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    [✔] [Accepted] Whitelist Application

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    Your application has been put on pending for a few reasons. Do not fear though once the changes are made and they're right you will be accepted.

    • For you powergaming and metagaming definitions please try and expand them by giving examples. If you need help check this http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying but do not plagiarize.
    • Please also try and fix your font the white hurts my eyes.
    • Good biography so far but please include a bit more lore such as a town. The festivals you have included are great but just needs a tad more to flesh out your biography then you're set. 

    You have 24 hours to complete these changes or face denial. Message me once the changes are complete and if they still need adjusting I will guide you further. 

     

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    [✔] [Accepted] Roventskij App

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    Your application has been put on pending for a few reasons. Do not fear though once the changes are made and they're right you will be accepted.

    • Your age of your character is slightly off. The year is currently 1537 which means you character would be born later than the date you selected.
    • You also need to include server lore into your biography such as towns and events not just Vailor. Please check this link for some infomation http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Elves 
    • Also make sure you skin is a darker colour just pale. Check the link I gave above for more reference. 

    You have 24 hours to complete these changes or face denial. Message me once the changes are complete and if they still need adjusting I will guide you further. 

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    [✔] [Accepted] Owlette's App

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    Your application has been put on pending for a few reasons. Do not fear though once the changes are made and they're right you will be accepted.

    • Everything is basically perfect except that you have to add more server lore into your biography. If you need help refer to this link http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Kharajyr Add in lore such as towns and recent events but remember we are currently in Vailor so keep that in mind when adding lore. 
    • You also need to expand you biography a bit more you can link this to recent events. 

    You have 24 hours to complete these changes or face denial. Message me once the changes are complete and if they still need adjusting I will guide you further. 

     

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    [✔] [Accepted] [Whitelist Application]

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    Your application has been put on pending for a few reasons. Do not fear though once the changes are made and they're right you will be accepted.

    • You have seemed to stop half way through defining your powergaming definition please finish it off with your example so I know you have grasped the rule.
    • Please expand on your traits, amibitions, strengths and weaknesses please. There is far too little information. If you need help feel free to message me. 

    You have 24 hours to complete these changes or face denial. Message me once the changes are complete and if they still need adjusting I will guide you further. 

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    [Denied] My Application :)

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    You have been denied for many reasons! Fix these issues below.

    • You have been caught plagiarizing! Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are both plagiarized from other sources. If you are caught plagiarizing again you will face a 1 week ban per definition. 
    • Your biography contains no lore I suggest looking here http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Humans Include lore such as towns and cities. 
    • Your parents dying is also very cliché so please fix this for your next application.
    • Your biography also needs to be a minimum of 2 paragraphs.
    • Please also expand on traits, ambitions and weaknesses. Link these to a new biography you right. If you need help feel free to message me.

    You may reapply in 24 hours after the time of this denial. Remember do not plagiarize again or face a ban.

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