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Volutional

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  1. Welcome, Human! - May your prosper be continuous throughout your new adventure, Tough times await, a plague has hit Asulon! You'll have to avoid it when you start, - Please wait for a GM to implement you
  2. Just keep to the current lore of the server, and you'll be fine. - Please wait for a GM to implement you, let your adventure commence!
  3. Apps, apps apps appps music revision appppsp asppppps

    1. Auvreaeath

      Auvreaeath

      You're Welcome

  4. The only thing I would like you to improve would be your biography, it doesn't fit with the current lore, as Aegis was left for Asulon in January. - Please don't post for 24 hours.
  5. A fellow Elf, it should be witnessed by the world, your age and beauty amongst all of Asulon, - Please wait to be implemented by a GM, your adventure awaits!
  6. I see, a proud Dwarf of Urguan, let your adventure be prosperous! - Please wait to be implemented by a GM, this should not take long, your adventure awaits after all!
  7. Although I foresee your time to be very close, Master Orc, I think you should improve on the following: - = Make your biography show Lore and knowledge of the server, using either the Wiki (Found on the main page) or from Lore Posts - = Almost everything else is perfect, next time just make your biography a little better, and just re-read checking everything fits, and I feel you should be accepted! - Please don't post for 24 hours, for your time must require patience
  8. Although I do see some hope in this application, I must admit that you should improve on the following sections before being accepted: - Your definitions for Metagaming and Powergaming were either incorrect or inaccurate. - Your biography needed more use of the Lore of Asulon, and of the server - You should attempt to separate questions from answers using either colours or paragraphs -Your open response questions weren't long enough - Please don't post for 24 hours, your time will come master Dwarf.
  9. Congratulations Human of Arethor, you shall find bounty and promise in the world of Asulon, - Please wait for a GM to implement you, and then your adventure shall begin.
  10. So close did you treat to the path of acceptance, - Next time, improve on the following for a high chance of acceptance, I see promise in you: -Make formatting clear, and separate questions from answer more distinctively. -Make your biography have some kind of translation or make your (somewhat good) Orcish easier to read for those whom don't understand it. - I highly suggest you attempt this application again after 24 hours, as you have a lot in you, and I can see that. I just want to be certain.
  11. But remember, this is not the end, those who succeed try again. - Next time, focus on your definitions for metagaming and powergaming, providing the correct meaning for both. If you have Teamspeak, I suggest you go into the Application Team channel and ask for help there if you don't know the meanings. - Your formatting could have been neater, but was sustainable. - Increase your open response question- length, to improve likely acceptance. - Please don't post for 24 hours.
  12. You can fight like a Krogan, and run like a leopard, but you'll never be better than Commander Shepard

    1. Volutional
    2. lordchaos13

      lordchaos13

      This is so true In mass effct 2 you can head butt a krogan

    3. lordchaos13

      lordchaos13

      This is so true In mass effct 2 you can head butt a krogan

  13. Sadly, I have denied you. But do not despair, you shall rise after you improve. - Just update your definitions for Metagaming and Powergaming with more examples and such - Adapt your open response questions - And also make the formatting easier to read - Don't post for 24 hours
  14. Native, I love you beard. Ellser, I love your building. Freya, I love you in general. I now have lovers. Deal with it

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    2. Robin Drake
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    4. Goliath

      Goliath

      Robin, I love your beard. Don't feel alone. ;)

  15. And to you, Kal Derra, I gift thee with the light of Elendil, our most beloved star.

    -LoTR

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