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Denied. You didn't wait 24 hours! YOU MUST WAIT. Also, this is NOT your 2nd application. This would be your 4th application that has been denied.

ALAN FOR AIC!

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Your Application has been... DENIED [X] Put on PENDING [ ] Reason(s) Why Your Application Was Denied: [[X's mark the parts you need to rectify.]] Out of Character: Missing Areas [X] Bad Information [X] Role Play: Missing Biography [ ] -Short Biography [X] Insufficient Information in OOC [ ] -Insufficient Information in Metagaming Definition [X] -Insufficient Information in Powergaming Definition [X] Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [X] Insufficient Knowledge of the World [X] Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [X] -Open Response Questions are Lacking [X] -Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [ ] -Unreal Scenarios [ ] Bouts of Powergaming [ ] Bouts of Metagaming [ ] Conflicting Answers [X] Character is Cliche [X] Requires a Villain Application [ ] Form: Bad Spelling/Grammar [X] Missing Areas [ ] Breaking Rules [ ] Cliche [X] Plagiarized [ ] Skin: Missing Skin [ ] -Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ] -Incorrect Character Description [X] -Incorrect Skin Format [X] -Unloreful Skin [X] Other Comments: Your Application lacked a lot of detail. I'm not going to leave a huge explanation, but it seems you did not put a whole lot of effort into your application. Most of your answers were 1-2 sentences, if that. Your skin was a bandit skin, and this kind of broke lore. All of your definitions were incorrect / contestable, and there were a variety of errors. All of the Errors and Disclosed / Marked Above. I think you need to take a read at the lore and also learn about the terms Metagaming and Powergaming. I bid you good luck with your next application! PLEASE RE-APPLY AFTER A PERIOD OF 24 HOURS ~ THANK YOU.

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Your Application has been... DENIED [X] Put on PENDING [ ] Reason(s) Why Your Application Was Denied: [[X's mark the parts you need to rectify.]] Out of Character: Missing Areas [ ] Bad Information [ ] Role Play: Missing Biography [ ] -Short Biography [ ] Insufficient Information in OOC [ ] -Insufficient Information in Metagaming Definition [X] -Insufficient Information in Powergaming Definition [X] Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [X] Insufficient Knowledge of the World [X] Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ] -Open Response Questions are Lacking [X] -Open Responses could use some Work [X] -Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [ ] -Unreal Scenarios [ ] Bouts of Powergaming [ ] Bouts of Metagaming [ ] Conflicting Answers [ ] Character is Cliche [X] Requires a Villain Application [ ] Form: Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ] Missing Areas [ ] Breaking Rules [ ] Cliche [X] Plagiarized [ ] Skin: Missing Skin [ ] -Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ] -Incorrect Character Description [ ] -Incorrect Skin Format [ ] -Unloreful Skin [ ] Other Comments: I suggest you correct the errors inscribed above and re-apply. You are a promising applicant, and I believe your application needs a bit touching up. Take a read at the lore, and learn the correct definition for some of the terms asked upon in the format. Thanks, and Good Luck with your next application! PLEASE RE-APPLY AFTER A PERIOD OF 24 HOURS ~ THANK YOU

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Your Application has been... DENIED [X] Put on PENDING [ ] Reason(s) Why Your Application Was Denied: [[X's mark the parts you need to rectify.]] Out of Character: Missing Areas [ ] Bad Information [ ] Role Play: Missing Biography [ ] -Short Biography [X] Insufficient Information in OOC [ ] -Insufficient Information in Metagaming Definition [X] -Insufficient Information in Powergaming Definition [X] Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ] Insufficient Knowledge of the World [ ] Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ] -Open Response Questions are Lacking [X] -Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [X] -Unreal Scenarios [ ] Bouts of Powergaming [ ] Bouts of Metagaming [ ] Conflicting Answers [ ] Character is Cliche [ ] Requires a Villain Application [ ] Form: Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ] Missing Areas [ ] Breaking Rules [ ] Cliche [ ] Plagiarized [ ] Skin: Missing Skin [ ] -Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ] -Incorrect Character Description [ ] -Incorrect Skin Format [ ] -Unloreful Skin [ ] Other Comments: Overall, your application was indeed a bit lacking. However, I deeply enjoyed reading your application. By the choice of words, it seems you are an intelligent individual who shows promise. I would like to see you fix all of the disclosed/marked errors above in your application and re-apply. Good Luck! PLEASE RE-APPLY AFTER A PERIOD OF 24 HOURS`

