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  1. 12 minutes ago, ArcanicFable said:

    Good lore, though you may want to dial down the range for a few of the abilities, for example, Lions roar being 20 blocks. While i understand its simply a calming spell, that range is pretty far. I think it'd be a little more reasonable to make it 5-10.

     

    Ave Malchediael 

    I think five would be a bit too low but ten sounds like a good number. Thank you for the feedback!

  2. 9 minutes ago, shimmeringbliss said:

    A good piece, I especially enjoy the illusion to teach.

     

    A few things though. Why would they have a prophet, if all Keepers may communicate with Xan? Doesn't seem like a feasible title. Maybe as leader of the order, not as a real prophet since all technically are.

     

    I was under the impression that Xan's power destroyed the soul, not the physical body. That would require a constant healing on a Keeper, although I see that you've said clearly that their body structure eventually morphs into golden ichor. 

     

    Maybe Divine Travel is a little too straightforward. How does [Open the Waygate] sound? Also I would prefer if the method required some form or material for preparation, instead of just relying solely on the Keeper's power. I would like to make it a bit more of an effort to travel to a Aengul's realm, ensuring as well the creation of a chancery to be that much more significant. 

     

    Not too sure why Mists cant be regarded as a combat utility tool, as its basically illusions although perhaps not as powerful as arcane ones. There's nothing to limit it I believe. 

     

     

     

    It's been intertwined in an immense amount of Xan lore that there has always been a prophet, typically someone of the Athna bloodline which is directly linked to Xan's. Prophet is really just a cultural rank, a figure that Paladins can look towards for guidance but it doesn't mean people can seek the very same from any other Keeper. This was a discussion I had with the main writer of Xan lore, Tsuyose, and its what he and I agreed on. It should just be noted that any paladin is capable of proclaiming themselves as prophet, there wouldn't be any ooc barriers for it. 

    I don't really know what you're specifying in this so I'll try to explain without being really wordy like I am in the lore. Person passes trial to become Keeper, person comes into Xans realm, Xan essentially rips their soul out and sets it to the pillar of binding within his realm in which their original body soon becomes defunct and placed somewhere for self keeping. Xan then creates them a new body within his own fashion, replacing crimson blood with his godly ichor and replacing normal bone with a crystallized version of his ichor that acts as a replacement.  The soul is then linked from this pillar to the body which allows them to function. I believe this is very similar to how the current wraiths (or some version of them) works by having their actual souls bound to some black pillar in the abyss.  

    I'm unsure what material could be really used as preparation, perhaps a sacrifice of the Keepers blood in the chancery but that'd be seen as somewhat insulting to the eyes of Xan. Chanceries are the place where Paladins are connected, where one is the strongest and their connection to him is that much closer, allowing the Keeper to manifest a far stronger power in order to create a realm through an amalgamation of the mists and light to get there. The significance of a Chancery is not just so a Keeper can travel there, but its the holy of holies for a Paladin, where one would go to pray, feel closest to their aengul, and also defend to their very last breath.

    Also with the mists, using it in combat was possible in the original Paladin lore. Any paladin could just create weaponry/objects from the mists to be able to used in combat. Personally I didn't think it was needed as a combat addition because it'd detract from the two paths of Vindicator and Wyrmstalker in the rewrite. I just liked it as a cool thing to be able to teach with and make some neat roleplay out of. 

     

  3. 20 minutes ago, Harrison said:

    >be pyro

    >link song

    >use fancy format
    >use niccum quote

    >explain events from your view 

    >use big fancy words adapted from tsuyose 
    >say RESIGN in big words

    >defeat staff this time (?)
    >farm rep = win (?) 

    Made some edits for you 

  4. An elf sat in solitude within his study, his normal ornate drapery of various fabrics having been abandoned for something far more comfortable whilst he'd work among the various parchments containing documents, reports, and listings. After several minutes of silently scanning through the largest stack of papers settled before him he'd rest an elbow atop the tables surface and press his face into an awaiting palm. A pair of fingers pinching at his brow before his lips would part with a tired sigh, teeth grating against one another before satisfying his addiction with a brief pull of drink from a crystalline chalice nearby. Savoring the churning liquids within his maw he'd settle back in seat, normally straight and refined posture going lax whilst his gaze toward the wall furthest from him. His thoughts racing as he'd recall the events in his life leading up to now, the bastard of a White Rose race traitor whom once aided in the very genocide of his own kin, becoming a Kalenz brainwashed elf whom only repeated his fathers actions of slaughtering his own kind, finding himself seduced by a citizen of the very people whom he'd killed, and concluding in becoming their leader for well over a century. His lips pursed, a frown seeming to appear upon his lips before his tired features were soon replaced with an air of pleasantness and a warm smile, dipping his head in self-approval. He'd soon pen a small, short letter to his Council.

    There is always work to done. Our job: the job of those whom have dozens, hundreds, and even thousands looking to us, relying upon us to make a decision and keep them safe is eternal. This blessing of our lives being able to yield centuries is something that mustn't be taken for granted, it is something that must be used to its utmost capability.  To be a leader, something that people place their trust in order to make decisions that might impact their lives in the most drastic ways, one must understand one simple fact; there is never an end. There is always progress to be had, something that must be done, fixed, and improved upon.

     

    Take heed of this. 

     



     

  5. 1 minute ago, Fordo said:

     

    i just talk mad **** about that time you used a spirit bomb and holy shade tendrils lmao but otherwise nah that's the most beef i have with your Keeper status or the overall Keeper status 

     

    I'd rather there be no endgames sorry for being so biased and not bashing the **** out of my own side im being a bit of a sod 

    the spirit bomb thing is something i literally joke about to mess with people, its not actually possible. Also along with the holy shade tendrils thats fine I used that only a few times, I'm rather indifferent of what abilities they have, I just like the title to be honest.   Also we're shelved getting rewritten rnow anyways 

  6. 2 minutes ago, Fordo said:

     

    okay i should use a different word than retcon clearly i dont know what that means

     

    basically if it were up to me Ascended would stop at Aegis. 1.0. No more of em after that. Any Ascended could instead take up the mantle of paladin or cleric if they liked holy stuff.

    yeah ive said it three times in this thread that basically ill be fine if there are no endgames for both.

     

    im cool with that. 

    then stop hammering my precious keepers so hard please : (

  7. *A smaller note would be pinned beneath the bounty.*

    "For any who require the aid of one or more combatants versed and enhanced in the combat of draconic foes send word to Leric within Linandria. My fellow kinsmen and I seek no reward or mina, merely the chance to fulfill our duties and end this abhorrent monster dwelling upon these lands. We're both extremely effective against these draconic beings and are capable of healing the lesser wounds of injured men within the party. I would pray that you heed these words and call me for aid when required." 

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    Keeper Leric of Xan 

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