have 24 hours from the time I post my reply to make these changes, if you fail to do so then your application will be denied. You can go about doing this by using the [Edit] feature on the bottom left-hand side of your post. If you're denied, then you no longer have to wait to create another application from the time that it's denied. When you make the changes then contact me and I will review the application again. When you're done editing your application for the second time, respond to this thread or PM me via the Forums. 

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. Good luck, and thanks for applying!

  2. Your application has been...

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    I enjoyed reading over your application, and I'm very glad to welcome you to our server! Hold tight, and you'll be implemented as a whitelisted player shortly. While you wait, feel free to browse the forums or the wiki. We also have a New Player Discord, where there are helpers at hand alongside Application Moderators. If you'd like, you can also join our general Discord where you can chat it up with our community.

    Here are the links:

    New Player Discord

    LotC General Discord

     

    Happy RP'ing!

  3. Unfortunately, your application has been...

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    • It's required that you have at least one (1) to two (2) pieces of Lore in your biography. This can be found on the Wiki or in the Lore Subforum.
    • Your powergaming definition is very vague, please provide an example for me.

     

    You may re-apply once you have made the changes required. I would have put this application on pending if you would have had a forum account, and I recommend you create one as you will need one down the road.


    https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

    I encourage you to join this New Player Help Discord, where you can get help on your application from AT members and general Helpers.

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    Your application has been...

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    I enjoyed reading over your application, and I'm very glad to welcome you to our server! Hold tight, and you'll be implemented as a whitelisted player shortly. While you wait, feel free to browse the forums or the wiki. We also have a New Player Discord, where there are helpers at hand alongside Application Moderators. If you'd like, you can also join our general Discord where you can chat it up with our community.

    Here are the links:

    New Player Discord

    LotC General Discord

     

    If you need anything at all, be sure to message me via the Forums or on Discord @ Chorale_#4767. I also recommend that you create a forum account for later on, you'll need it eventually. Happy RP'ing!

  5. Unfortunately, your application has been...

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    • Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are both incorrect.
    • You cannot apply as royalty/nobility, henceforth, the story that Lillithon was born of Gods is not factual, and he cannot be the "King of the Forest".
    • We like for you to have a few pieces of Lore from our Server in your biography. This can be found via the Wiki or the Lore Subforum.
    • We cannot put guest accounts on pending, else that would have been done with you. I recommend creating a Forum account so that you can be put on pending if you make a mistake with your next application.
    • If you need any help at all then you can PM me via the Forums or on Discord @ Chorale_#4767. You can also join our New Player Help Discord, where we have AT Members and General Helpers that can assist you with the application process.

    You may re-apply once you have made the changes required.

  6. Unfortunately, your application has been...

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    • You've failed to make the correct changes in the time period given.

    Thanks for applying, and be sure to re-apply if still interested.

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    Your application has been placed on...

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    -Your metagaming definition is incorrect, and your powergaming definition is very vague. You have the right idea, but I recommend looking at our Wiki definitions, but please do remember to not plagiarize.

     

    If you find yourself confused then LotC has a new player Discord where we have helpers in there to help alongside the Application Moderators. Here's a link: https://discord.gg/brPt8We

     

    You have 24 hours from the time I post my reply to make these changes, if you fail to do so then your application will be denied. You can go about doing this by using the [Edit] feature on the bottom left-hand side of your post. If you're denied, then you no longer have to wait to create another application from the time that it's denied. When you make the changes then contact me and I will review the application again.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. Good luck, and thanks for applying!

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    Unfortunately, your application has been...

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    • Your application looks great, but you cannot descend from royalty/nobility. It's also required that you have at least one (1) to two (2) pieces of Lore in your biography.
    • We cannot put guest accounts on pending, else that would have been done with you. I recommend creating a Forum account so that you can be put on pending if you make a mistake with your next application.
    • You cannot apply with magic.
    • We would like for you to show us your actual Minecraft Skin rather than artwork.

     

    You may re-apply once you have made the changes required.

  9. Your application has been...

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    I enjoyed reading over your application, and I'm very glad to welcome you to our server! Hold tight, and you'll be implemented as a whitelisted player shortly. While you wait, feel free to browse the forums or the wiki. We also have a New Player Discord, where there are helpers at hand alongside Application Moderators. If you'd like, you can also join our general Discord where you can chat it up with our community.

    Here are the links:

    New Player Discord

    LotC General Discord

     

    Happy RP'ing!

  10. Unfortunately, your application has been...

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    • You've failed to make the changes in the required time period provided.

    You may re-apply in six (6) hours.

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    Your application is one of the best well-formed applications I've seen in a while, but there are two (2) things I need you to fix before I can accept you.

    • You cannot apply with your character knowing magic, though you may find a teacher once implemented in game.
    • Your character cannot have any ties with any bloodlines unless you can prove to me you have been given the thumbs-up by the leader of said bloodline to apply with that character. An easy fix to this would just be removing the surname and any ties to the Starbreaker Clan.

    That's all for now. Ping me on this application by doing (@Chorale_) and clicking my name when you're finished editing it, or by the way of Discord which is listed below.

