Gwonam_Blaze

Moved to Denied Forum

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

- Your bio (which, can I say, has an amazingly good feeling of suspense and dread behind it; I can tell you'd make a great horror novelist!) really doesn't fit in with our lore. The only difference it seems to have from your last attempt is that instead of being a Werewolf, he's now more-or-less a 'Were-Kharajyr'. I'm afraid you simply cannot be a Werewolf character; They've never been acceptable in our lore. Kharajyr are a race of 'Cat-People' and are not the result of some kind of curse. If you wish to play on Lord of the Craft, I'm afraid you're going to have to try and drop the whole Werewolf themed character entirely because it will never be accepted.

Your application as a whole was very nice, but the sad truth is: You'll never be accepted if you try to apply as a 'Werewolf' of any sort. Please apply as a lore appropriate character in future. Again though, I actually kept reading through your bio because it was so immersive and exciting! If you could use that talent you have for writing a lore-appropriate biography then I can guarantee you'd have a much easier time being accepted! You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

Your application has been accepted! Congratulations!

Much better! The amount of lore you've included is just about acceptable, but Hanseti was a city in Asulon. However, I'm willing to overlook this flaw as it shouldn't have much impact on your character and can easily be fixed. A GM should implement you soon. If you have any further questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

- Your biography is a lot better, but still doesn't contain enough server lore. The only addition you seemed to make was the mention of the Undead, who have not appeared in Lord of the Craft since Aegis (which was well over 100 in-game years ago), making it completely irrelevent. Next time, add server lore applicable to Anthos, the realm we currently live in.

Your application is much better, but unfortunately, not applicable for acceptance due to the lack of lore. Just spend a while fixing the issue I've shared above and you'll do fine. You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any further questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

Moved to Accepted Forum

Your application has been accepted! Congratulations!

Much better than your first application! A GM should implement you soon. If you have any questions or concerns feel free to message/PM me!

Moved to Accepted Forum

Your application has been accepted! Congratulations!

A GM should implement you soon. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

Even though I more or less play one (I won't deny it, go ahead and scold me for it), lesbians of any sort. The server isn't as rampant with them as it used to be (To all you young-in's, in mid-Asulon the ratio of straight females to lesbians was about 1:3, not even kidding), but they're still a little bothersome to see sometimes. I won't try and justify Vithy too much, but at least she 'sort of' has a reason; She suffers from a god-complex disorder and narcissism, meaning she's attracted to herself to an extent where she more or less lacks a sexuality. Because of this, neither gender, yet at the same time, both genders fit her sexuality criteria, however, women represent herself much closer than men do and because she quite simply likes sex, she finds them more attractive (however, she has been known to sleep with men on several occasions :P).

However, what bothers me more (although I'll admit, aren't so overplayed these days. Thanks community!) are 'bisexual' characters that never interact with males. I noticed this a lot during the mid-Asulon les-plosion; There was a lot of characters whose players would claim were 'bisexual' but would only ever hit on females (Yes, Vith 'prefers' females, but she is still somewhat attracted to men). That bothered me more than anything, but thankfully, it stopped recently.

Moved to Denied Forum

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

- Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are completely incorrect. Please research their real meanings and give us the correct definitions. Also, note: We are a roleplay (RP) server, not RPG; There is a difference between them.

- Your biography was very short and lacked any and all detail. You just rushed through your character's life without explaining any events. Why was his father's food poisoned? Why did he hate his parents? Where did he run away too? What did he do with this southerner he befriended? Please give plenty more detail on the events in your character's life to make it in to an actual story, not just a boring run-down of what happened to him.

- Your biography lacks any server lore. Please include plenty of official server lore, which can be found here: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ . Also, this is worth noting: Creepers do not exist and have never existed in Lord of the Craft's lore, so do not include them in your bio.

- Your ambitions are pretty cliche and don't really have much passion behind them. Why does your character wish to become the greatest archer ever? What will he do if he aspires to this goal? Also, you may wish to work on your weaknesses, considering Creepers do not exist in Lord of the Craft. Keep in mind: A weakness needs to be something that makes your character 'flawed' or at a disadvantage when compared to another character.

- I noticed you seem to have pasted your application twice. I'm sure this was an accident, so it's not a big deal, but try to make sure you don't do this again next time as it may be considered 'breaking the application format'.

Needs a lot of work, but in all, not a bad application. Spend a lot of time on your bio, making sure it's an interesting and compelling story. You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

I really wish I could say I have one...    -Tears ensue-

I don't they they can without a warclaim, but to be honest, they probably should...

Moved to Accepted Forum

Moved to Denied Forum

Your application is denied and I'm giving you a verbal warning for the following reason:

- While I appreciate that you are eager to get accepted, there is no excuse to post before the 24 hour penalty period I'm afraid. Your must post 24 hours after 'denial', not before you posted the application, but since you weren't aware of this you aren't in much trouble. If you break this rule again you will be banned from applying for one week, so be very sure it's been 24 hours after you were denied before posting again.

Other things you should fix are:

- Your definitions are much better, but your metagaming one still isn't quite right. I have a feeling you understand what it means, but you aren't using the correct words to describe it and it seems you're describing it in a context relevant to RPG, not roleplaying (If you didn't know, there is a difference). Please explain the definition so it suits roleplaying with other players, not fighting against computer controlled enemies.

