marimbamonk

*As Brunhyldir passes Kal'Urguan, he hears the dwarf crying the news.* My heart goes out to all who shall miss this noble man. An for the villain who killed him... may he have to pay for his crime.

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Your application was.... You got some things right, but here are others you missed: • Your definition of meta-gaming and power-gaming are not correct. • "White" is not a race. There is either Human, Orc, Dwarf, or Elf. • There is only Aegis. Imagine Aegis as being a planet. You cannot be from another planet. • Aegis is not a city. It is a world. • Your character needs a better biography... Your house burned down and you moved to Aegis is not a good back round to go off of. Make up something more interesting. * Feel free to read some of the implemented apps for ideas on what sort of detail we're looking for, but do not plagiarize. Fix the things I mentioned and you'll have a much better shot at getting into the server! You seem very nice. Please reapply after 48 hours. Feel free to PM me if you have any questions!

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Please reapply after 48 hours.

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Your application was... You got some things right, but here are some you missed: • Your definition of meta-gaming is wrong, and you need to put in a definition for power-gaming. I recommend looking them up online, then transcribing it into your own words. • You think you lost your memory? Get a story straight. Write your biography in 3rd person, saying what your childhood was like, how you lost your memory, etc. What elves helped you and why? • Your ambitions could be a little higher. • Your answer to the bandit scenario wasn't an answer. Who would you help? • You have no avatar, and thus no skin for me to check. Please attach your skin to your document. Fix the things I mentioned and you'll have a much greater chance of being accepted! Please reapply after 48 hours. Feel free to PM me if you have any questions!

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Your application was... You got some things right, but here are some you missed: • Your definition of power-gaming is not correct, and your definition of meta-gaming could use some revision. • Your biography has hints of power-gaming, but it is acceptable. • Your answer to the bandit scenario is powergaming. What if that were an actual role-play situation? You couldn't knock them out. You could try. Your application was great otherwise! Please, fix up the things I mentioned above and you'll have a much better chance at getting accepted! Please reapply after 48 hours.

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Please reapply in 48 hours.

I like the idea too, but agree with Dantesol about the conflicting IC and OOC-ness. Maybe their RP names could be mentioned, that they donated minas to the King? That'd make it IC. :P

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Your application was... You got some things right, but here are some you missed: • You need to have a definition (in your own words) of powergaming. • You need to have more detail in your biography. • Also, there was no transition between your love dying and you becoming a thief. Why did you become a thief? Because of your wife? Because you wanted to (not a good reason)? Please fill in the blanks, while putting in more detail. Fix the things I mentioned and you'll have a much better chance at being accepted. Please reapply after 48 hours.

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Your application was... You got some things right, but here are some you missed: • You need to have the questions in your application. • Please make everything easier to read by double-spacing, etc. • Your biography could use a little more character backround. Not that he seeks revenge because his parents died... what did he do while they were being attacked, in the army? • You need to have a screenshot of your skin. I wouldn't have denied you at first, but I think you have potential, and you could have done better on your biography and such. Along with the things I mentioned, just add more detail about your character. Fix the things I mentioned and you'll have a much better shot at being accepted! Please reapply after 48 hours.

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Your application was... • Please add the questions in. How am I supposed to know what your answering? • Space everything out. Not only did you not have the questions, I didn't know where a new answer stopped or started. • Please put a definition for role-playing, meta-gaming and power-gaming (in your own words) in. • Add more detail to everything that includes and is below your character biography. • Please search the forums for a tutorial on how to post screenshots. Fix the things I mentioned and you'll have a much better chance at getting accepted! Please reapply in 48 hours.

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Your application was... •I'm sorry, but the application format you're using is not correct. Please use the one found HERE. • Your biography was a bit confusing as well, just try to explain the storyline better. Please fix the problems I mentioned above and you'll have a much better chance of being accepted! Reapply here after 48 hours.

Your application was... ... You answered barely anything correctly. I assume you're joking by this application. I laughed. But if you aren't joking, please, put more effort in everything, period. Just so you get an idea of what kind of detail you have to put, look at some of the implemented applications. But do not plagiarize them. Please reapply in 48 hours.

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Your application was... You got some things right, but here are some you missed: • Your definition of metagaming is not correct. • Your biography was extremely hard to read. Please make it more organized, and use a period once in a while? It also had some hints of powergaming in it. • Your answer to the bandit scenario question could be considered powergaming. Imagine that this actually happened in LoTC. You couldn't just start beating the bandits into submission. You have to role-play it out. Overall, please make your application easier to read, if you can. Fix the things I mentioned and you'll have a much better shot at getting accepted! Please reapply after 48 hours.