Greener

You hear an odd familiar chuckle from down the bridge within the city. A short dwed with a thick bushy beard, his belly plump and his arms ripped. A tune begins from a short figure beside him.

Odin clicks his figures singing as he walks in "Alalalalaalalaaaaaa," he jumps brazier to brazier his belly flopping side to side. "Guud to beh home."

Heres the issue why your getting confused bunch of homebrew ****

Piers rolls about in his Gravenous place of graven things and says to himself "The whole family is a bunch of snakes."

That fact its the english dub... 

Odin shakes his head "No fawk ov ye wee *****!". He laughs for a few seconds making the situation awkward then goes up and gives his kin a hearty warm hug, "Glad yer back."

(IC)

Name: Dresril Do'Val

Age: 67

Gender: Male

Do you accept that in joining this order you may at times be tasked with taking the life of another mali’ker? Yes I agree

Do you accept that under particular circumstances you may be removed from the order? 

And under serious enough terms, executed? Yes

Do you accept that we are not fanatics? And that should a mali'ker refuse to accept the Ancestors (Provided what they believe is wholesome) that we shall do no harm to them? Yes

Name: Dresril Do'Val
Age: 67
Race (If not mali'ker then an interview will be required): mali'ker
Notable Skills: Excels in combat 
How many will be moving in with you? 1 my non identical brother
Do you accept the laws of Ebonglade and by extension Laureh'lin? Yes

Mc Name: greener161
Skype: greener161
 

Lucien tries to speak to his father but guess what he can't! He just mumbles with a soft groan.

1 hour ago, Tythus said:

 

DW it's always Greener on the other side

GREEEEEEEEEEEEENER ON THE OTHER SIDEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. MUST OF CALLED A GREEEEEEEEENER TIMEEEEES. 

******* love zirene 

"**** off" Odin says.

Luciens sigh wondering why his father would marry his half sister off to a snake. "Hmmm."

A graven named Piers signs the charter

Moved to Denied Application Forum.

Denied for failing to make the changes I gave above! You may reapply in 12 hours!

Moved to Denied Application Forum.

Your application has been denied for not changing one of the pending reasons!

• Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are still wrong.

You may reapply in 12 hours!

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.

Accepted welcome to Lord of the Craft!! Please wait patiently until your implemented.

You have been put on pending for a few reasons

• All of the server lore you have included is back in Aegis and if your character is 21 years old now he wouldn't of been alive then. I suggest changing the lore to suit Vailor lore. I suggest looking here for some http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Dwarves
• 21 also isn't adult age for a Dwarf you would still be a beardling and be fairly young. Most Dwarves accept that they reach adulthood at the age of 100 which means you will be able to add in some server lore dating back further but only really into Athera and Vailor

Complete these changes within 24 hours

I see you have made some improvements since your last application however! Please fix these few reasons.

• You need to expand on your traits, ambitions, strengths and weaknesses.
• I also suggest one of your ambitions not to seek revenge on dead parents as its very cliché.

You have 24 hours to make these improvements!

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Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.

Welcome to Lord of the Craft! Please wait patiently until your are implemented into the server if you need to ask any more questions feel free to message me.

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