     

    If you find yourself confused then LotC has a new player Discord where we have helpers in there to help alongside the Application Moderators. Here's a link: https://discord.gg/brPt8We

     

    You have twenty-four (24) hours from the time I post my reply to make these changes, if you fail to do so then your application will be denied. You can go about doing this by using the [Edit] feature on the bottom left-hand side of your post. If you're denied, then you must wait three (3) hours to create another application from the time that it's denied. When you make the changes then contact me and I will review the application again.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. Good luck, and thanks for applying!

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    Your application has been placed on...

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    • Your application is good, but I would like at least one to two (1-2) more pieces of Lore in your biography. Lore can be found via the wiki or the lore subforum. 
    • Your skin is not canon to our time period, if you need help finding a skin let me know and I can get you one, or you can ask anyone in the New Player Help Discord.
    • Your powergaming definition is unfinished and therefore considered incorrect. Please provide an example when making edits to your application.

     

    If you find yourself confused then LotC has a new player Discord where we have helpers in there to help alongside the Application Moderators. Here's a link: https://discord.gg/brPt8We

     

    You have 24 hours from the time I post my reply to make these changes, if you fail to do so then your application will be denied. You can go about doing this by using the [Edit] feature on the bottom left-hand side of your post. If you're denied, then you must wait 3 hours to create another application from the time that it's denied. When you make the changes then contact me and I will review the application again.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. Good luck, and thanks for applying!

  13. Your application has been...

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    I enjoyed reading over your application, and I'm very glad to welcome you to our server! Hold tight, and you'll be implemented as a whitelisted player shortly. While you wait, feel free to browse the forums or the wiki. We also have a New Player Discord, where there are helpers at hand alongside Application Moderators. If you'd like, you can also join our general Discord where you can chat it up with our community.

    Here are the links:

    New Player Discord

    LotC General Discord

     

    Happy RP'ing!

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    Unfortunately, your application has been...

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    • Your metagaming definition is plagiarized. Please remember to not do this in future or it will lead to a ban from applying.
    • Your biography has zero (0) references to LotC Lore in it, which can be found on the Wiki or in the Implemented Lore Subforum.
    • I recommend creating a Forum account for the next time you apply, as you won't be instantly denied in that case.

     

    You may re-apply in six (6) hours.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. The Application Team hosts a New Player Help Discord as-well if you are interested in hearing from our Application Moderators, General Helpers, and Community to ask them questions and get help with the application process.

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    Your application has been placed on...

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    • Your application is good, but I noticed that there are zero references to LotC lore in your biography. Lore can be found via the wiki or the lore subforum. 
    • Try to steer away from the stereotype of "Orcs killed my parents" as it's highly overused, think of something creative!
    • Your skin is not fitting with our medieval time-period. If you have issues gathering another skin then don't hesitate to message me with any of the contact methods below, or join the New Player Discord and ask for help there.

     

    If you find yourself confused then LotC has a new player Discord where we have helpers in there to help alongside the Application Moderators. Here's a link: https://discord.gg/brPt8We

     

    You have 24 hours from the time I post my reply to make these changes, if you fail to do so then your application will be denied. You can go about doing this by using the [Edit] feature on the bottom left-hand side of your post. If you're denied, then you must wait 3 hours to create another application from the time that it's denied. When you make the changes then contact me and I will review the application again.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. Good luck, and thanks for applying!

  16. Unfortunately, your application has been...

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    -Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are both incorrect.

    -Your biography has zero references to LotC Lore, which can be found in the Lore Subforum or the Wiki.

    -Let it be known that we cannot put guest applicants on pending, else that would have been done for this application. I recommend creating a Forum account and reapplying so that next time, should you apply again, you won't be denied for a few small errors.

     

    You may re-apply in 6 hours.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. The Application Team hosts a New Player Help Discord as-well if you are interested in hearing from our Application Moderators, General Helpers, and Community to ask them questions and get help with the application process.

  17. Your application has been...

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    I enjoyed reading over your application, and I'm very glad to welcome you to our server! Hold tight, and you'll be implemented as a whitelisted player shortly. While you wait, feel free to browse the forums or the wiki. We also have a New Player Discord, where there are helpers at hand alongside Application Moderators. If you'd like, you can also join our general Discord where you can chat it up with our community.

    Here are the links:

    New Player Discord

    LotC General Discord

    I highly recommend that you create a Forum account as you will need it down the road!

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those.

  18. Your application has been placed on...

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    -There are zero references to LotC lore in your biography. Lore can be found via the wiki or the lore subforum. 

    -Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are both incorrect. They can be found on the LotC Wiki.

    -Your skin isn't canon to the medieval age, please change it.

    Lord of the Craft is a medieval Minecraft Server similar to Lord of the Rings, though we have our own lore-set. Keep this in mind when editing your application for re-reviewal.

     

    If you find yourself confused then LotC has a new player Discord where we have helpers in there to help alongside the Application Moderators. Here's a link: https://discord.gg/brPt8We

     

    You have 24 hours from the time I post my reply to make these changes, if you fail to do so then your application will be denied. You can go about doing this by using the [Edit] feature on the bottom left-hand side of your post. If you're denied, then you must wait 3 hours to create another application from the time that it's denied. When you make the changes then contact me and I will review the application again.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. Good luck, and thanks for applying!

     

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