BritBritt

Hey Sarah thanks for keeping me updated with the edits. -Unfortunately your power gaming and meta gaming definitions are still not there. Meta gaming is never alright as it is against server rules. Please use clear examples and explain how those examples would affect roleplay. -Please expand on your characters three interesting facts. She can be sarcastic, loyal, and paranoid but explain why these things either strengthen her or weaken her and why she is that way.

Under Review. Your application has been.... -Congratulations on the acceptance of your application. If you need any help from me feel free to message me on the forums, on discord BritBritt#1506 (the second brit has a second t), or in game /msg Cosmetology -If you need further help please feel free to use OOC chat, /h to access our help chat, or make a modreq using /modreq to get in touch with a GM for more serious issues. -Happy roleplaying and I hope to see you soon c:

Your application has been.... -Congratulations on the acceptance of your application. Please feel free to message me if you need help on the forums, on discord BritBritt#1506 (second brit has a second t), or in game /msg Cosmetology -If you need further help please feel free to use OOC chat, /h to access our help chat, or make a modreq /modreq -Happy Roleplaying and I hope to see you on the server soon c:

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Thank you for refining your strengths and weaknesses. I just need you to refine your power gaming and meta gaming definition to include examples and how they affect role play. If you need any help please contact me.

Your application has been... -You may reapply within three hours. -If you have any questions feel free to contact me on the forums or on discord like you have previously.

Under Review.

Your application has been.... -Congratulations on the acceptance of your application. If you need any help from please message me on the forums, on discord BritBritt#1506 (second brit has a second t), or in game /msg Cosmetology -If you need any further help feel free to use OOC chat, /h to access our help chat, or make a modreq /modreq to speak with a GM. -Happy Roleplaying and I hope to see you playing soon c:

Under Review.

I am giving this player extended time to fix their application. Hello Slip55, I am sorry to hear you are unwell. Feel free to message me when you can and we can work on anything you need help with together.

Your application has been... -You may reapply in 6 hours.

Under Review.

Your application has been.... -Congratulations on the acceptance of your application. If you need any help from me feel free to message me on the forums, on discord BritBritt#1506 (there is a second t), or in game /msg Cosmetology -If you need further help feel free to use OOC chat, /h to access our help chat, or make a modreq /modreq -Happy roleplaying and I hope to see you on the server soon!

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I read this earlier on when it was posted and I actually think this is a great start to an idea. I would love to plus one this but I think in order to give this a plus one it is only fair it gets developed more. If I may make a suggestion I feel that this creature may be a bit more difficult to play or attract players due to the fact that the creatures are a bit anti-social. Example of that being finding them in their habitat or that they will leave for others of their kind. Perhaps making them a bit more social will help bring more of an attraction to this creature and make them easier to play. That being said I do really like where you went with the lore and the idea of emotions because at the end of the day that is how we portray a character is through their emotions! Don't get discouraged by negative feedback, rather use that information to further this creature to the best of your ability. This was an incredibly fun read. C: