Aquaquean

Ø Please try and correct your spelling and grammar across your application before you resubmit it. Ø Your powergaming definition does not quite match the server’s definition of powergaming. Please refer to our wiki page on Powergaming for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarize). Ø You must include at least one server lore reference in your character biography (apart from your character’s race or family, or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use. Ø Please try and expand your character’s biography to at least two decent sized paragraphs. You’re nearly there however there are a few changes that you must make to your application before you can be whitelisted. You have 24 hours to make the changes above. Once you’ve finished editing your application, shoot me a message here on the forums or through discord and I’ll take another look. You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Application Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities. If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Application Team members.

Changed Status to Under Review

Changed Status to Denied

The 24 hours is up, however you may reapply immediately. Please make the changes below in your next application. Ø Please expand your character biography to at least two decent sized paragraphs. Ø Unfortunately your character cannot know any magic upon joining. Once you have been whitelisted you can look for a magic teacher in game. Ø Due to your characters age, it is not possible for them to have been born in Ker’nor, as this is a city from a past map which existed after your character was born. If you do not wish to change your age to fit being born in that city, please look for cities that existed during the map Anthos.  Ø Please try and correct the grammar and spelling in your application before you resubmit. If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Application Team members.

Changed Status to Denied

The 24 hours is up, however you may reapply immediately. Please make the changes below in your next application. Ø Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are both incorrect. Please revise these and try to add some examples too. Refer to our LOTC Metagaming & Powergaming wiki pages for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarize) Ø Your character does not fit into the world and lore of LotC. You must not reference out of character things (such as Hollywood) during roleplay on the server or in your application. Also, gnomes are currently not a race/creature on LotC. Ø You must include at least one server lore reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race/family or the name of one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use. As far as I am aware, the Hall of the Mountain Kings is not currently a place in the lore. If you think I’m mistaken, you can contact me. Ø Your character’s interesting facts must be things that are roleplay friendly. Pvp and griefing are not concepts that are recognised in roleplay on LotC, however, fighting and raiding are. Try and change your character’s traits to be something that is interesting and unique to them. Ø You must include a character flaw in your interesting facts. A flaw should be something to do with the character’s personality/behaviour. Ø Your character description should be used to give a detailed description of the physical attributes of your character. This could include their hair colour, eye colour and notable features, such as scars or tattoos (if any). Please edit this. Ø Your character’s biography should not be written in the form of a story or diary entry. This field should be for including some brief information about the character, such as where they were born, any interesting events that happened to them in the past and perhaps a little about their personality. Ø While it is not necessary to change this, I wanted to make sure that you are aware that your character’s age means that they will be considered a child in most elven cultures. An elf is usually only considered an adult at the age of 50. Ø Your current biography does not make sense and is not believable. That many woman would not be standing around on the top of a mountain watching your naked character. This is also probably not relevant in an overview of your character’s life, so I would advise you to remove it. Ø Please try and correct your grammar across your application so that it is easier to read. If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Application Team members.

Changed Status to Pending

Ø Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are both incorrect. Please revise these and try to add some examples too. Refer to our LOTC Metagaming & Powergaming wiki pages for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarize) Ø Your character does not fit into the world and lore of LotC. You must not reference out of character things (such as Hollywood) during roleplay on the server or in your application. Also, gnomes are currently not a race/creature on LotC. Ø You must include at least one server lore reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race/family or the name of one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use. As far as I am aware, the Hall of the Mountain Kings is not currently a place in the lore. If you think I’m mistaken, you can contact me. Ø Your character’s interesting facts must be things that are roleplay friendly. Pvp and griefing are not concepts that are recognised in roleplay on LotC, however, fighting and raiding are. Try and change your character’s traits to be something that is interesting and unique to them. Ø You must include a character flaw in your interesting facts. A flaw should be something to do with the character’s personality/behaviour. Ø Your character description should be used to give a detailed description of the physical attributes of your character. This could include their hair colour, eye colour and notable features, such as scars or tattoos (if any). Please edit this. Ø Your character’s biography should not be written in the form of a story or diary entry. This field should be for including some brief information about the character, such as where they were born, any interesting events that happened to them in the past and perhaps a little about their personality. Ø While it is not necessary to change this, I wanted to make sure that you are aware that your character’s age means that they will be considered a child in most elven cultures. An elf is usually only considered an adult at the age of 50. Ø Your current biography does not make sense and is not believable. That many woman would not be standing around on the top of a mountain watching your naked character. This is also probably not relevant in an overview of your character’s life, so I would advise you to remove it. Ø Please try and correct your grammar across your application so that it is easier to read. It appears that you have not read the rules before applying. Please read up on the rules and the application guidelines before you edit your application. You have 24 hours to make the changes above. Once you’ve finished editing your application, shoot me a message here on the forums or through discord and I’ll take another look. You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Application Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities. If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Application Team members.

