Sybbyl0127

Accepted. 

Accepted. 

Accepted. 

Confused, as he read over the missive a few more times, having picked it up from a bin where someone had thrown it away. "Does this mean it can go in, and read from the library yet..?" The sorvian Glothir asked, looking around at its relatively wood elf saturated surroundings.

He brought the missive to a young Miven, to ask her his questions. @WestCarolina

Denied. 

The requested changes were not made within a reasonable amount of time.

Please take this time to read the currently accepted Golem & golemancy lore pages in order to have a more accurate understanding of the CA.

On 2/23/2022 at 5:38 PM, UnholyJebus said:

Golems have two different personalities. A Red Core and a Blue Core. This character will have a functioning Blue Core at the start. A Red Core is simply a Golem which is "enslaved" and simply more unwilling to follow commands. While they are compelled to do so, they will more than often misinterpret what their Impera commands them to do. A Blue Core Golem is "happy" to serve, and will do their best to ensure the intent of their Impera is followed.

 

This explanation of Red and Blue cores is somewhat incorrect, though I'd like you to read the lore page again to see why for the most part, I can say at least that Red / Blue is not a 'personality', but a 'state of being'. You cannot make a golem CA and start out as Red, please read the lore to understand how becoming a Red golem happens.

On 2/23/2022 at 5:38 PM, UnholyJebus said:

Golems can be no taller than seven and a half feet

Slight bit here, Thanhite golems have a max height of 8ft, but every individual golem type has a different height minimum and maximum

As Timber stated above this previous Monday, general edits are needed. From what I read of your application, I feel you may not have gone over the re-written lore since previous iteration.

Please provide at least a brief mention of sigils in your app, just so that I can see you understand them and how they work, as they are an integreal function of golems.

Glothir reads the missive over once or twice, tilting his head this way and that as he gauged the responses of those of the Vale around him.

Confused, he knew the name of his Nephew, the metal boy Rylanor, and the names of those who spoke against him. His first experience with this conflict within. He held the paper for some time as he watched the others flutter to the ground. 

He had no reason not to believe the words of his nephew, who had never lied to him before, and was unsure how to gauge his own feelings towards the responses of those who lived in the village he'd sword to protect.. In the midst of the mess of papers, he slowly walked away down the roads.

Denied. 

Denied. 

Denied. 

Denied. 

Denied. 

Accepted.

This application has been moved to the Dormant section due to inactivity, the character has had no lessons in Alchemy thus far and remains at Tier1 with no alchemical knowledge.

If you would like to continue playing this character & seek out your first alchemy lesson, please contact Another ST member besides myself to have it re-activated.

Denied. Character is PK'd

Accepted. 

Denied. 

Self taught in what way?

If you mean via a book in game, then please make a ticket in game to have an ST member verify you have access to it. Once that is done, that ST member can either comment here or accept the application

Accepted. 

Denied. Character PK'd

This application has been moved to the dormant forum for inactivity on this character.

This character is at Tier 1 in alchemy, and has been dropped by their teacher.

If you would like to continue roleplaying this character's Alchemy, feel free to reach out to me in order to have the application re-activated, and please keep in mind you will need a new teacher in order to advance [or the same teacher should they agree]

Accepted. 

Denied. 

Denied. 

Denied.