Trivane grunts, noticing the compilation of bandits issuing their demands to his people. He reaches over near the battered sheath attached to the side of his hip, and proceeds to pull and remove the golden battleaxe rested comfortably in his sheath. Holding the axe in an upright position, he brandishes it a few paces before the bandits, displaying his weapon. "I'm not for bandits issuing petty demands to my people. You're all failures to humanity! May God watch over you, so that perhaps one day you will see the Light.. I will quell your requests with the tip of my axe, as it splits through your corpses, one and ALL! Our military is weak, but I am not. One will not walk in here and demand diamonds. It will not be accepted." He is suited in a clad diamond armor; He takes a step forward with his armor clattering with noise as he approaches the camels. "Besides, what can you do? You're rested on those camels." Trivane turns his back for one moment, shouting towards the tower where the soldiers are resting, "AY! Come down 'ere! If you want to actually prove to me you're not a bunch of insolent failures, come down here and help combat these fools! This isn't a drill!" (( My 700th Post. ))

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Your Application has been... DENIED [X] Put on PENDING [ ] Reason(s) Why Your Application Was Denied: [[X's mark the parts you need to rectify.]] Out of Character: Missing Areas [ ] Bad Information [ ] Role Play: Missing Biography [ ] -Short Biography [X] Insufficient Information in OOC [ ] -Insufficient Information in Metagaming Definition [X] -Insufficient Information in Powergaming Definition [X] Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [X] Insufficient Knowledge of the World [X] Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ] -Open Response Questions are Lacking [X] -Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [X] -Unreal Scenarios [X] Bouts of Powergaming [ ] Bouts of Metagaming [ ] Conflicting Answers [ ] Character is Cliche [ ] Requires a Villain Application [ ] Form: Bad Spelling/Grammar [X] Missing Areas [ ] Breaking Rules [ ] Cliche [ ] Plagiarized [ ] Skin: Missing Skin [ ] -Skin Doesn't Fit Character [X] -Incorrect Character Description [ ] -Incorrect Skin Format [X] -Unloreful Skin [X] Other Comments: The reasons leading to your denial were disclosed / marked above. I'll elaborate a bit more upon what you need to present a successful passing application. It seems you did indeed put a tad bit effort into your biography, however your responses were quite lacking being around 1-2 sentences. Your definitions were incorrect. There are more reasons, but the rest of them are indicated above. Good Luck should you choose to Re-Apply. PLEASE RE-APPLY AFTER A PERIOD OF 24 HOURS, THANK YOU.

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Your Application has been... DENIED [X] Put on PENDING [ ] Reason(s) Why Your Application Was Denied: [[X's mark the parts you need to rectify.]] Out of Character: Missing Areas [X] Bad Information [X] Role Play: Missing Biography [ ] -Short Biography [X] Insufficient Information in OOC [ ] -Insufficient Information in Metagaming Definition [X] -Insufficient Information in Powergaming Definition [X] Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [X] Insufficient Knowledge of the World [X] Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [X] -Open Response Questions are Lacking [X] -Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [ ] -Unreal Scenarios [X] Bouts of Powergaming [X] Bouts of Metagaming [ ] Conflicting Answers [ ] Character is Cliche [X] Requires a Villain Application [ ] Form: Bad Spelling/Grammar [X] Missing Areas [X] Breaking Rules [ ] Cliche [ ] Plagiarized [ ] Skin: Missing Skin [X] -Skin Doesn't Fit Character [X] -Incorrect Character Description [X] -Incorrect Skin Format [X] -Unloreful Skin [ ] Other Comments: Your Reasoning for Denial is Disclosed / Marked Above. Overall, it seems your application lacked a lot of effort. Next time, please implement much more detail and effort into your application-- I suggest you take a read at our lore and further your knowledge with roleplaying. You had quite a few errors, but they can be corrected with careful study of their meaning and context in Lord of the Craft. PLEASE RE-APPLY AFTER A PERIOD OF 24 HOURS, THANK YOU.

