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  1. Well, the lore is basically done. The ending sentence is eluding to the future of the cult, not that I'm not finished writing.

    In response to the first question, it depends on how much larger. If it was just an inch or so, then I don't think you'd have to expose the outer inch of you. On the other hand, if it was quite a large difference in size, then you'd have to just walk there exposed.

    Hope this helped, and I hope that by you saying that we can work together to get this idea working, you mean that the magic team likes this idea?

    -Shadow

  2. For Blawharag:

    The Shadow-Walking, as you called it, could be made a bit more difficult. I wasn't sure how difficult it would be, as it was intended to be their most used spell. But it's not really teleportation, per say, more of just vanishing and able to walk through the Shadow as long as it doesn't give way to light. The second you touch light, you're back to reality. (Oh, there goes gravity..)

    It is entirely through thought during the mind linking spell, and yes, all members become deaf. For that reason, it presents what I perceive as a drawback, as if you are in the middle of something, and your character suddenly becomes deaf for an indiscriminate amount of time, they might think that's a bit odd, and needs some investigation. And it is not just deafness, you'd basically be in a trance, as this is very draining, because I would like to assume that the people I choose will not be a few blocks apart when communicating, but continents apart. You'd be able to see what is going on around you. If it would make more sense to change it to "Everyone can speak to the leader (Me), but only the leader can establish simultaneous communication," that might work a bit better, possibly. Let me know your thoughts on that as well.

    Well, at first, I'd like self teaching to be impossible until I get at least two or three other members to join me, as I don't think it'd be a very good thing for a bunch of people self teaching themselves this, when only one person could possibly know about it. But if self teaching were to happen when I have say four to my maximum of nine people, we'd make an effort to stop it. Most likely we'd try to get the person to a secluded area with promises of assistance with teaching, and then sacrifice them to the patron Daemon, Iblees. Or, if all else fails, we'd hire someone to deal with them for us.

  3. Long ago, back when the four races lived in Aegis, and Iblees held a tight grip on the world, there was a certain group of cultists. It was a small, but very powerful group during it's prime.

    It had started out as a group that proclaimed neutrality to the races and to the Undead/Ascended conflict. Eventually, however, Iblees began to slowly corrupt their minds, filling their heads with mad thoughts and slowly driving them insane. In an attempt to stop the corruption, the leader of the group developed a form of magic. This magic was different from all other forms at that time. It was a more ritualistic form of magic, relying on chants and incantations. It seemed to dull the effects on the madness Iblees was forcing on them. Sadly though, and unbeknownst to him, his colleagues were already too far gone. He taught them how to use the newly created magic, and afterwards, they killed him.

    The madness did not fully erase who they were. They retained their memories, only they had become twisted, more evil. With the death of their past leader, they appointed one of their own to take his place. His name was Kla'Dhon. Kla'Dhon had already had some knowledge of magic before he joined with the group, and he used his knowledge to adjust the magic that they were taught. It was the same in every way, except it no longer removed the effects of Iblees' madness, instead it slowly caused it to worsen.

    These cultists came up with a way to bring utter destruction to the world of Aegis. There was only one problem, though, they needed one more member to have enough power to pull it off. As luck would have it, they found the person for the position. Another person with a background in the magical arts. They taught him their newly redone magic, every thing they could. Fortunately for the denizens of Aegis, the plan would never come to fruition, for on the very day the ritual was to take place, a group of heroes made their way to the nether to stop Iblees once and for all. As the world began to crumble around them, they remained, intent to fall with Iblees. Though one of them was afraid. The one most recently inducted into the order hadn't lost his sanity completely, and as the others prepared for death, he ran. He finally found his way to the ships, making his way with the others to the fabled new land 'Asulon.'

    When he arrived, he hid from everyone, practicing his magic in secret. After a time of 57 years, he finally perfected the magic, though it did, however, come with a price. He had finally lost all of what remained of his sanity. After some time, he came up with a way to destroy Asulon, as the cultists had for Aegis in the past. To do this, though, he would need more colleagues. He appointed himself Vol'Nukh The Divine, the same title Kla'Dhon had given himself. Shrouded in his spells, he set about recruiting those with the highest potential. Eight more people to bring the world to it's knees.

