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Chorale__

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Application Comments posted by Chorale__

  1. There are still a few changes that must be made before I can accept you:

    • The current realm is Atlas, so if your character was born in 1310 then they would be very, very old. He would be dead by this point, should he be a human. The current in-game year is 1658. Everything else looks alright aside from that little error!
  2. Your application has been...

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    I enjoyed reading over your application, and I'm very glad to welcome you to our server! Hold tight, and you'll be implemented as a whitelisted player shortly. While you wait, feel free to browse the forums or the wiki. We also have a New Player Discord, where there are helpers at hand alongside Application Moderators. If you'd like, you can also join our general Discord where you can chat it up with our community.

    Here are the links:

    New Player Discord

    LotC General Discord

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. 

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    Your application has been...

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    I enjoyed reading over your application, and I'm very glad to welcome you to our server! Hold tight, and you'll be implemented as a whitelisted player shortly. While you wait, feel free to browse the forums or the wiki. We also have a New Player Discord, where there are helpers at hand alongside Application Moderators. If you'd like, you can also join our general Discord where you can chat it up with our community.

    Here are the links:

    New Player Discord

    LotC General Discord

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. 

  4. Unfortunately, your application has been...

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    -A lot of your application is copied and pasted, please refrain from this in the future.

     

    I saw your comment, and I'm going to allow you to re-apply in an hour rather than wait the 6 hours.

     

    You may re-apply in 6 hours an hour.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those.

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    Your application has been placed on...

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    -Your application is good, but I noticed that there are zero references to LotC lore in your biography. Lore can be found via the wiki or the lore subforum. 

     

     

    If you find yourself confused then LotC has a new player Discord where we have helpers in there to help alongside the Application Moderators. Here's a link: https://discord.gg/brPt8We

     

    You have 24 hours from the time I post my reply to make these changes, if you fail to do so then your application will be denied. You can go about doing this by using the [Edit] feature on the bottom left-hand side of your post. If you're denied, then you must wait 3 hours to create another application from the time that it's denied. When you make the changes then contact me and I will review the application again.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. Good luck, and thanks for applying!

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    Your application has been placed on...

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    -Your application is good, but I noticed that there are very little references to LotC lore in your biography. Lore can be found via the wiki or the lore subforum. 

     

    If you find yourself confused then LotC has a new player Discord where we have helpers in there to help alongside the Application Moderators. Here's a link: https://discord.gg/brPt8We

     

    You have 24 hours from the time I post my reply to make these changes, if you fail to do so then your application will be denied. You can go about doing this by using the [Edit] feature on the bottom left-hand side of your post. If you're denied, then you must wait 3 hours to create another application from the time that it's denied. When you make the changes then contact me and I will review the application again.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. Good luck, and thanks for applying!

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    Your application has been placed on...

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    -LotC is a fictional and separate realm from the real world, so Ghana or Africa wouldn't be here. So, you couldn't be the Prime Minister's son. 

    -Your skin is not acceptable to our standards, if you need help then you can look in the LotC Skin Archive

    -I noticed that there are very little references to LotC lore in your biography. Lore can be found via the wiki or the lore subforum. 

    *I think that it would be best if you just restart your biography and put more lore from LotC in there!

     

    If you find yourself confused then LotC has a new player Discord where we have helpers in there to help alongside the Application Moderators. Here's a link: https://discord.gg/brPt8We

     

    You have 24 hours from the time I post my reply to make these changes, if you fail to do so then your application will be denied. You can go about doing this by using the [Edit] feature on the bottom left-hand side of your post. If you're denied, then you must wait 3 hours to create another application from the time that it's denied. When you make the changes then contact me and I will review the application again.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. Good luck, and thanks for applying!

  8. Unfortunately, your application has been...

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    -You failed to make the required changes in the given time period.

     

    You may re-apply in 6 hours.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those.

  9. @Geppetio that's fine, I will just ping you.

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    Your application has been...

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    I enjoyed reading over your application, and I'm very glad to welcome you to our server! Hold tight, and you'll be implemented as a whitelisted player shortly. While you wait, feel free to browse the forums or the wiki. We also have a New Player Discord, where there are helpers at hand alongside Application Moderators. If you'd like, you can also join our general Discord where you can chat it up with our community.

    Here are the links:

    New Player Discord

    LotC General Discord

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those.

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    Unfortunately, your application has been...

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    -I think that it's worth mentioning that we cannot put those with Guest forum accounts under pending, lest I would have done so. If you create a forum account and re-apply in the time allotted then you can be placed under pending. Up until then, you'll either be A: Accepted or B: Denied, with no middle ground. Thank you, and have a nice rest of the day!

    -Your powergaming definition is incorrect

    -There are zero pieces of lore in your biography, we like for you to have at least a few. Lore can be found via the Wiki or the Lore Subforum.

     

    You may re-apply in 6 hours.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those.

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    Your application has been...

    gLhYzNj.png

    I enjoyed reading over your application, and I'm very glad to welcome you to our server! Hold tight, and you'll be implemented as a whitelisted player shortly. While you wait, feel free to browse the forums or the wiki. We also have a New Player Discord, where there are helpers at hand alongside Application Moderators. If you'd like, you can also join our general Discord where you can chat it up with our community.

    Here are the links:

    New Player Discord

    LotC General Discord

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. 

