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Dromui

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    Welcome, Kinglund! You've been formally accepted to Lord of the Craft! Thank you for applying to the server and joining our little community, here! Within the next few minutes you should be whitelisted and ready to roleplay with the rest of the community. If you require any help at all with getting started, don't be afraid to send me or any other member of the Application Team or Game Moderator team a private message. On top of that, Lord of the Craft has two public discords new and old players alike can join in to discuss the goings on of the server and become acquainted with other members of the community! They will be linked below! The New Player Discord is a great way to get in contact with established and waiting players who are interested in helping you find your way in the realm of Atlas.

     

    LotC Public Discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

     

    LotC New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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    Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft! After reviewing your application, I sadly have to deny it. Overall it was a pretty good read, but there are a few things that have to be changed in order to be accepted on the server. Before reapplying, I would suggest registering on our forums so the next time you apply, if you make any mistakes you'll be given a 24 hour period to make edits, rather than getting automatically denied. The changes necessary are as followed:

    • In your backstory, it looks like it says she has become one of the greatest assassins known to Haelun'or. Considering your character is new, they cannot be seen as such, as it includes a functioning and present player base on the server. I would suggest perhaps editing that to her wanting to become one of the best, or something of the sort.
    • Your 'Interesting Facts' section must contain at least one fault, to provide proper depth to your character.

    You can reapply to the server in three hours. Once more I would suggest you register a forum account, as it makes this process much easier. Below are two links that can aid you in the application process, and if you require any help further, please feel free to PM me directly:

     

    Snow Elf Wiki: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Snow_Elves

     

    LotC New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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    Alrighty bud, there is quite a bit we're going to have to work on here, so lets get this started. Sadly though, I must deny you as you plagiarized your definitions and we on Lord of the Craft do not permit plagiarism in any capacity. Below will be a list of things about your application that must be changed in order to be accepted onto Lord of the Craft:

    • Read the definitions of what powergaming and metagaming are once more, and properly rewrite them in your own words.
    • Expand your background and include at least 1-3 references to currently accepted, LotC lore.
    • The character name section is not for your Minecraft Username, but how your character will be referred to during roleplay.
    • Your description should be used to properly describe how your character appears. This should include basic descriptions of their physical characteristics and clothing.
    • Your 'Interesting Facts' section should add depth to the character and should include at least one fault. Those listed do not.
    • Your skin appears to be an Assassins Creed skin. I would suggest searching for something more fitting of our server's theme.

    You must wait six hours before posting another application to join Lord of the Craft. Once those six hours are up, you can reapply with an edited application. If you require any help, do not be afraid to send a private message to me on the forums or @ me on the status updates section or on my profile directly. Below you will find some useful links that can help you with lore as well as finding aid within the community!
     

    Snow Elf Wiki: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Snow_Elves

     

    LotC New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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    I have to say, this application was well put together. You have quite a few lore references, you're definitions are great, and you've seemed to really take time out to flesh your character and his history. However, I cannot outright accept it for a few reasons. They are listed below:

    • Your backstory is well put together and has quite a few lore references, however, the timeline does not match up with the server history. Anthos alone was nearly three hundred years ago in server lore, Aegis even longer. For your character, a human who only lives up to 150 years old at max, to of been around for the Teuntonic Order's existance during these times, he'd of died of old age. As such, you'll need to rework his story to show a more recent timeline of events.
    • Your facts require at least one flaw.

    You have up to 24 hours to make these changes. If you fail to do so, you will be denied and will be required to wait an additional three hours before applying again. If you require any help at all, do not be afraid to send me a private message or @ me in the status updates section or on my profile directly. To gain a more in depth understanding of current human lore and timelines, I would suggest taking a look at the wiki or following the discord link below to join the LotC New Player Discord. It is a diverse group of individuals who are there to help struggling new players in anyway possible, whether it be through the application process or finding RP on the server. They can likely aid in your learning of more modern lore.

     

    LotC New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/vwyZNg

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    Welcome to Lord of the Craft, my friend! Your application was a rather fun read, I'm not going to lie to you. While the vast majority of it was almost perfect, there are a few things I'm going to need you to edit up for me, in order to get you accepted and roleplaying in our little corner of the world, here. They are as follows:

    • Your metagaming definition is quite comical, and fits the definition, in your own wording of course. However, your powergaming definition really doesn't define what it is to powergame. As such, I'll need you to fix that up for me.
    • Your backstory was a really good read. However, you cannot include "human royalty" as a means of aggressors within your tale. While it is interesting, the human royalty is played by other characters and by including "human royalty" into your application, you are possibly including dozens of established players without their permission.
    • Your backstory requires at least 1-3 references to currently accepted lore on Lord of the Craft. Go ahead and edit those in for me.

    You have 24 hours to make the necessary edits to your application. If you require any help, please feel free to PM me directly or @ me on the status update section or on my profile directly. Below will be some helpful links you can utilize for this application process! Good luck!

     

    Link to the Snow Elf Wiki page: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Snow_Elves

     

    Link to the LotC New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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    Hey man, welcome to Lord of the Craft! It's exciting to see a new face show interest in joining the community. I hate to say this, friend, but you are sadly denied at this moment. Do not fear! You can reapply in three hours with the necessary changes to the application. Below you will see what you need to change:

    • Expand your backstory, please. 
    • And finally, this is a big issue to fix; you need to include at least 1-3 references to currently accepted lore on the server into the application.

    When you reapply, please, please, please feel free to register on the forums. That way, next time around instead of getting instantly denied, you will be put onto pending and will be given twenty four hours to make changes! If you require any help, please feel free to send me a private message, or any of the application team really!

     

    Here is a Link to the LotC New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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    Hello, friend! I am glad to see you've decided to try and join our community, but sadly your application has denied. There are various reasons for this and they shall be listed below. Next time around, I suggest you register for our forums, that way the next time your application is reviewed, it can be edited and commented on by you. Here are the aspects of the application you need to change in order to be accepted:

    • Your definitions are incorrect. Go ahead and reread them and update it on your next application!
    • I'll need you to not only expand on your backstory, increasing it's length in the like, but you're also required to include 1-3 references to current and accepted lore for the server. That way, you can show you've familiarized yourself with the servers story.
    • Please expand your character description as well.
    • Your interesting facts are indeed interesting, but I need you to add one fault in there as well. That way you can add a bit more depth to the character of Jiffious!

    You must wait three more hours before applying, but once that time is up, please feel free to repost your application, preferably on a registered forum account! If you need any help, don't afraid to PM me on the forums or @ me in the status updates section or my profile directly. Below you'll also find a link to the LotC New Player Discord!

     

    New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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    Boop! What a pleasure to see you've decided to apply to join our community this day! Your application was a joy to read, but there are some aspects of it I'm going to need you to change before I can accept your application. They are listed below:

    • You definitions are lacking. There is more to powergaming and metagaming than what you've listed, so take a look at the definitions once more and expand on it. Make sure not to plagiarize, of course!
    • I need you to include anywhere from 1-3 references of current and accepted server lore, in order to be accepted.

    You have up to 24 hours to make the edits necessary to the application before it will be denied. If you require any help, do not be afraid to send me a private message on the forums, friend. Also, below will be a link to the LotC New Player Discord, where a present and waiting community are more than willing to help you in anyway possible!

     

    New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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