    And this is where the real story begins...

    Spells

    The Cult of Kla'Dhon uses a ritualistic magic. Performing the proper chant is the only way their magic can be used.

    The first spell gives the caster control over the shadows, allowing them to appear and disappear as long as there is shade nearby. But it's not really teleportation, per say, more of just vanishing and able to walk through the Shadow as long as it doesn't give way to light. The second you touch light, you're back to reality. It is characterized by the very noticeable column of smoke that appears whenever this spell is cast. It can only be cast by saying the phrase "Tal'Nuriik, Sol Driiznir."

    The second spell allows for communication with The Divine. When you use this spell, you can contact The Divine, and The Divine alone. The Divine may relay your messages to the other cultists, as he can communicate with all of them. You can use this after uttering "Sikh'lunh Boldruh'Jurl."

    The third spell allows the cultist to possess another person. During this time, the body of the cultist is vulnerable, and therefore it is not a good idea to use this one in public, for if the body of the cultist is destroyed while in this state, the soul will remain inside the body of the other person and that person will regain control. Note: You cannot use this spell for any sort of combat. I made this spell with the idea that these cultists are not physically strong people, meaning that they'd need people to do menial labor. With this spell, they can do it without tiring their own bodies out. Also, you need to have the other player's consent to possess them. Before you attempt it, mind you. This spell is only usable after saying "Shil'Varmun, Lirn'Wundaer Kol'Grakhno"

    Drawbacks

    It should be quite obvious what the main drawback is. Using this magic slowly drives the person insane, causing them to lose the ability of rational thought. Each spell also has its own drawbacks. I have stated the drawback of the third spell. For the first spell, only the body parts that are in the shade will be able to travel through the shadows. Meaning that if your head is in the sunlight and the rest of your body isn't, using this spell will put your body in the shadows, leaving your head behind and essentially killing you. As for the second spell, there is no real drawback for this, other than if you are speaking to The Divine, you cannot hear anything other than him. Basically rendering the user deaf until finished.

    Other Info

    I hope you all really enjoyed reading this and I hope you leave some support. I've been developing this lore since December, and because of the event I started while in the E-Team, I came up with names for the characters and better, less powerful spells for them to have. It should be noted, this form of magic can not be used for combat in any way, only for defense and for escapes if need be. I may add more spells later depending on any thoughts that may come to mind. Thanks again.

    EDIT: To clarify a bit on the ending of the lore, where it says 'eight more people...' what that means, is that at first, I'm only going to have eight other members of the cult, nine total. I've been asked the question a few times, so I decided to just put it in the post.

    -Shadow

    For Blawharag:

    The Shadow-Walking, as you called it, could be made a bit more difficult. I wasn't sure how difficult it would be, as it was intended to be their most used spell. But it's not really teleportation, per say, more of just vanishing and able to walk through the Shadow as long as it doesn't give way to light. The second you touch light, you're back to reality. (Oh, there goes gravity..)

    It is entirely through thought during the mind linking spell, and yes, all members become deaf. For that reason, it presents what I perceive as a drawback, as if you are in the middle of something, and your character suddenly becomes deaf for an indiscriminate amount of time, they might think that's a bit odd, and needs some investigation. And it is not just deafness, you'd basically be in a trance, as this is very draining, because I would like to assume that the people I choose will not be a few blocks apart when communicating, but continents apart. You'd be able to see what is going on around you. If it would make more sense to change it to "Everyone can speak to the leader (Me), but only the leader can establish simultaneous communication," that might work a bit better, possibly. Let me know your thoughts on that as well.

    Well, at first, I'd like self teaching to be impossible until I get at least two or three other members to join me, as I don't think it'd be a very good thing for a bunch of people self teaching themselves this, when only one person could possibly know about it. But if self teaching were to happen when I have say four to my maximum of nine people, we'd make an effort to stop it. Most likely we'd try to get the person to a secluded area with promises of assistance with teaching, and then sacrifice them to the patron Daemon, Iblees. Or, if all else fails, we'd hire someone to deal with them for us.