Changed Status to Under Review

Changed Status to Accepted

I’m happy to be the first to welcome you to LOTC! As soon as this is posted, you should be whitelisted onto the server. Contact me or make an /atreq in game if there’s any issues with whitelisting. Feel free to browse the wiki , and you can also join our New Player Discord, where myself and the Application team as a whole can answer any questions you might have. There, you’ll also be able to meet other server players and learn about new roleplay opportunities for all character races! If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Application Team members.

Changed Status to Pending

Ø Please expand your character biography to at least two decent sized paragraphs. Ø Unfortunately your character cannot know any magic upon joining. Once you have been whitelisted you can look for a magic teacher in game. Ø Due to your characters age, it is not possible for them to have been born in Ker’nor, as this is a city from a past map which existed after your character was born. If you do not wish to change your age to fit being born in that city, please look for cities that existed during the map Anthos. Ø Please try and correct the grammar and spelling in your application before you resubmit. You’re nearly there however there are a few changes that you must make to your application before you can be whitelisted. You have 24 hours to make the changes above. Once you’ve finished editing your application, shoot me a message here on the forums or through discord and I’ll take another look. You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Application Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities. If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Application Team members.

Changed Status to Under Review

Changed Status to Accepted

Changed Status to Under Review I’m happy to be the first to welcome you to LOTC! As soon as this is posted, you should be whitelisted onto the server. Contact me or make an /atreq in game if there’s any issues with whitelisting. Feel free to browse the wiki , and you can also join our New Player Discord, where myself and the Application team as a whole can answer any questions you might have. There, you’ll also be able to meet other server players and learn about new roleplay opportunities for all character races! If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Application Team members.

Changed Status to Pending

Ø You must include at least one character flaw in your interesting facts/traits. Ø You mentioned in your character’s biography that Ragnar’s father told him stories about Aenguls and Daemons, however, followers of the Red Faith don’t believe in either of those beings and very few people even know that they exist. Because of how unlikely it would be for your character’s father to have this knowledge, it would be best if you could change this. You’re nearly there however there are a few changes that you must make to your application before you can be whitelisted. You have 24 hours to make the changes above. Once you’ve finished editing your application, shoot me a message here on the forums or through discord and I’ll take another look. You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Application Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities. If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Application Team members.

Changed Status to Under Review

Changed Status to Accepted

I’m happy to be the first to welcome you to LOTC! As soon as this is posted, you should be whitelisted onto the server. Contact me or make an /atreq in game if there’s any issues with whitelisting. Feel free to browse the wiki , and you can also join our New Player Discord, where myself and the Application team as a whole can answer any questions you might have. There, you’ll also be able to meet other server players and learn about new roleplay opportunities for all character races! If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Application Team members.

Ø Your metagaming definition is partially correct, however metagaming can apply to more than just fights. Please expand on your current definition. Refer to the LOTC Metagaming & Powergaming wiki pages to help you find the most correct information. (Just keep in mind not to plagiarize) Ø Please extend each of your character’s interesting facts to a five word sentence at least. Your application was good, but there were just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through discord once you’ve made said changes, and I’ll take another look at your application. The server wiki page has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer back to this. You can also join our New Player Discord - Where you can ask questions to our Application Team, and meet other server players. If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Application Team members.

Changed Status to Pending

Changed Status to Under Review Ø Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are partially correct, however they are vague and lacking in detail. Please add more to these (Maybe examples too), and refer to our LOTC Metagaming & Powergaming wiki pages for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarize) Ø You must include at least one flaw in your character's interesting facts/traits. Having below-average strength isn’t really a character flaw, however I noticed that you included some good flaws in your character biography. Perhaps you could use one of them in your character’s interesting facts/traits. You should also extend these traits to at least five word sentences. Your application was good, but there were just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through discord once you’ve made said changes, and I’ll take another look at your application. The server wiki page has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer back to this. You can also join our New Player Discord - Where you can ask questions to our Application Team, and meet other server players. If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Application Team members.

Changed Status to Accepted