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Chorale__

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    Your application has been placed on...

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    -Your application is good, but I noticed that there are very little references to lore, which can be found via the wiki or the lore subforum. Please add a few more references.

    -The current Wood Elf City is called Caras Elder, and the Dominion of Malin is what it resides under. Keep this in mind.

     

    If you find yourself confused then LotC has a new player Discord where we have helpers in there to help alongside the Application Moderators. Here's a link: https://discord.gg/brPt8We

     

    You have 24 hours from the time I post my reply to make these changes, if you fail to do so then your application will be denied. You can go about doing this by using the [Edit] feature on the bottom left-hand side of your post. If you're denied, then you must wait 3 hours to create another application from the time that it's denied. When you make the changes then contact me and I will review the application again.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. Good luck, and thanks for applying!

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    Your application has been...

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    I enjoyed reading over your application, and I'm very glad to welcome you to our server! Hold tight, and you'll be implemented as a whitelisted player shortly. While you wait, feel free to browse the forums or the wiki. We also have a New Player Discord, where there are helpers at hand alongside Application Moderators. If you'd like, you can also join our general Discord where you can chat it up with our community.

    Here are the links:

    New Player Discord

    LotC General Discord

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. 

  3. Unfortunately, your application has been...

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    -Your powergaming definition is incorrect. This is the only thing wrong with your application, and you're only being denied as we cannot put guests under pending. I recommend creating a forum account and re-applying. If you can't, then just re-apply as a guest with the corrected definition and you're on the road to acceptance. Good luck.

     

    You may re-apply in 24 hours.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those.

     
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    Your application has been...

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    I enjoyed reading over your application, and I'm very glad to welcome you to our server! Hold tight, and you'll be implemented as a whitelisted player shortly. While you wait, feel free to browse the forums or the wiki. We also have a New Player Discord, where there are helpers at hand alongside Application Moderators. If you'd like, you can also join our general Discord where you can chat it up with our community.

    Here are the links:

    New Player Discord

    LotC General Discord

    I also recommend that you create a forum account.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. 

     

  5. Your application has been...

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    I enjoyed reading over your application, and I'm very glad to welcome you to our server! Hold tight, and you'll be implemented as a whitelisted player shortly. While you wait, feel free to browse the forums or the wiki. We also have a New Player Discord, where there are helpers at hand alongside Application Moderators. If you'd like, you can also join our general Discord where you can chat it up with our community.

    Here are the links:

    New Player Discord

    LotC General Discord

     

    Happy RP'ing!

  6. Your application has been...

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    I enjoyed reading over your application, and I'm very glad to welcome you to our server! Hold tight, and you'll be implemented as a whitelisted player shortly. While you wait, feel free to browse the forums or the wiki. We also have a New Player Discord, where there are helpers at hand alongside Application Moderators. If you'd like, you can also join our general Discord where you can chat it up with our community.

    Here are the links:

    New Player Discord

    LotC General Discord

     

    Happy RP'ing!

  7. Your application has been placed on...

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    -Your powergaming definition is very vague. If you are confused, then feel free to check our Wiki, where you will find the definition and a few examples.

    -Add to your character description. Describe your character, what are his likes/dislikes, what did he like to do, etc?

    -Keep in mind that we are in Atlas. Your character could not have been born that long ago and only be 18. 

     

    If you find yourself confused then LotC has a new player Discord where we have helpers in there to help alongside the Application Moderators. Here's a link: https://discord.gg/brPt8We

     

    You have 24 hours from the time I post my reply to make these changes, if you fail to do so then your application will be denied. You can go about doing this by using the [Edit] feature on the bottom left-hand side of your post. If you're denied, then you must wait 3 hours to create another application from the time that it's denied. When you make the changes then contact me and I will review the application again.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. Good luck, and thanks for applying!

  8. Your powergaming definition is still off. If you click on the link I sent it will send you to our Wiki page on powergaming. Once you get that, you'll be good to go. I've just got to make sure you know what it is and that you know not to do it!

     

    @Magnolia

  9. Your application has been placed on...

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    -Your application is fantastic, but I noticed that your metagaming and powergaming definitions are a bit vague. If you can, provide examples of each so that I know that you are fully aware of what they are.

     

    If you find yourself confused then LotC has a new player Discord where we have helpers in there to help alongside the Application Moderators. Here's a link: https://discord.gg/brPt8We

     

    You have 24 hours from the time I post my reply to make these changes, if you fail to do so then your application will be denied. You can go about doing this by using the [Edit] feature on the bottom left-hand side of your post. If you're denied, then you must wait 3 hours to create another application from the time that it's denied. When you make the changes then contact me and I will review the application again.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. Good luck, and thanks for applying!

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    Your application has been...