    Ok the shadow-walk makes a bit more sense now then. Though while we are on the subject, say there is a bridge of shade between two larger shadows. If you went to travel between them, but your body was larger than the bridge, would you remain hidden or would the parts unable to fit lie exposed as you walked (ultimately, I assume, being severed due to the design of the spell)?It might be that the spell works better with everyone contacting the leader and the leader contacting back. When you are just about done with the lore, Ill go in detail about the limits that have to be applied to this spell, and you can decide how best to accommodate them. Like I said, there is flexibility within the limits themselves, so odds are we can find a way to make your design work without having to fudge any details, whichever design you end up choosing.P.S. Sorry about my unresponsiveness on TS, I mistakenly left myself logged in while I was at school and work all day.

    Well, the lore is basically done. The ending sentence is eluding to the future of the cult, not that I'm not finished writing.

    In response to the first question, it depends on how much larger. If it was just an inch or so, then I don't think you'd have to expose the outer inch of you. On the other hand, if it was quite a large difference in size, then you'd have to just walk there exposed.Hope this helped, and I hope that by you saying that we can work together to get this idea working, you mean that the magic team likes this idea?

    -Shadow

  4. Rilath's Demise

    Salamandra stepped off the boat, the fresh sea air flowing past his face as he looked around, as the warm rays of the sun lightly touched his face. Giving a brief sigh of relief after the long boat ride, Salamandra slowly made his way down the dock with his staff over his shoulder, and the rest of his belongings hidden within his sleeves. With the wood beneath his feet quickly changing to gravel, he stepped over the small bridge and into the tunnel, soon arriving near the center of the Cloud Temple, the peaceful haven of the monks.

    But not all was at peace today.

    As soon as Sala entered through the sandstone arch, the sight of Riley harassing another bystander met his gaze. Riley, previously renamed 'Rilath', was the creator of Shade magic, who's mind had been corrupting since Aegis, to the extent of thinking it was reasonable to take over his daughter's body to extend his life even further. The sight of this occurrence happening yet again before his eyes slowly enraged Salamandra every time he spotted it, but he would prefer to walk along and ignore it, for Riley was clearly more powerful than he. As Sala's temper slowly boiled and he continued walking, he glanced back at Riley, who was now beating down on the innocent bystander, easily catching the man off-guard and throwing elbows, punches, and kicks at his face as he fell to the ground, and she laughed at his weakness.

    Salamandra boiled over, stomping over to Riley and firmly grasping her arm, spinning her around to face him.

    "We finish this…now. Your corruption has spread too far for me to allow you to live any longer, Rilath."

    She only giggled at him and maliciously grinned, nodding at his statement and lifting herself off the ground. And so off they walked, neither of them uttering a single word until they reached their destination.

    As the menacing tower loomed over them, they each confidently stepped forward. Opening the door for his prior master with the key, they quickly scaled the goliath to its top, standing openly on the roof of the new Mages Tower. Standing on opposite sides of the circle, each of their robes flapping in the wind, they stood in silence for a moment…

    And suddenly Salamandra lunged forward, sprinting across the battlefield as two black spheres quickly accumulated in his hands. With her years of experience, Riley faked to her left and slid across the floor as Salamandra's attack missed, slamming into the pillar behind her. Riley spun, her right arm quickly shrouding in black mist and solidifying into a tendril as she whiplashed it at his legs, wrapping around one of them and throwing him back to his original spot, laughing as she watches him slam into the pillar and fall to the ground.

    And then the wind slowly picked up, as Riley hears a whisper in her ear;

    "Rilath…remember…just because something is cast in shadows, doesn't make it evil..."

    Riley quickly spins around, her eyes widening as she instantly recognizes the voice. Salamandra, in the mean time, has arisen to his feet, and now holds a black, swirling sphere in his hand. Hurling it forward, it spins and corkscrews in the air before slamming directly into Riley's back, lifting her off her feet and sending her against her own pillar. Swearing to herself, Riley spins around, her eyes turning a jet black as she grits her teeth at him, anger strewn across her face. Opening her mouth, black mist spews from her face and engulfs the area, as Salamandra's eyes also darken, as he looks frantically through the mist to spot her, and soon enough she appears, as Sala's jaw drops.

