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• You must include at least one valid server Lore Reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race, family, a date or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in, the religion they follow or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the LotC Wiki.

You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. 

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

• Please try to correct the Spelling & Grammar across your application before you submit any changes. It doesn’t need to be perfect but it’s best if your application is as easy to read and understand as possible.
• Your Powergaming and Metagaming definitions are incorrect. Please refer to our wiki page on metagaming and powergaming for the server’s accepted definitions, just keep in mind that plagiarism is not tolerated.
• Lord of the Craft is set in a fantasy world with it’s own nations, history and geography – it isn’t at all like the real world. Any information you include in your character’s Backstory must fit with the server’s lore. This, of course, means that your character cannot be from Germany. You need to look at the server’s wiki or take a look around the server as a wandering soul (a non-whitelisted player) to get an idea of the server’s setting before you make any changes.
• You must include at least one valid server Lore Reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race, family, a date or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in, the religion they follow or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the LotC Wiki.
• Your character’s Background is too vague and doesn’t give a good enough idea of what your character and their past has been like. Please extend this to at least two decent sized paragraphs. You could include more information on things such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family, profession and any other important events that have happened to them.
• You need an appropriate and realistic Name that makes sense in the world of LotC. This is not meant to be your username, but the name of the character you create.
• Your character’s Description should consist of full sentences.
• You must include at least one clear Flaw in your character’s personality traits/quirks.
• Your character’s Appearance does not fit with the server lore for humans because humans don’t have red eyes like in your character description or purple eyes like in your skin. Your character description needs to match your skin anyway. 
• Your character’s Skin does not fit LotC’s medieval theme. You will need to change this before you can be accepted onto the server. If you’re having trouble finding one, feel free to check out the LotC Skin Archive for use and inspiration!
• Try and develop your response to the Roleplay Scenario more. Your character’s speech should seem natural and realistic but at the moment it seems a little robotic and not how somebody would actually speak. Also add something more than just speech to this, such as describing the manner or tone in which your character is speaking or something they are doing at the same time.

You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. 

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

Welcome to LOTC! As soon as this is posted you should be whitelisted on the server. Contact me or make a /creq in game if there’s any issues with this.

If you’d like some help in-game, you’re welcome to contact me or another Community Team Member. You can even ask for a Wilven Monk to guide your character from Cloud Temple!

A few resources you might find useful are the LotC Wiki, New Player Discord and New Player Guide. If you ever need help in the future you can also send me a message on discord. My account is Aqua#5363.

Welcome to LOTC! As soon as this is posted you should be whitelisted on the server. Contact me or make a /creq in game if there’s any issues with this.

If you’d like some help in-game, you’re welcome to contact me or another Community Team Member. You can even ask for a Wilven Monk to guide your character from Cloud Temple!

A few resources you might find useful are the LotC Wiki, New Player Discord and New Player Guide. If you ever need help in the future you can also send me a message on discord. My account is Aqua#5363.

You have failed to make the required changes within 24 hours.

Please make the changes below in your next application.

• The Powergaming definition that you’ve given is a really good example of one of the common definitions of the term, but doesn’t match the definition of powergaming that we use on the server. I’d recommend checking out our wiki page on powergaming to find LotC’s accepted definition (just remember to use your own words).
• Your character’s Appearance does not fit with the server lore for humans who’s range of hair colours is limited to the same range you can see in real life humans (e.g. browns, blondes, reds, etc). This means you’ll have to change your skin as well to fit your altered character description. If you’re having trouble finding one, feel free to check out the LotC Skin Archive for use and inspiration!
• It’d be best to remove the part of your backstory that says your character helped build back the city after a raid in Fenn. This is because it’s a pretty big event for a city to have to be rebuilt/fixed up majorly and so your backstory might not align with the actual history of the city.

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever, my discord is Aqua#5363. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

You may reapply at any time.

You have failed to make the required changes within 24 hours.

Please make the changes below in your next application.