  12. Your application has been...

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    I enjoyed reading over your application, and I'm very glad to welcome you to our server! Hold tight, and you'll be implemented as a whitelisted player shortly. While you wait, feel free to browse the forums or the wiki. We also have a New Player Discord, where there are helpers at hand alongside Application Moderators. If you'd like, you can also join our general Discord where you can chat it up with our community.

    Here are the links:

    New Player Discord

    LotC General Discord

     

    -I would like for you to keep one thing in mind though. Elves are cursed with infertility, making it rare for them to even have children, much less birth twins. If you have not already, please read over the Wiki page that we've had made for them to help your emersion!

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those.

  13. Unfortunately, your application has been...

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    -Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are both plagiarised. Please remember to not do this in future or it will lead to a ban from applying.

     

    You may re-apply in 6 hours.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those.

  14. Your application has been...

    gLhYzNj.png

    I enjoyed reading over your application, and I'm very glad to welcome you to our server! Hold tight, and you'll be implemented as a whitelisted player shortly. While you wait, feel free to browse the forums or the wiki. We also have a New Player Discord, where there are helpers at hand alongside Application Moderators. If you'd like, you can also join our general Discord where you can chat it up with our community.

    Here are the links:

    New Player Discord

    LotC General Discord

     

    Happy RP'ing!

  15. Your application has been...

    gLhYzNj.png

    I enjoyed reading over your application, and I'm very glad to welcome you to our server! Hold tight, and you'll be implemented as a whitelisted player shortly. While you wait, feel free to browse the forums or the wiki. We also have a New Player Discord, where there are helpers at hand alongside Application Moderators. If you'd like, you can also join our general Discord where you can chat it up with our community.

    Here are the links:

    New Player Discord

    LotC General Discord

     

    Happy RP'ing!

  16. Your application has been...

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    I enjoyed reading over your application, and I'm very glad to welcome you to our server! Hold tight, and you'll be implemented as a whitelisted player shortly. While you wait, feel free to browse the forums or the wiki. We also have a New Player Discord, where there are helpers at hand alongside Application Moderators. If you'd like, you can also join our general Discord where you can chat it up with our community.

    Here are the links:

    New Player Discord

    LotC General Discord

     

    Happy RP'ing!

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    Your application has been...

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    I enjoyed reading over your application, and I'm very glad to welcome you to our server! Hold tight, and you'll be implemented as a whitelisted player shortly. While you wait, feel free to browse the forums or the wiki. We also have a New Player Discord, where there are helpers at hand alongside Application Moderators. If you'd like, you can also join our general Discord where you can chat it up with our community.

    Here are the links:

    New Player Discord

    LotC General Discord

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. 

  18. Your application has been placed on...

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    -Your application is good, but I noticed that there are no references to LotC lore in your biography. Lore can be found via the wiki or the lore subforum. 

     

    If you find yourself confused then LotC has a new player Discord where we have helpers in there to help alongside the Application Moderators. Here's a link: https://discord.gg/brPt8We

     

    You have 24 hours from the time I post my reply to make these changes, if you fail to do so then your application will be denied. You can go about doing this by using the [Edit] feature on the bottom left-hand side of your post. If you're denied, then you must wait 3 hours to create another application from the time that it's denied. When you make the changes then contact me and I will review the application again.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. Good luck, and thanks for applying!

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    Your application has been...

    gLhYzNj.png

    I enjoyed reading over your application, and I'm very glad to welcome you to our server! Hold tight, and you'll be implemented as a whitelisted player shortly. While you wait, feel free to browse the forums or the wiki. We also have a New Player Discord, where there are helpers at hand alongside Application Moderators. If you'd like, you can also join our general Discord where you can chat it up with our community.

    Here are the links:

    New Player Discord

    LotC General Discord

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. 

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    Your application has been placed on...

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    -I noticed that there are zero references to LotC lore in your biography. Lore can be found via the wiki or the lore subforum. 

    -We are based in the medieval time period, so your character, sadly, cannot speak like it's modern times.

    -The skin that you have is not fit for our time period, if you have trouble finding a farfolk skin then let me know and I can get you one.

    -Add a bit more to your character description.

    -Your biography is too short, please use around 4-5 sentences. Tell us more about your character, where did he live? What did he do as a job? Anything like that.

    -Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are very vague. You can also find these on our Wiki.

     

    If you find yourself confused then LotC has a new player Discord where we have helpers in there to help alongside the Application Moderators. Here's a link: https://discord.gg/brPt8We

     

    You have 24 hours from the time I post my reply to make these changes, if you fail to do so then your application will be denied. You can go about doing this by using the [Edit] feature on the bottom left-hand side of your post. If you're denied, then you must wait 3 hours to create another application from the time that it's denied. When you make the changes then contact me and I will review the application again.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. Good luck, and thanks for applying!

     

  21. Your application has been placed on...

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    -The current in-game year is 1658, so if your character was born in 1631 then he would be 27, not 18. Change your biography accordingly, if he's 18. If you would like to keep it the same then just merely change the age to 27 and you're on your way to acceptance.

     

    If you find yourself confused then LotC has a new player Discord where we have helpers in there to help alongside the Application Moderators. Here's a link: https://discord.gg/brPt8We

     

    You have 24 hours from the time I post my reply to make these changes, if you fail to do so then your application will be denied. You can go about doing this by using the [Edit] feature on the bottom left-hand side of your post. If you're denied, then you must wait 3 hours to create another application from the time that it's denied. When you make the changes then contact me and I will review the application again.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. Good luck, and thanks for applying!

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