    Standing before him stands a figure donned in black armor, gleaming beneath the sun with an otherworldly sheen, eight black tendrils arching over her back and sides, pointed directly at him.

    "What's wrong…?" Riley mutters in a rather snake-like voice, grinning at him, "It's no fun if you don't even try…."

    Sala gulps and straightens his back, towering over Riley yet nearly shivering in his robe as he watches her, as four tendrils form on his back, knowing her amount doubles his.

    Riley only grins further, muttering "There we go…." as her tendrils slowly rise into the air, prepared to rocket forward at any moment.

    "Come back to me Rilath…this evil does not need to be who you are…"

    Riley growls, raising her hands and firmly holding both sides of her head as she yells; "T-this can't be happening……sh-…she….Leave me alone!!!"

    As her tendrils slowly stray away from Sala in her moment of weakness, Salamandra's tendrils flail forward, as the black masses clash against each other. The realization of battle quickly gets to Riley, as her tendrils instantly fend his off, and forces him away until his back is to his pillar. In a last-ditch attempt, Salamandra's tendrils group against each other in a narrow line as the shoot towards Riley's black chestplate, as one after another they collide against it, the force of the first three able to crack it and the fourth shatters it's center, stabbing her in the stomach.

    Riley screams, her tendrils raging around her as they slam Salamandra into the pillar and his own tendrils disintegrate to dust as the air is knocked out of him, and he spits out a small spurt of blood, holding the pillar weakly as he remains on his feet. And suddenly…..Riley's tendrils turn to fine black dust, the armor around her following the sequence as her eyes turn from black to their regular shade of red, widening as her gaze slowly shifts off the side of the tower. As Salamandra followed her gaze, he saw nothing but the open air as Riley stepped towards the edge.

    "Let us be united again…..Rilath…."

    Riley continued stepping towards the edge as the figure donned in light robes outstretched her hand towards him, beckoning him closer.

    "All you must do is grab my hand…..my love…."

    Completely entranced, Riley steps forward and reaches out with her own hand, lightly taking Shoi's as they both ascend in each other's arms, Rilath and Shoi reunited once more…

    Salamandra, watching in awe this entire time gasps lightly as Riley steps over the edge, and plummets back-first into the ground below. Breathing heavily, he steps towards the end and peeks over the edge at his once-called 'Master', and descends the tower, kneeling beside the splattered body of Riley outside.

    As the glint catches his eye, he averts his gaze to her chest as a strange glow emits from it, and he reaches forward, lightly taking the necklace in his hand, and stares at the amulet attached to it. Still awestruck, the last Shade arises, putting the necklace around his neck as the peaceful souls of Rilath and Shoi watch from above, forever blessing his newfound responsibility.

  5. I'd like to be permanently removed from the FM team with no chance of reapplying. I don't feel that I'm responsible enough now to do this anymore after this recent fiasco. I've obviously got some growing up to do and I don't want to have to deal with this right now.

    -Shadow

  6. This application does not do Dante justice. He is a very good RPer and very fun to talk to both in and out of character. The only feedback I can give to you Dante, is this: Don't use unnecessary words. Your descriptions sound -overly- descriptive, almost forced. Such as: The_Cub drops his tongue down from his protruding jaw or he tentatively notices a man thrashing.

    Once you get past my feelings, I do feel like he would be another good edition to my team.

    EDIT: By 'my team' I do not mean I own the team, nor am I implying I lead it. Merely stating that it's a team I'm a part of.

  7. Freya, this was not a personal attack on you, and I ask that you do not treat it as such. It was a general statement about the rule in general and directed at no one in particular.

    Also, I believe the word you are looking for is excessive swearing. Pointing that out to clear things up, not to make fun of you or anything else it could be construed as.

  8. To me, this seems VERY unnecessary. We are a PG-13 server, not a PG/G server. In PG-13 rated things, cursing/swearing happens. Granted, it is a small amount, but it still happens. We should not hand out warnings to people who pepper in a swear every once in a blue moon.

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