• Please try to correct the Spelling & Grammar across your application before you submit any changes (mainly in the roleplay scenario). It doesn’t need to be perfect but it’s best if your application is as easy to read and understand as possible.
• The Halflings are a race of small folk who are similar to the hobbits from Lord of the Rings, not a cross of two races such as half-elf and half-human. The name ‘halfling’ is in reference to their small size rather than to their heritage. Please check out the wiki page on halflings for more information and either change your character’s race or backstory to reflect this. 
• Your character’s Background is a little on the vague side. Please extend this to at least two decent sized paragraphs and expand more on their past. You could include more information on things such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family, profession and any other important events that have happened to them.
• You must include at least one valid server Lore Reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race, family, a date or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in, the religion they follow or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the LotC Wiki.
• Unfortunately your character cannot have Steeled their body, as adding metal or artificial parts to your body is a complex form of magic in the server lore and all magical items or knowledge must be obtained in game through roleplay. You will need to change your character’s skin to reflect this. If you’re having trouble finding one, feel free to check out the LotC Skin Archive for use and inspiration!
• You must include at least one clear Flaw in your character’s personality traits/quirks. The fear of being hurt isn’t really a flaw as this is something everyone has and is actually beneficial. Try to emphasise your flaw more. For example, your character might be so afraid of being hurt that he is a coward and will actively seek to place himself out of any situation that has even a small risk of danger.

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever, my discord is Aqua#5363. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

You may reapply at any time.

Welcome to LOTC! As soon as this is posted you should be whitelisted on the server. Contact me or make a /creq in game if there’s any issues with this.

If you’d like some help in-game, you’re welcome to contact me or another Community Team Member. You can even ask for a Wilven Monk to guide your character from Cloud Temple!

A few resources you might find useful are the LotC Wiki, New Player Discord and New Player Guide. If you ever need help in the future you can also send me a message on discord. My account is Aqua#5363.

• Unfortunately your character cannot be part of any existing Guilds/Orders/Etc prior to you joining the server. This is because these are all player run and organised and so you have to join them through appropriate roleplay once you’ve been whitelisted onto the server. If you’ve already received permission to say that your character is a member of the Sedan Watch from its leader, you can ask them to send me a message either here on the forums or through my discord saying that they’ve given you permission to include this in your character’s backstory. Otherwise, you can always say that your character aspires to become part of or is looking for the Sedan Watch and then seek out the characters in charge of the organisation in game through roleplay.  

You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. 

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

Welcome to LOTC! As soon as this is posted you should be whitelisted on the server. Contact me or make a /creq in game if there’s any issues with this.

If you’d like some help in-game, you’re welcome to contact me or another Community Team Member. You can even ask for a Wilven Monk to guide your character from Cloud Temple!

A few resources you might find useful are the LotC Wiki, New Player Discord and New Player Guide. If you ever need help in the future you can also send me a message on discord. My account is Aqua#5363.

• The Powergaming definition that you’ve given is a really good example of one of the common definitions of the term, but doesn’t match the definition of powergaming that we use on the server. I’d recommend checking out our wiki page on powergaming to find LotC’s accepted definition (just remember to use your own words).
• Your character’s Appearance does not fit with the server lore for humans who’s range of hair colours is limited to the same range you can see in real life humans (e.g. browns, blondes, reds, etc). This means you’ll have to change your skin as well to fit your altered character description. If you’re having trouble finding one, feel free to check out the LotC Skin Archive for use and inspiration!
• It’d be best to remove the part of your backstory that says your character helped build back the city after a raid in Fenn. This is because it’s a pretty big event for a city to have to be rebuilt/fixed up majorly and so your backstory might not align with the actual history of the city.

You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. 

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

Welcome to LOTC! As soon as this is posted you should be whitelisted on the server. Contact me or make a /creq in game if there’s any issues with this.

If you’d like some help in-game, you’re welcome to contact me or another Community Team Member. You can even request a Wilven Monk to guide your character around the server!

A few resources you might find useful are the LotC Wiki, New Player Discord and New Player Guide. If you ever need help in the future you can also send me a message on discord. My account is Aqua#5363.