Thu'um

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Your Application has been... DENIED [X] Put on PENDING [ ] Reason(s) Why Your Application Was Denied: [[X's mark the parts you need to rectify.]] Out of Character: Missing Areas [ ] Bad Information [ ] Role Play: Missing Biography [ ] -Short Biography [ ] Insufficient Information in OOC [ ] -Insufficient Information in Metagaming Definition [ ] -Insufficient Information in Powergaming Definition [X] Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [X] Insufficient Knowledge of the World [ ] Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [X] -Open Response Questions are Lacking [X] -Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [ ] -Unreal Scenarios [ ] Bouts of Powergaming [X] Bouts of Metagaming [ ] Conflicting Answers [ ] Character is Cliche [X] Requires a Villain Application [ ] Form: Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ] Missing Areas [ ] Breaking Rules [ ] Cliche [ ] Plagiarized [ ] Skin: Missing Skin [ ] -Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ] -Incorrect Character Description [ ] -Incorrect Skin Format [X] -Unloreful Skin [ ] Other Comments: Your application has promise, however you have powergaming instances in your responses and also your definitions could be elaborated a bit upon more... The rest of the reasons according to your denial are described above.

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied, Please Re-Apply after a 24 Hour Period. Your Application is using an Out-Dated Format. The Correct Format can be found here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/43580-official-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/

Moved to Denied Forum

Your Application has been... DENIED [X] Put on PENDING [ ] Reason(s) Why Your Application Was Denied: [[X's mark the parts you need to rectify.]] Out of Character: Missing Areas [ ] Bad Information [ ] Role Play: Missing Biography [ ] -Short Biography [X] Insufficient Information in OOC [ ] -Insufficient Information in Metagaming Definition [X] -Insufficient Information in Powergaming Definition [ ] Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [X] Insufficient Knowledge of the World [ ] Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ] -Open Response Questions are Lacking [X] -Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [ ] -Unreal Scenarios [ ] Bouts of Powergaming [ ] Bouts of Metagaming [ ] Conflicting Answers [ ] Character is Cliche [ ] Requires a Villain Application [X] Form: Bad Spelling/Grammar [X] Missing Areas [ ] Breaking Rules [ ] Cliche [ ] Plagiarized [ ] Skin: Missing Skin [ ] -Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ] -Incorrect Character Description [ ] -Incorrect Skin Format [ ] -Unloreful Skin [ ] Other Comments: In your application, your character possesses / performs villainous acts. You need to remove this from your application. The rest of the reasons for your denial are disclosed above.

Moved to Denied Forum

Your Application has been... DENIED [X] Put on PENDING [ ] Reason(s) Why Your Application Was Denied: [[X's mark the parts you need to rectify.]] Out of Character: Missing Areas [ ] Bad Information [ ] Role Play: Missing Biography [ ] -Short Biography [X] Insufficient Information in OOC [ ] -Insufficient Information in Metagaming Definition [X] -Insufficient Information in Powergaming Definition [ ] Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ] Insufficient Knowledge of the World [ ] Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ] -Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [ ] -Open Response Questions are Lacking [X] -Unreal Scenarios [ ] Bouts of Powergaming [X] Bouts of Metagaming [ ] Conflicting Answers [ ] Character is Cliche [X] Requires a Villain Application [ ] Form: Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ] Missing Areas [ ] Breaking Rules [ ] Cliche [X] Plagiarized [ ] Skin: Missing Skin [ ] -Skin Doesn't Fit Character [X] -Incorrect Character Description [ ] -Incorrect Skin Format [X] -Unloreful Skin [X] Other Comments: All of the Reasoning for your denial has been disclosed. Your Responses Contained Powergaming, and the rest of the reasoning is marked above ^ Please correct your application, then proceed to Re-APPLY AFTER 24 HOURS.

Trivane smiles as he notices the signs as he walks through Sarun, "Finally we're actually going to be strict about the untrained fools that enlisted in our army." He turns around and faces the rest of the Sarun population, holding up his hand to gather everyone's attention. "Symodimi and I shall be disciplining any and all soldiers who decide they're going to disobey orders. We're going to be handing out strict punishments. Regulations and Training Regiments are being developed. No Longer will I see fools falling on the ground helplessly. GET UP! We're GOING TO Train."

Prince Trivane stands next to his father, listening to Sauros's speech. He turns to Sauros as he ends his speech speaking with a hushed tone, "I must assure you, friend, our people do not believe of yours as bandits. It is sickening Thork has been twisted enough to believe and to also convince some of our soldiers into believing you were bandits. He will be dealt with promptly. His crimes against our Nation have inflicted damage upon our people and action will be taken. We shall maintain friendly relations, no longer shall such putrid endeavors pollute our lands, I am going to implement a few orders to make sure this never happens again." Following his speech, Trivane hands a small amount of minas to Sauros. "It isn't much, but it is all I have with me. Good luck."

(( Alrighty here... it seems that after reviewing the results of the Active Villain Survey conducted recently, it seems that Thork (Minecraft Name: MrJakkid)'s Villain Application would be deemed inactive. Proof: As Disclosed above, his Villain Application is Inactive. ))

((The Next bit of OOC that is posted-- I will personally grab into your computer and remove your fingers from their sockets so that you can't type. If you wish to disclose / settle this argument via OOC, do so via PM. OOC is not necessary, please for the love of god Roleplay. Gaius -- It was Thork's character who possessed a reason to inflict damage to the Subadai, I do not know his reasoning behind it.))

Trivane Approaches the Note, giving it a close read and takes a moment to collect his thoughts. He lets out a long sigh, muttering words under his breath so that no one will hear him, "I do indeed remember Rose speaking of him.. heh.. no matter. I will see to it that he will be skinned alive, if applicable. Attempted murder, treason, and conspiracy? Never will these be tolerated. Action shall be taken! The scum hit my sister! How dare he? If it weren't for my strong belief in my God would I not tear the very skin off of his corpse myself, limb by limb.." He then proceeds to walk off giggling towards the Sarun docks.

"I assure you this is currently not finished. Horen and God are crucial parts to our Kingdom and will be implemented soon enough."

Moved to Denied Forum

Trouvo, this is in the application submissions section? Unless perhaps someone moved it. Besides that, here is your verdict "Argane": Denied, Please Re-Apply in 24 Hours. - You're missing half your application. I don't seen any open response questions. - Your Metagaming Definition is Incorrect. - Your Powergaming Definition is Incorrect. - Your Roleplaying Definition is Incorrect, and/or poorly structured. - You did not post a skin (Missing) - You did not post a biography (Missing) - Please fix various grammatical mistakes and pronunciation upon sending your next application.

I'll let Freya attend to this, however I'll let you know your format is out-dated. Edit: So it seems that you posted status updates regarding your minecraft account being hacked? If this is true, I've noticed that you posted a new application (Which, I think is okay?) This application currently is using an outdated format. Please consult the up-to-date format located here to edit your application:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/43580-official-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied, Please Re-Apply After 24 Hours. Before I properly review this application, I'd like you to fix your formatting. It is very difficult to read. On top of this, some of your responses lack effort overall. (Open Response Questions possess 1-2 sentences, lack detail / effort). Your character also is skilled at magic. Your character cannot start off with magic. Please fix your application's formatting so I can properly disclose all of the reasons for your denial.

((All military positions are filled.))

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Denied, please re-apply after a 24 hour period. - You're using an outdated application format. Please use this format here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/43580-official-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/