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    I enjoyed reading over your application, and I'm very glad to welcome you to our server! Hold tight, and you'll be implemented as a whitelisted player shortly. While you wait, feel free to browse the forums or the wiki. We also have a New Player Discord, where there are helpers at hand alongside Application Moderators. If you'd like, you can also join our general Discord where you can chat it up with our community.

    Here are the links:

    New Player Discord

    LotC General Discord

     

    -I do have a side note for you, Renatus is a human Kingdom, and so is Haense. They're not cities! Keep that in mind, my apologies if the lore seemed confusing.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. 

  11. Your application has been...

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    I enjoyed reading over your application, and I'm very glad to welcome you to our server! Hold tight, and you'll be implemented as a whitelisted player shortly. While you wait, feel free to browse the forums or the wiki. We also have a New Player Discord, where there are helpers at hand alongside Application Moderators. If you'd like, you can also join our general Discord where you can chat it up with our community.

    Here are the links:

    New Player Discord

    LotC General Discord

     

    Happy RP'ing!

  12. Your application has been placed on...

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    -Your character cannot be known as the "Divine Protector of the Paladins" as it's magic-related. Now, if you wanted to get into magic once you're accepted into the server then that's completely at your leisure.

    -Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are vague. If you're confused then click on the links I provided but do not copy and paste them. I also recommend adding an example or two so that I know that you know what you're talking about. It's not required but recommended.

     

    If you find yourself confused then LotC has a new player Discord where we have helpers in there to help alongside the Application Moderators. Here's a link: https://discord.gg/brPt8We

     

    You have 24 hours from the time I post my reply to make these changes, if you fail to do so then your application will be denied. You can go about doing this by using the [Edit] feature on the bottom left-hand side of your post. If you're denied, then you must wait 3 hours to create another application from the time that it's denied. When you make the changes then contact me and I will review the application again.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. Good luck, and thanks for applying!

  13. Your application has been...

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    I enjoyed reading over your application, and I'm very glad to welcome you to our server! Hold tight, and you'll be implemented as a whitelisted player shortly. While you wait, feel free to browse the forums or the wiki. We also have a New Player Discord, where there are helpers at hand alongside Application Moderators. If you'd like, you can also join our general Discord where you can chat it up with our community.

    Here are the links:

    New Player Discord

    LotC General Discord

     

    Happy RP'ing!

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    -Your powergaming and metagaming definitions are plagiarized, please refrain from doing this or it may result in a ban from applying. You may re-apply in 6 hours.

    -When you re-apply, be sure to lengthen your biography a little bit and include some of our server lore. This can be found via the Wiki or the lore subforum. Also, find a skin that is fitting to our era, please. If you require help in doing this when you re-apply, let me know.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. Good luck, and thanks for applying!

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    -You've failed to make the required changes, so, therefore, I am going to be denying this application.

    Please reapply in 3 hours with the correct modifications if you're still interested. 

     

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    Your application has been placed on...

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    -I noticed that there are zero references to LotC lore in your biography. Lore can be found via the 

    wiki or the lore subforum. 

    -Tell me more about your character in his description, what does he like/dislike?

    -Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are quite vague, expand on them, please. Maybe add some examples too!

     

    If you find yourself confused then LotC has a new player Discord where we have helpers in there to help alongside the Application Moderators. Here's a link: https://discord.gg/brPt8We

     

    You have 24 hours from the time I post my reply to make these changes, if you fail to do so then your application will be denied. You can go about doing this by using the [Edit] feature on the bottom left-hand side of your post. If you're denied, then you must wait 3 hours to create another application from the time that it's denied. When you make the changes then contact me and I will review the application again.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. Good luck, and thanks for applying!

     

     

  17. Your application has now been...

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    I enjoyed reading over your application, and I'm very glad to welcome you to our server! Hold tight, and you'll be implemented as a whitelisted player shortly. While you wait, feel free to browse the forums or the wiki. We also have a New Player Discord, where there are helpers at hand alongside Application Moderators. If you'd like, you can also join our general Discord where you can chat it up with our community.

    Here are the links:

    New Player Discord

    LotC General Discord

     

    I hope to see you around, happy RP'ing!

  18. Your application has been placed on...

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    -Your application is great! However, I cannot accept you until you have read the rules. Please read the rules and let me know when you have.

    -I also noticed that your powergaming definition is slightly blunt, if you could go more into detail and maybe even provide an example that would be fantastic.

     

    If you find yourself confused then LotC has a new player Discord where we have helpers in there to help alongside the Application Moderators. Here's a link: https://discord.gg/brPt8We

     

    You have 24 hours from the time I post my reply to make these changes, if you fail to do so then your application will be denied. You can go about doing this by using the [Edit] feature on the bottom left-hand side of your post. If you're denied, then you must wait 3 hours to create another application from the time that it's denied. When you make the changes then contact me and I will review the application again.

     

    If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. Good luck, and thanks for applying!

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