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    [✗] [Pending] freckled_face's Whilelist Application

    in Denied Applications

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    Sadly, my friend, I waited and waited for you to fix the one problem with your application. I should have denied it earlier, but do not take this as a sign of defeat or that you are doomed to never be here. I have faith that you can reapply with the tiny thing you need fixed and get accepted. 

     

    Please remove all details in which your character has learned magic in their backstory, sadly no player can start with magic from the beginning, they can have heard of it, but not learn it themselves. 

     

    I do hope you try again. Don't give up hope.

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    [✗] RagnakTheFat Application

    in Denied Applications

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    So sorry for the slow response, I sadly wish the bad news ended there, but your application is not acceptable to the standards that are needed for Lord of the Craft. However, I do wish to do something to make up for the time you have spent waiting for a response. Normally a Denial based on wrong application format would be 6 hours. Since you have waited almost 6 hours, I'll say that you can reapply as soon as possible. I will be writing down the reasons for your denial and will give you the chance to fix them, once done so, you will hopefully be accepted and I hope to see you joining us in our adventures through Axios.

     

    1) Wrong Application Format: The ultimate reason for your app's denial is due to missing a few things in your application. This link will provide you the format you need. 

     

    2) Backstory fixes: You are sadly missing the two paragraph minimum requirement on your application, as well as missing the three mentions of Lord of the Craft Lore, I recommend reading up more on Dwarven lore either on the wiki or on the forums themselves. 

     

    3) Personality Traits: Perhaps go into more detail on your character's traits, why do they love cake so much? why are they awkward? Why does he hate bullies? perhaps you can explain why in your backstory, it could help bulk up the backstory and flesh out the character more.

     

    I sincerely hope you will reapply and take my words into consideration, I hope you the best of luck and do not give up on Hope!

     

     

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    [✔] [Accepted] application

    in Implemented Applications

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    Hello Friend! Sadly your application does not meet the requirements that were needed. But do not worry! you have 24 Hours to fix your mistake, and very likely, be accepted.

     

    1) Your application needs to be two paragraphs minimum.

     

    2) perhaps try to add more personality traits, because hating poor people isn't exactly a key character trait unless they are a Cartoon Rich person.  Although **** the color Beige,

     

    Outside of that, your application is acceptable.

     

    I Wish you the best of luck! you can do ti!

     

     

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