LordCommander

Hello Friend!, sadly you made a few mistakes that need to be fixed in order to be accepted. But do not fret, you are given 24 hours to fix them, and I believe in you!

1) Your definition of Powergaming is Incorrect, I recommend checking this Wiki Link and after reading it, write it down in your own words.

2) Although your backstory meets the Two paragraph minimum, you are not allowed to start off with magic, in order to learn magic you need to spend at least one IRL week on this server before you can make an MA application, even then you need to go through the RP of finding a teacher. Finally, you need to make sure you have Three references to the lore. You only included one, I recommend looking on the Wiki for more references. 

I believe in you! don't give up.

This application has been denied.

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.

Sadly my Friend, Your app has been denied due to a collection of reasons, the biggest one is the incorrect format for your application. In the link below there shall be the correct format to use

The next thing that needs to be altered is the fact that Human cannot have purple eyes, you are not allowed to have started off with magic (that includes if you had magical training in your backstory). Fix the following issues and your application will be more likely to be accepted. Don't give up hope though, you can do it. 

You may reapply in 6 hours.

Didn't know you for long, but talked to you a few times, you seemed like a really cool guy with an AMAZING voice. I hope that life goes well for you, and only wish good luck in your future endeavors.

Hello Friend! Your app was Almost accepted, sadly I hate to inform you that you need to fix one thing on your application. You are not allowed to start off with magic, I recommend changing the first weakness to something that doesn't include such. I do hope you do the revisions, we would love to have you aboard!

This application has been denied.

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.

Whitelist application has been accepted, player is now whitelisted in game.

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Player whitelist pending.

Well done! Your app has been accepted! You shall be added to the whitelist shortly, might I recommend joining the new player Discord to speak with our friendly AT and Helpers to get you started in your adventures in Axios.

https://discordapp.com/invite/C2ETUy9

Whitelist application has been accepted, player is now whitelisted in game.

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Player whitelist pending.

Well done! Your app has been accepted! You shall be added to the whitelist shortly, might I recommend joining the new player Discord to speak with our friendly AT and Helpers to get you started in your adventures in Axios.

https://discordapp.com/invite/C2ETUy9

Whitelist application has been accepted, player is now whitelisted in game.

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Player whitelist pending.

Well done! Your app has been accepted! You shall be added to the whitelist shortly, might I recommend joining the new player Discord to speak with our friendly AT and Helpers to get you started in your adventures in Axios.

https://discordapp.com/invite/C2ETUy9

This application has been denied.

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.

Sadly, your application was denied. You were missing one more lore reference, and your skin is sadly still not lore-friendly. There is a lot of really bad dress skins I know, but try your best to look for a skin that is more fitting of your character, I'm sure under the hundreds of thousands of frilly girl dresses, there is some cool roguish attire waiting to be worn. I do hope you try again later.

You may apply again in 12 hours

MC Name:

LordCommander

Character's Name:

Cathal

Character's Age:

31

Character's Race:

Highlander

What magic(s) will you be learning?:

Fire Evocation

Teacher's MC Name:

MCPancakes

Teacher's RP Name:

Duren

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

n/a

Do you agree to keep the MT updated on the status of your magic app by using the Magic List Errors topic?:

Yes

Have you applied for this magic on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

No

Hello Friend!, sadly your app was not up to the quality required to be accepted, however, if you fix a few things, this pending will be changed to Accepted.

1) Your Definition of Metagaming and Powergaming are sadly incorrect. However you can find the correct definition on the Wiki, Please use your own words for plagiarizing will get your app instantly denied.  

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying

2) Sadly your backstory does not meet the two-paragraph minimum requirement. I recommend going into more detail into why they rebelled, why were their parents snobby and rich? were they Nobility? Merchants? Also, you need 2 more references to the lore so I recommend looking in the Wiki for more details on Courland. 

3) Your strengths and weaknesses need clarification, why is one of their weaknesses water? perhaps explain why you have those strengths and weaknesses, like maybe they almost drowned and it gave them a fear of water or perhaps their love of archery and art were their way of expressing themselves in a restrictive life that they so desperately needed.

4) The last thing that needs to be fixed is your skin, it is not appropriate to the setting. I recommend looking on Planet Minecraft for a Proper Medieval Fantasy Skin, and writing a proper description to match the skin, like 2+ Sentences to describe them.

Once you have done all the things, you will very likely be accepted!. Don't give up hope though, I believe in you!.

Whitelist application has been accepted, player is now whitelisted in game.

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Player whitelist pending.