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Your Application has been... DENIED [X] Put on PENDING [ ] Reason(s) Why Your Application Was Denied: [[X's mark the parts you need to rectify.]] Out of Character: Missing Areas [ ] Bad Information [ ] Role Play: Missing Biography [ ] -Short Biography [ ] Insufficient Information in OOC [ ] -Insufficient Information in Metagaming Definition [X] -Insufficient Information in Powergaming Definition [X] Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [X] Insufficient Knowledge of the World [X] Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [X] -Open Response Questions are Lacking [X] -Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [ ] -Unreal Scenarios [ ] Bouts of Powergaming [X] Bouts of Metagaming [ ] Conflicting Answers [ ] Character is Cliche [X] Requires a Villain Application [X] Form: Bad Spelling/Grammar [X] Missing Areas [X] Breaking Rules [ ] Cliche [ ] Plagiarized [ ] Skin: Missing Skin [X] -Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ] -Incorrect Character Description [ ] -Incorrect Skin Format [X] -Unloreful Skin [ ] Other Comments: You've got quite a few errors, all of which are disclosed (marked) above. Take a read at our wiki, where you can acquire a knowledge of not only the lore of Asulon, but also how we define some of the roleplaying terms here at Lord of the Craft and perhaps how to Roleplay. PLEASE RE-APPLY AFTER A 24 HOUR PERIOD, THANK YOU.

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Your Application has been... DENIED [X] Put on PENDING [ ] Reason(s) Why Your Application Was Denied: [[X's mark the parts you need to rectify.]] Out of Character: Missing Areas [ ] Bad Information [X] Role Play: Missing Biography [ ] -Short Biography [ ] Insufficient Information in OOC [ ] -Insufficient Information in Metagaming Definition [ ] -Insufficient Information in Powergaming Definition [X] Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [X] Insufficient Knowledge of the World [X] Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ] -Open Response Questions are Lacking [X] -Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [ ] -Unreal Scenarios [X] Bouts of Powergaming [X] Bouts of Metagaming [ ] Conflicting Answers [ ] Character is Cliche [X] Requires a Villain Application [X] Form: Bad Spelling/Grammar [X] Missing Areas [ ] Breaking Rules [ ] Cliche [X] Plagiarized [X] Skin: Missing Skin [ ] -Skin Doesn't Fit Character [X] -Incorrect Character Description [ ] -Incorrect Skin Format [ ] -Unloreful Skin [ ] Other Comments: Your application all around has a few bit of flaws, I'll elaborate a bit upon the reasons marked above, but will not fully disclose and explain everything right here. Your character possesses the ability to "steal", this is not possible without a Villain Application-- furthermore, you must remove all villainry from your application.

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Your Application has been... DENIED [X] Put on PENDING [ ] Reason(s) Why Your Application Was Denied: [[X's mark the parts you need to rectify.]] Out of Character: Missing Areas [ ] Bad Information [X] Role Play: Missing Biography [ ] -Short Biography [X] Insufficient Information in OOC [ ] -Insufficient Information in Metagaming Definition [ ] -Insufficient Information in Powergaming Definition [X] Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [X] Insufficient Knowledge of the World [X] Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [X] -Open Response Questions are Lacking [X] -Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [ ] -Unreal Scenarios [X] Bouts of Powergaming [ ] Bouts of Metagaming [ ] Conflicting Answers [ ] Character is Cliche [X] Requires a Villain Application [ ] Form: Bad Spelling/Grammar [X] Missing Areas [ ] Breaking Rules [ ] Cliche [ ] Plagiarized [ ] Skin: Missing Skin [X] -Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ] -Incorrect Character Description [ ] -Incorrect Skin Format [X] -Unloreful Skin [ ] Other Comments: Read upon the lore and fix all the reasons marked above. Please Re-Apply After a 24 Hour Period, failure to do so will result in denial of your application.

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Denied, Please Re-Apply AFTER 24 HOURS. You must fill out an application. The format is located here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/43580-official-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/