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The Exemplar

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    Discord: The Exemplar#3640
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using OOC knowledge IC
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Chasing success/reward over roleplay
    Status: Denied

 Dorven Wimmel is a Wood elf though he was raised alongside the high elves. Dorven lived in a town called VeilRock which was an enormous rock where the high elves lived atop and the wood elves lived underneath connected with the trees. Dorven was a top tier archer in VeilRock and one of the best strategists there was in Aramoore (The Island VeilRock Existed). While Dorven was a natural learner his skills weren’t immediate but rather the doings of his fathers officials to create an unmatched king. His father, king of the underside of VeilRock, had been training Dorven since birth.  House Wimmel was the ruling throne of the underside of VeilRock and Dorven was the heir to the throne. Although Dorven was grateful for his opportunity to be named king he couldn't help to think that his life could be more than just ruling half a rock. Due to this Dorven left VeilRock and started his journey to sea. His journey to sea took much longer than expected (4 years) and Dorven has lost his old noble ways and become more of an arm for hire. Dorven had learned unconventional ways of keeping afloat and became a wanderer to find his true path of greatness. Eventually find a port and leaving to the Sutica Harbor to find his path.

 

Age; 29

Race; Wood Elf

 

Strengths:

Archery

Strategy 

Hunting

Woodwork

Speech
Stealth
Natural Learner

 

Weaknesses:

Metal/HighEnd Stone Works
Judgemental

Holds Grudges 

Not Very Strong

Easily Distracted
Always in a rush

 

Character Name: Dorven Wimmel
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 29
Physical Description: Tall, White Haired' Wears Cloth clothing with Strong leather protecting vital parts such as hands, knee, elbows etc. Green Cape
Roleplay Scenario:

Looks down upon the man and gives a slight grin, "Hey there I have come hoping to find my path and find adventure" pauses "Which way are the nearest woods" 

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Changed Status to Under Review

Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Your Character Biography states that your character is royalty. This is not allowed!
  • Your character name does not fit that of an elf. Please look up some elven name generators to find something!
  • You are only allowed to select an already existing settlement for your character to be from -- not VeilRock or Aramoore. 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, capitalization and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.  https://app.grammarly.com/
  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race, as your character's skin is most comparable to a high elf. Wood elves are darker skinned (tan) and do not have white hair. Please fix this accordingly!
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  • Your Physical Description does not match that of a high elf.

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below ♥

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ AudTheOdd#1560]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message AudryTheOddity to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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