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    Sadly, my friend, your application has a few mistakes that prevent it from being accepted. You are not being denied, with a few edits, your application will be accepted. You have 24 Hours to fix your application, afterward, send me a MESSAGE ON THE FORUMS

     

    1)Skin: Your link is broken, please follow the instructions here

     

    2)Grammar: There are plenty of writing mistakes and errors, now I won't ask for you to fix every single one, but please try to fix the more obvious ones such as spelling. 

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    Greetings and Salutations Lord of the Crafters,

     

    Due to the release of the long-anticipated sequel to Shadow of Mordor; Shadow of War now released. I decided to start up a forum thread to those who also picked up the game. Here we can discuss what we thought about the game, what we didn't like and most importantly; Orc Stories. The Nemesis system allows for hilarious stories to be made and told, from that one Orc who seems to be immortal and relentless in coming at you, to perhaps tales of betrayal and ambushes. I would ask that spoilers are kept to a minimum or hidden behind a spoiler warning, to prevent people who are just starting the game (like most of us) or those wanting to buy it from having critical moments of the story ruined for them. 

     


     

    Guidelines

    1. Keep Spoilers to a minimum, or hidden behind a spoiler warning

    2. Follow all LoTC forum Rules

    3. No Man-Filth/Tarks/Rangers/Gravewalkers allowed.

    4. Have fun 

  3. I've known Zhal for a couple of years on a different server; he went from a stupid kid playing an awakened horse warlock to a respectful RPer. The last server we were one, the staff never gave him the chance to show his worth, and that was a mistake on their part. Don't make the same mistake GM Team.  +1

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    Sadly, my friend, there are a few mistakes with your application that prevent you from being accepted onto this server. However you are not denied, there is hope. You have 24 hours to fix the mistakes listed, afterward, SEND ME A PRIVATE MESSAGE ON THE FORUMS.

     

    1)Backstory: I'm going to ignore all the spelling and grammar mistakes since English is not your first language. However something that made me raise my brow, was the fact she wanted to be a soldier, but she didn't enjoy fighting? And now she wants justice? It seems rather unbelievable. 

     

    2) Ambitions: This also goes into the first point, you want to be a Knight/Soldier and fight for your nation, then why do you dislike fighting? Those are militaristic professions and mostly revolve around an activity she dislikes. 

     

    3)Strengths and Weaknesses: Ignoring the fact that you are good at fighting, your weakness is strange. Just building? Could you please go into more detail onto possible flaws.

     

    Despite the possible harsh tone in all of this, if you need any help with your application, please PM me, and I will try to assist you to the best of my ability. I do hope you fix your mistakes so I can change this pending to accepted. 

  5. After speaking with the LT, I have made some rewriting.

    -Made it more clear that the Tenerabras and Goregoats are Manifestations of Vendicta instead of patrons.

    -Removed Vengeance, Physical Prowess, and Rage, and replaced with Conquest and Wrath.

    -Overlaps with existing deities are now removed. 

    -Added in the Adjective for a Cultist/Follower of Argos

     

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    Congratulations my friend, your application has been deemed acceptable, there is a small mistake that you need to fix, but it's not enough for a pending. The current year is 1630, and Vailor was roughly 50-80 years ago in character. However I'm not going to hold that against you, I hope your travels through the land of Axios go by wonderfully and if you need any help, join the new player Discord. https://discord.gg/C2ETUy9

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