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    _JETHR0X_

    in Accepted

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    Changed Status to Under Review

     1yPM0YR.pngYou are almost there, but you could use some help.

    1. Can you please make an edit to your biography, we do not use irl months, We use the Suns Smile, The Grand harvest, snow’s maiden etc...
    2. to your interesting facts, can you please make them a little bit longer and into proper sentences.

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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    SavierTheSpy

    in Denied

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    letoGzw.png Do not fret, you can re apply. I would take the messages I have given you and use them. I have also sent you a message on the fourms telling you what you are still lacking. If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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    bunnycat2048

    in Accepted

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    Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but need some help.

    1. The first thing I notice is that your biography has none of the servers lore, I would request you please add some of it into it. If you need any help here is the wiki. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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    Seragoza

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    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but can use a bit of help.

    1. You biography while it is good and all, it seems to me like it is a big meme. I would request that you edit it and take out the parts like where he lost his virginity at the age of six, and make it more family friendly. 

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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    redflame03

    in Denied

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    Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but can use a little bit of help.

    1. I have sent a message to you on the forums about the issue I have.

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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    NPeirgarten

    in Accepted

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    Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but you could use some help.

    1. I ask that you look back at your power game definition and fix it. If you need some help here is the wiki. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
    2. The second thing is about your biography, While it is good, it can use a bit of the servers lore which it is lacking on, I would also like to say you cannot start on the server as a noble, just to make sure you know. If you need some help with adding server lore here is the wiki https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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    SavierTheSpy

    in Denied

    Posted

    Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.pngYou are almost there, but you can use a little bit of help.

    1. Your Meta game and Power game definition, can use a little bit of help. I would request that you come back and take a look and edit it. If you need help please look to the wiki https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page.
    2. You biography is short and needs some help with lore, I would request you please add to it and then put some of the servers lore into it. If you need help here is the wiki. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 
    3. Your skin is not really lore friendly for the Snow elfs. If you need help to find what they look like here is the old skin thread. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/161821-the-lotc-skin-archive/ 

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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    wannabewallaby

    in Denied

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    Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but you could use a little bit more help.

    1. The first thing is, you have a lot of lore into your biography, but it is a little too short for my liking, I would request that you come up with more of a story and add onto it, you can keep the same lore, but just add some details.

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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    _kingkets_

    in Accepted

    Posted

    Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there, but you could use a little bit of help.

    1. The first request is, could you make your biography a little bit bigger and add some more details. To me it seems like it could just be a little bit longer. If you need help there is a wiki.  https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page  (maybe add a little bit of what happened at the gates of Kaz’Ulrah)
    2. Also your powergame definition is a little bit off, I would request you look at the wiki’s definition and use that to help out. 

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord:  https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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