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Application Comments posted by Dromui
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That was honestly a solid application for what might of been your first go around! Good work! I have a few things I'd like you to edit for me and you'll be accepted to join our fine little community!
- Please expand on your definition of powergaming, if possible. You have a good base there, but there is a bit more to it than that.
- If you could also expand on your description of your character, it be great.
Go ahead and make these small, simple edits to your application, and you'll be set! If you need anything, don't be afraid to PM me on the forums or @ me in the status updates section or on my profile directly. You have 24 hours to make the necessary edits!
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Changed Status to Denied
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Good day! Due to being a guest on the forums, I am required to deny you directly. If you would like to be placed on pending next time around, for the application, go ahead and make a forum account. Below I will list what in the application you need to fix/expand on to be accepted.
- Your biography/backstory is lacking. Not only do you need to expand on it for me, but you are also required to include a piece of server lore to show you've familiarized yourself with the world you're applying to join.
- I'll also need you to expand on the description a bit. Include how the character looks and acts if possible, as giving him an appearance and personality goes a long way in character creation.
- The facts you've listed are indeed interesting, but I also need you to go ahead and add a fault for me. Not only is it required, but it also add a great deal of depth to a character.
Go ahead and make the changes I've requested and post a new application, ideally on a registered forum account! You need to wait at least three hours before posting your next application as well! Good luck in your endeavors, my friend.
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Changed Status to Under Review
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After further review, your application has been accepted! Thank you for editing in as asked and bearing with me, as I completely missed your faults in my first read through. I'm excited to see Arngrim in game, as the character seems like a well thought out and put together, dwarf. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to PM me here on the forums. Also, feel free to join LotC's New Player Discord! It goes a long way in helping those new to the server in finding their way within Atlas! Cheers, mate!
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Changed Status to Accepted
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After reviewing the changes you've made to the application at my request, you've been accepted to Lord of the Craft! Welcome to the community, my friend, I am glad to see you've decided to join our corner of the world. It's honestly been a pleasure to review your application, and I am glad I was able to help manage it in a timely fashion. If you require any help during your time on Lord of the Craft, never be afraid to message me directly here on the forums or over Discord.
Also! Here is an invite link to the New Player Discord, where a friendly and waiting group of our community are ready to answer any and all questions you have: https://discord.gg/pMqsjC
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Changed Status to Pending
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After careful analysis, your application has been reviewed and has been put onto Pending. I'll need you to look over your application once more, make a few small edits, and you'll be accepted, my friend!
- Your character cannot start with any magic. It is unclear whether he has any or not based on the application. I am leaning more towards he is looking for it, rather than currently practicing it. You don't necessarily have to change anything on that end, I just want to ensure you are in the proper mindset about magic in general when it comes to LotC.
- Your character is very unique, I must say, and the fact further expand on that. Though I would suggest perhaps taking out the part about his favorite magic, and adding in that he is not trained to fight whatsoever. A fault is necessary to show a balanced and interesting character and while you've already produced one within an earlier section of the application, I just need it added to that section and you'll be set.
If you need help please feel free to message me on the forums, comment on here, message me on Discord, or @ me on my profile or the status update section! You have 24 hours to make the necessary edits. Good luck, friend!
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Changed Status to Under Review
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As of now, your application is under review and has been put onto Pending. I'll need you to make a few changes the application and you'll be good to go, boss.
- Your definition of powergaming only covers one aspect of the term itself. Go ahead and take a closer look at the rules for me, update the definition of powergaming, and you'll be good to go.
- The backstory was a good read, it's an interesting take on why your character isn't fond of alcohol and the like. Though Caras Eldar is currently the capitol of the Dominion of Malin. As such, it isn't quite in ruins: yet. Go ahead and edit that up a bit, and you're solid.
- You have quite a few interesting facts there that make your character unique, but I'm not seeing a flaw. I need at least one and you're set. Make that edit, and I'll be ready and willing to accept you, good sir.
If you need help please feel free to message me on the forums, comment on here, message me on discord, or go ahead and @ me on the status updates or my profile directly. You have 24 hours to make the changes necessary for your app to be accepted. Good luck, my friend.
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Your application is under review and has been put onto Pending!
I'll just need you to change a few things about your application for it to be accepted! They are listed below:
- Your definition of powergaming is lackluster, please expand on it to include other ways one can powergame while in a roleplay scenario.
- Your biography while interesting, is short and should be expanded on. On top of that, it's formatting is a bit off and you have failed to include a piece of server lore showing you've read up on the server's history. Please feel free to fix that formatting and include some lore for me!
- The facts for Arngrim are indeed interesting, but I'm not seeing any faults. I need at least one in order for you to be accepted. Take a moment to look over your character and add a bit more depth in that regard, and you'll be set, bud.If you need help please feel free to message me on the forums, comment on here, throw a message at me on Discord, or even @ me on my profile or the status update section. Good luck, I'm excited to see what you come up with!
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Salazar_Endercon
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Changed Status to Pending