Wizard

(Updated 2/2/12)

Hello fellow citizens of Aegis! I am William Valinor, former knight of Oren. I am looking for your support in building a grand town in the desert to provide our great nation of Renatus with much needed supplies. Sign below on the charter if you wish to support! This town is approved for advertising by the king himself. I hope you support the efforts of Renatus by helping expand its power!

((Why would that be bad? It is on Renatus lands.))

TOWN CHARTER MC Name: WizardInABox RP Name: William Valinor Town Name: Dune's Wrath (subject to change if needed) Why are you/your character starting this town? What role will it play? William has lived through much of the strife dating even back to King Edmund turning undead and the phoenix rebellion. Now, in Renatus, he is trying to make a difference for his nation, Renatus and provide a safe place to live in the desert. The orcs and Hanseti have already begun to wage war on Renatus and as much help as can be gathered for the battles. Requiring large amounts resources and strong trade, one of the major reasons for Dune's Wrath is too provide large mines and set up ore shops to provide the armies of Renatus with new equipment. Dune's Wrath will be one of the first towns in Asulon and will hopefully give Renatus an upperhand in the coming battles. The best blacksmiths and miners will work here and also a strong trade will develop. Led by dedicated followers of Renatus who fought in the phoenix rebellion, Dune's Wrath will provide safety to those who need it and hopefully grow into a larger city. What type of political system is enforced in this town? Is this town under the reign of any other nation at this time? Dune's Wrath is going to be run by the Valinor family, mainly William, and a small council who will help make various town decisions. The town is affiliated with Renatus and is an official town sanctioned by the king. The town will have a strong military presence as it will provide much of the armaments. The laws coincide with those of Renatus and include the basic things like no stealing, murdering, or consorting with enemies of Renatus. Noble House of Valinor: . William Treaty- Head of house and lord of Dune's Wrath. Drake Treaty - Brother of William and second in command. Jonathan Treaty - Youngest of the Valinor brothers and holds a spot on the council. What sort of behavior will residents exhibit? (Race relations, nation relations, etc.) Dune's Wrath welcomes any race as long as they pledge to be faithful to Renatus and not betray the trust. The town will mainly have humans, but I expect that dwarves will come as well. The town will have strong relations to Renatus and be faithful to that nation. Where would you prefer the town’s region be? Including a screenshot of the land would be nice (of game or map). The town is going to be located in a desert situated in Renatus land. Any other details (architecture, races, culture, etc): The town is going to be situated on a oasis. The main town hall is going made of cobblestone, logs, and planks. The rest of the town like the mines and the blacksmiths, and most of the houses will be made of strong accents of sandstone, cobble and roofs from wooden planks. Players who have agreed to sign this charter (15 name minimum): 1) WizardInABox - William Valinor 2) WizardInACan - Drake Valinor (Royal Alchemist of Renatus) 3) WizardInATub - Jonathan Treaty 4) Italian_Assassin 5) King Koo - Jerry 6) James_Swiften 7) i7ivinedead 8) Jallentime 9) aaoa - Amon 10) civb- Karl Swift 11) empirerebel 12) Lord_Wolf_1st - Sir Wolf 13) Similan - Renatus Guard Similan 14) Minst46 - Lithren Ebon 15) not sure of mc name - zaroth skullback So far these are the only signatures. If you support Dune's Wrath, please sign the charter.

((If the guild was started with a Christian background, then it should be allowed to use crosses.))

((I can lead if necessary, but I will only be able to play a little on the weekends. I would not want to hurt the guild that has so much lore. If I am indeed needed as leader, I will just appoint a second in command who instead can run the building process and most of the guild work. As I said earlier though, most likely that would end up hurting the order. Thanks!))

I would love to see a massive library that challenges that of the old druids. We need to show other races that we are highly cultured and are supporters of the various arts.

Moved to Accepted Forum

Accepted. The rp scenarios were great and the bio was good too. You seem like an intelligent person who will help this server greatly. The only thing I saw was that your definition of metagaming and powergaming were a little off. Before you go play, I would ask someone for some more concrete definitions of those. Good luck and welcome to Asulon!

This is going to be a good addition to the kingdom. People will be able to reach the kingdom a lot easier.

Is Lowencaster accepted yet or still awaiting approval?

Moved to Accepted Forum

Accepted. I cannot see your skin, but I will let that pass as I believe you most likely have a good one. Great bio and definitions of powergaming, metagaming, and roleplaying. Overall, I think you can add a lot to the roleplay on the server. Welcome to Asulon!

Moved to Accepted Forum

Accepted I liked the bio except for one thing. I thought that the machines and the acts you committed seemed a little too powergaming stylish. I will accept you though as you seem to understand roleplaying pretty well. Watch out not to rp machines that cannot be actually made and make sure you do not powergame. Welcome to Asulon!

Updated 1/18/2012

You should change the name for the purpose of the town. Just call it Karakatuan or something, not the Karakatuan Empire. The lore is not up to empire status and the name should agree with that.

I think the idea is great! I would love to rp my character learning magic as well and becoming a wizard in the town of Lowencaster. ((I can really see some Hogsmeade style stuff making this town awesome!))

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