I have to say, I don't like having to deny this because you've greatly improved it in such a short time! Unfortunately, I cannot accept an application if it was posted within a 24 hour penalty period. However, if you wait out the next 24 hours patiently and post your application then, after fixing your metagaming definition, I'm certain your application will be as good as accepted! You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any further questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

Yes. Just... Yes.

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Moved to Denied Forum

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

- Your metagaming and powergaming definitions aren't quite right, your metagaming one is close though. Research their true meanings a little more and give us the exact definitions.

- Your biography was good, and very exciting, but has a couple of problems: There isn't much server lore included, and it's more or less a 'wall of text'. Include a bit more server lore in your biography, such as a few cities or other races, and separate it in to 'paragraphs' so it's easier to read.. If you need help finding server lore, use our official wiki here: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/

- Your ambitions and weaknesses are very vague and don't make much sense. Please tell us, in brief: Exactly what they want to do with their life and what weaknesses they have (Things that make them flawed when compared to other characters, such as fears and moral boundaries).

- The entire application is full of spelling and grammar errors. You won't be outright denied for this, since it isn't terrible, but it will definitely  improve your chances of getting accepted if you remove as many errors as possible.

Honestly, your application was great! I especially liked the bio, but there are still a few things that you need to fix before we can accept you. Just take your time making sure you've fixed all of the points provided and you'll do great! You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

Your application has been accepted! Congratulations!

Much better. There is now some real story behind your character that makes him interesting and makes me want to keep reading! A GM should implement you soon. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

Moved to Denied Forum

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

- You must use the full official application format in order to be accepted; Half of it is not enough. Please fill out the entire application and post it next time.

- While your biography was good and contained a fair bit of server lore, a lot of the lore is incorrect and inaccurate; Arethor and Hanseti were cities in Asulon, so the Undead couldn't have attacked there since they never existed in Asulon, only Aegis. Also, your character is far too young to have been 16 in Asulon at any point, since we moved away from Asulon over 20 years ago in-game; Either change your character's current age or use cities from Anthos (The realm we currently live in).

- Your character's weaknesses aren't really weaknesses. To be a weakness, it must be something that puts your character at a disadvantage or makes them 'flawed' when compared to another character.

You're doing alright so far, just need to fix a lot of the flaws in your application (Mostly using the full application format). You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me.

 

Name ((and MCname)): Gale; Gale_Wolf

((Skype name)): galethewolf

Age and race: 32, Human

Motives for joining: Recently, Gale has come to realize that Anthos truly belongs to the Scourge. It was the other races that came to their land. He knows that we're in the wrong for invading them. He wants the Scourge to reclaim what's rightfully theirs, even if this includes turning the world to ash, forcing others to leave. He wishes for Scourge supremacy. 

Do you wish to get blessed? ((If yes, you are agreeing to the above OOC statements of blessing.)): Sure.

((If you betray the Scourge and are caught, do you agree with a PK’ing clause? You don’t have to answer yes.)): Yep.

 

Copy this as well please:

 

(I do not play another character that is actively fighting against the scourge. If my character intentionally betrays the Scourge and is caught, or is expelled due to IC actions, I agree with a loss of IC information clause. This meaning that my character will forget all information about the Scourge, and that all books and documents that my character had written for himself about them will be destroyed or did not exist.): I agree.

 

This be my new, revamped application.

 

 

Name ((and MCname)): Warrior-Chef Cedric ((Raelplayer))

((Skype name)): Ehrick.Elderon

Age and race: 36, Human.

Motives for joining: Cedric has made two friends amongst the Scourge, taking the whole-situation of the extermination of his race to be rather a joke. After speaking with Bloodnight's Harbinger several times, Cedric decided that rather than fight the Scourge, he should aid them in their noble cause to free the evil races of Asulon and Aegis past from lands which were once theirs. Having fought against the Scourge on many occasions, he has decided he must right his wrongs and teach the races of Anthos which refuse to unite a lesson.

Do you wish to get blessed? ((If yes, you are agreeing to the above OOC statements of blessing.)): Sure, I don't believe Cedric would have any qualms with that.

((If you betray the Scourge and are caught, do you agree with a PK’ing clause? You don’t have to answer yes.)): Sure.

 

Copy this as well please:

 

(I do not play another character that is actively fighting against the scourge. If my character intentionally betrays the Scourge and is caught, or is expelled due to IC actions, I agree with a loss of IC information clause. This meaning that my character will forget all information about the Scourge, and that all books and documents that my character had written for himself about them will be destroyed or did not exist.):

This is a perfectly fine rule, I accept it, and will not break it. 

 

I've spoken with Gwonam OOC and soon-to-be IC, roleplayed learning more of the Scourge with Bloodnight's Harbinger, and look forward to hopefully become a member of the Cult. :)

 

Accepted!

Moved to Accepted Forum

Your application has been accepted! Congratulations!

W- Wow... This is probably the best, most  in-depth application I've ever had to review. I honestly don't think there's anything wrong with it! The bio was very compelling, exciting and had plenty of lore; I loved it! I really look forward to seeing you roleplaying in game! A GM should implement you soon. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!