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  1. Cornivore

    AnnaNicole20

    Changed Status to Under Review You are almost there, but could use some help. The first two things that are obvious to me, is that you dont quite understand the definitions of Powergaming or Metagaming, I would request that you please fix them and if you need help the wiki can help. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page The second thing is your bio is a little too short for my liking, I would request that you please add onto it, maybe add a bit more lore into it if you could, if you need help heres the wikihttps://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page The third thing is that your interesting facts are not sentences they are just traits, could you make them into a sentence . (Also btw Elves are adults at 50 so 20 is quite young for an elf.) (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4
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    TheFarlander

    You have failed to fix the few changes I asked you to fix, you may re apply in 24 hours.
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    kateycat

    Changed Status to Under Review If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4
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    TheFarlander

    Changed Status to Under Review You are almost there you just need a little bit of help. Your metagame definition and powergame definition is both off, I would request you look over it once more and fix it, if you need help the wiki is here for you.https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page Your name is The Farlander, I dont know if you really want that to be your name, so I think it might be best to give a real name example John Snow. Your Biography is way too short, and there is no lore in it that I can tell, if you need some help the wiki can help you to add onto your biography. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4
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    Blanked_Space

    If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4
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    Blanked_Space

    You are almost there, you just need a little bit of help. The first thing I notice is, you say she is from this noble family pure bred, Im guessing. When you start on the server you cannot be noble until you are accepted and on the server, I request that you please change the wording for that since she cannot be noble. The second thing is the interesting facts I think you might be able to make them into sentences and they would be perfect. This is just a side note, but in elf lore the persona once above 50 they are considered adults, so I just wanted to make you aware because 19 is quite young and is considered a child. (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4
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    Blanked_Space

    Changed Status to Under Review
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    endermanthecool

    Changed Status to Under Review You are almost there but you could use a little help. Your biography is way too short, and there is no actual lore from the server, I request that you add some more. Also for your interesting facts I would request you make them into sentences. (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4
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    brikie

    Changed Status to Accepted
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    brikie

    If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4
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    brikie

    Changed Status to Under Review You are so you just need a little bit of help. The first thing I have noticed is your metagaming definition is not quite what it could be, I would request that you revisit it, and look to making it more refined the wiki https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page can help you with it. The second and final thing is, your interesting facts are just traits, they need to be in a sentence form. For example He is very pacifist due to his religion work. If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.)
  12. “And the winner of the auction is @MinionManXDD” Once you pay me the 3k minas its yours to evict.
  13. Farm House For Sale Act Now! You have the Next two Saints Hours to Buy it. (x164, z-1106) The Price Starts At 1,000 Minas.
  14. “It is sold to the highest bidder, the young man in black in the back.” *Jacques would say awaiting his payment so that he could hand the keys over.* The deal is done @Pond won the bidding with 4k minas.
  15. You Have One Hour To Buy Your Next Castle. The Bidding Starts Now At 1000 Minas. Act Now Bid Fast.
  16. Ulric Grimlee seems confused. "Don't think my village of Nordengrad rebelled, seems someones spreading bullshit."
  17. Issued and confirmed by Ulric Grimlee and Kjartan Arden On the 14th of Edvard’s Day, 1682 With the recent events being as they are, a decision has been made. The fierce Clan Grimlee, and the noble Clan Arden, deem it fit to take a step in the right direction, by unifying those of the Grimlee Clan and of the Ardenin Clan in a marital alliance. Hence, the marriage of Xalid Arden and Rebekka Grimlee has been decided and set in stone. There will be a momentous celebration of their unification, as their coming together is a turning point in the clan relations in our fine city, and will undoubtedly bring Nordengrad towards a more positive, harmonious future. We appreciate the support of you, our countrymen, and would like to congratulate the soon-to-be-wed couple. Writ En Namen De Kjartan Arden, Chieftain of the Ardens, Marshal of Nordengrad Ulric Grimlee, Cheiftan of the Grimlee Clan, First Artisan of Nordengrad
  18. Cornivore For Application Team!

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    _xXxAnimalxXx_

    (note: They Have read the rules.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw
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    _xXxAnimalxXx_

    Changed Status to Under Review
  21. If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw
  22. Changed Status to Under Review You are almost there, only a few things left to fix. (Please do so in 24 hours) I. Your powergaming definition is almost there, slightly incorrect, but I think you can fix it, heres the wiki for some help: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting II. If you need any help feel free to contact me in-game, on the Forums, or in New Player Discord:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw
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