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    [✔] [Accepted] [Pending] Application - MemeLordTot

    in Implemented Applications

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    Hello, my friend, I have some bad news. Your application was not accepted, however, nor was it denied. There are a few small issues that you need to fix, to turn this pending into an accepted. Now after you are done editing your app, PLEASE msg me on the forums.

     

    1) Backstory: You are missing a reference to the lore, that is really my only complaint there.

     

    2) Definition: Your definition of Powergaming is rather lacking, it isn't incorrect, but I feel like it needs to be fleshed out a little bit more. I recommend looking at the Wiki for their definition, then word it in your own words. 

     

    3) Ambitions: How can you truly be the best there ever was? are you going to train them to your cause? will you travel across the land? do you know that it is indeed your destiny? if you are sure, then I will teach you as you teach me. We will get through every challenge along the way, gotta catch 'em all....

    (This one isn't an actual issue you need to fix.)

     

    You have 24 hours to fix your application. 

     

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    [✗] [Pending] CowCatTheThird

    in Denied Applications

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    Sadly, my friend, your application has a few small issues that prevent your application from being accepted. Once said things are fixed, please send me a private message on the forums. 

     

    1) Backstory: Your backstory is rather lacking, the whole parents were killed clique is rather overdone. Also, why was another group of hunters, decided to kill a family of snow elves? were they bandits or were they just really xenophobic? also the jarring transition from how you somehow killed a group of five people all by yourself to how you were raised. Also, I recommend actually adding the lore reference to your backstory, instead of just adding it at the end. Final note, Snow Elves don't usually come from the silver city to my knowledge. They live in the principality of Fenn.

     

    2) Skin: Please link your actual minecraft skin, also being a half-snow elf and half-dark elf would probably not give you brown skin, more likely you would either have the skin color of either the pale Snow Elves or the hues of purple from your Dark Elf side. Finally, neither Snow Elves nor Dark Elves, have blue hair. 

     

    You have 24 Hours to fix said mistakes. 

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    [✗] Applying to server

    in Denied Applications

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    Sadly, my friend, your application has been denied. You are missing a few important details needed for your application to be accepted. Do not give up hope, however! you can reapply in 1 Hour

     

    1) Definitions: You are missing your Definitions for Metagaming, Roleplaying, and Powergaming.

     

    2) Backstory: You are missing your IC section of the application, as well as the backstory. 

     

     

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