Hello! Thank you for once more applying to Lord of the Craft! Sadly, I must deny your application to join the server. Due to being a guest account, I would suggest registering with us before posting another application, that way you will be given a 24 hour grace period for necessary edits to the application. Below you will find the necessary edits you must make to the application in order to be accepted to the server:
Please make sure to define what metagaming and powergaming is. And ensure it is done in your own words. The definitions can be found if you simply google them or look into the rules.
Your backstory has a few things wrong with it, that must be changed.
Please fix up the grammar and spelling, that way it is easier to review.
Your backstory must include at least 1-3 references to currently accepted lore on Lord of the Craft. You can find a wide assortment of lore and history upon the wiki: http://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/
You cannot have any magic when applying to the server. If you want magic, it must be found through roleplay.
This one is pretty big: You cannot play a wolf. In the drop down for your character's race, you will find all the available races you can apply to play as on the server.
Your character's name should not be your Minecraft Username. Instead, it can be something akin to "Juliet" or "Scarlet". Your name will be what other character's refer to you as, during roleplay.
For your character's age, it cannot be under the age of 18. You cannot apply to the server with a child character.
The character's description section should include the following information:
A description of your character's appearance.
A description of what your character is wearing.
The interesting facts section is not about you personally, but instead about the character you will be roleplaying as. This can include anything such as your characters likes, dislikes, fears, skills, hobbies. There must be at least one fault.
Your skin appears too modern for the server. It should be something more thematic and appropriate for a high fantasy roleplaying server. Here is a link to some skins you can choose from or use as inspiration:
In six hours you may reapply to the server with a new application. I recommend making a forum account, once more. If you require anything else, feel free to PM me for aid. Also, I am going to say this with no malicious intent. You don't necessarily carry yourself as an adult would. There are various mistakes within the application and mannerisms you hold that make you appear younger than 19. If there is some reason for that, such as a language barrier or something, don't be afraid to let the person reviewing your application know. Below you will find a link to the LotC New Player Discord, which is full of people more than willing to aid you in the application process, it will make it far easier to have the aid of experienced players. I promise.
LotC New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw