Dromui

Hey man, thanks for applying to Lord of the Craft! I'm excited to see you're interested in joining our little community, here. There are a few issues with the application I need you to work on before I can accept you. However, because you applied as a guest and not on a registered account, I have to deny you! Both your definitions are wrong. If you take another look at the rules or do a little more research, you'll find the proper definition for them. Go ahead and change that definition for me. Your backstory isn't bad, but the switch from third person to first person midway through makes it a bit difficult to read. On top of that, it is missing any sort of reference to currently accepted server lore, to show you've some understanding on the status of current, server lore. Please edit up the formatting and view point of the application, and add 1-2 references to current LotC lore. This is just a personal suggestion. Your name is a bit too close to "Legolas" from Lord of the Rings. While it isn't breaking any rules, it might make your time on the server a bit easier if you come up with a more unique, personal name. Please expand on the description of the character as well. Include a basic run down of what he's wearing, as well as a bit more about how he looks. Thinks like height, weight, eye color, skin color all go a long way. Thank you for taking your time to read my response! Please feel free to register to the server before applying again, that way you don't have to get auto denied and will be given a 24 hour grace period for your application. If you need any help, don't be afraid to PM me on the forums or @ me on the status update section or my profile directly!

Changed Status to Under Review

Changed Status to Pending

Hey bud and welcome to Lord of the Craft! I've taken some time to review your application and there are a few things I need for you to edit before I can make a conclusion on your application. Do not worry, you aren't being denied, you'll simply be given up to 24 hours to make any and all edits necessary that I require. These edits are as followed: I need you to expand a bit on your definitions. There is a bit more to what you gave me that I'd like to see added. This is a high fantasy roleplaying server. While I will not deny you for your choice in a character name, 'Flame' is not necessarily fitting of the theme. You aren't required to change it, but do consider doing so. It can always be an alias or nickname for the character if you decide to do so. I would appreciate it if you'd edit up your backstory a bit. It's not so bad, but the grammar could use a bit of work to make it a bit easier to read. Also, you've failed to use some form of preexisting lore of the server within your backstory. If you could add anywhere from 1-3 references, to show you've read some lore and familiarized yourself with it, it will raise your chances of being accepted immensely. Sadly, you're first character on the server cannot be a child. As such, they are required to be at least 18 years of age. For your skin/description, I wouldn't describe it as a hoodie. Make a few edits to the description so it's a bit more theme-fitting. Such as a blue "cloak" rather than a "hoodie". You have 24 hours to make the necessary edits to the application before it is denied. If you require any help, please feel free to send me a message here on the forums, or @ me on the status update bar or on my profile directly. I'm more than willing to help and answer any questions you have. If you seek further aid, you can join the LotC New Player Discord, where we have a large number of dedicated players who seek to aid applicants in joining our community! New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/X4tfun

Changed Status to Under Review

Changed Status to Accepted

Alrighty! Congratulations, mate! I am excited to be the first to welcome you to Lord of the Craft! The description itself wasn't initially bad, I just wanted a bit more because I'm picky. As it stands, it was pretty good so I'm more than willing to skip it over. Your definition of powergaming is much better! I appreciate you taking time out of your day to go ahead and finish all this in a timely manner! Welcome to Lord of the Craft! If you need anything, don't be afraid to contact any member of the Application Team or myself! And for your use, here is the link to the Lord of the Craft New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/pMqsjC

Changed Status to Pending

That was honestly a solid application for what might of been your first go around! Good work! I have a few things I'd like you to edit for me and you'll be accepted to join our fine little community! Please expand on your definition of powergaming, if possible. You have a good base there, but there is a bit more to it than that. If you could also expand on your description of your character, it be great. Go ahead and make these small, simple edits to your application, and you'll be set! If you need anything, don't be afraid to PM me on the forums or @ me in the status updates section or on my profile directly. You have 24 hours to make the necessary edits!

Changed Status to Under Review

Changed Status to Denied

Good day! Due to being a guest on the forums, I am required to deny you directly. If you would like to be placed on pending next time around, for the application, go ahead and make a forum account. Below I will list what in the application you need to fix/expand on to be accepted. Your biography/backstory is lacking. Not only do you need to expand on it for me, but you are also required to include a piece of server lore to show you've familiarized yourself with the world you're applying to join. I'll also need you to expand on the description a bit. Include how the character looks and acts if possible, as giving him an appearance and personality goes a long way in character creation. The facts you've listed are indeed interesting, but I also need you to go ahead and add a fault for me. Not only is it required, but it also add a great deal of depth to a character. Go ahead and make the changes I've requested and post a new application, ideally on a registered forum account! You need to wait at least three hours before posting your next application as well! Good luck in your endeavors, my friend.

Changed Status to Under Review

Changed Status to Accepted

After further review, your application has been accepted! Thank you for editing in as asked and bearing with me, as I completely missed your faults in my first read through. I'm excited to see Arngrim in game, as the character seems like a well thought out and put together, dwarf. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to PM me here on the forums. Also, feel free to join LotC's New Player Discord! It goes a long way in helping those new to the server in finding their way within Atlas! Cheers, mate! Lord of the Craft New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/pMqsjC

Changed Status to Denied

After creating an account on the forums, your application was accepted elsewhere. This is just for filing purposes, you will remain accepted on the server.

Changed Status to Accepted

After reviewing the changes you've made to the application at my request, you've been accepted to Lord of the Craft! Welcome to the community, my friend, I am glad to see you've decided to join our corner of the world. It's honestly been a pleasure to review your application, and I am glad I was able to help manage it in a timely fashion. If you require any help during your time on Lord of the Craft, never be afraid to message me directly here on the forums or over Discord. Also! Here is an invite link to the New Player Discord, where a friendly and waiting group of our community are ready to answer any and all questions you have: https://discord.gg/pMqsjC

Changed Status to Pending

After careful analysis, your application has been reviewed and has been put onto Pending. I'll need you to look over your application once more, make a few small edits, and you'll be accepted, my friend! Your character cannot start with any magic. It is unclear whether he has any or not based on the application. I am leaning more towards he is looking for it, rather than currently practicing it. You don't necessarily have to change anything on that end, I just want to ensure you are in the proper mindset about magic in general when it comes to LotC. Your character is very unique, I must say, and the fact further expand on that. Though I would suggest perhaps taking out the part about his favorite magic, and adding in that he is not trained to fight whatsoever. A fault is necessary to show a balanced and interesting character and while you've already produced one within an earlier section of the application, I just need it added to that section and you'll be set. If you need help please feel free to message me on the forums, comment on here, message me on Discord, or @ me on my profile or the status update section! You have 24 hours to make the necessary edits. Good luck, friend!

Changed Status to Under Review

Changed Status to Pending

As of now, your application is under review and has been put onto Pending. I'll need you to make a few changes the application and you'll be good to go, boss. Your definition of powergaming only covers one aspect of the term itself. Go ahead and take a closer look at the rules for me, update the definition of powergaming, and you'll be good to go. The backstory was a good read, it's an interesting take on why your character isn't fond of alcohol and the like. Though Caras Eldar is currently the capitol of the Dominion of Malin. As such, it isn't quite in ruins: yet. Go ahead and edit that up a bit, and you're solid. You have quite a few interesting facts there that make your character unique, but I'm not seeing a flaw. I need at least one and you're set. Make that edit, and I'll be ready and willing to accept you, good sir. If you need help please feel free to message me on the forums, comment on here, message me on discord, or go ahead and @ me on the status updates or my profile directly. You have 24 hours to make the changes necessary for your app to be accepted. Good luck, my friend.

Changed Status to Under Review