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  1. Denied for failing to make the changes I gave above! You may reapply in 12 hours!
  2. Your application has been denied for not changing one of the pending reasons! Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are still wrong. You may reapply in 12 hours!
  3. Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.
  4. Accepted welcome to Lord of the Craft!! Please wait patiently until your implemented.
  5. You have been put on pending for a few reasons All of the server lore you have included is back in Aegis and if your character is 21 years old now he wouldn't of been alive then. I suggest changing the lore to suit Vailor lore. I suggest looking here for some http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Dwarves 21 also isn't adult age for a Dwarf you would still be a beardling and be fairly young. Most Dwarves accept that they reach adulthood at the age of 100 which means you will be able to add in some server lore dating back further but only really into Athera and Vailor Complete these changes within 24 hours
  6. I see you have made some improvements since your last application however! Please fix these few reasons. You need to expand on your traits, ambitions, strengths and weaknesses. I also suggest one of your ambitions not to seek revenge on dead parents as its very cliché. You have 24 hours to make these improvements!
  7. Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.
  8. Welcome to Lord of the Craft! Please wait patiently until your are implemented into the server if you need to ask any more questions feel free to message me.
  9. You have been put on pending for a few reasons Metagaming and powergaming definitions are both wrong please check here for help http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying?responseToken=073759be199e39522088a50a08031173 Change your ambition please... the rule the underworld seems all a bit cliché. Change your skin please its just too assassin thief like. I know you want to become a thief but skins like this are frowned upon by certain players. Your have 24 hours to complete these changes good luck!
  10. You have been denied for the reasons below! You have plagairzed your powergaming definitions from the first thing on google search. Don't do this again or face a ban. Your metagaming definition needs to be expanded and I see what you mean with your roleplaying definition buts its just wishy washy please try and edit it. If you need help check here http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying but do not copy You need to include server lore in your biography such as towns and events. Check the wiki for some help Biography is also very hard to read because of grammar mistakes and spelling but the second paragraph is everywhere. First your in a gang and then on the street. To be honest it doesn't make sense. Please try and come up with something else and stick to that one thing perhaps, this is only advice. Your skin does not suit the server. You do not get power from the moon. No demon eye. Change the entirety of your weaknesses none of it relate to back story. You may reapply 24 hours of the time of denial!
  11. You have been denied for many reasons fix the issues below! All of your definitions are plagiarized from other applications and other sources. Your biography is too short and does not contain any server lore I suggest reading the wiki The skin you have chosen does not suit the server The way you kill your uncle can be considered powergaming. Like does your character come out with a scar? Was it a hard fight? Not just killed uncle. Expand on ambitions. Do not plagiarize again or face a 1 week ban. You may reapply 24 hours after this denial!
  12. Failed to change some of the reasons above. Avoid becoming an assassin sheathe cliché character please so just keep this is mind when updating your biography. I don't see your skin but if it looks like an assassin then I suggest changing it. You can reapply 24 hours after this denial
  13. Your application has been put on pending for a few reasons. Do not fear though once the changes are made and they're right you will be accepted. Your metagaming definition is correct but please add in an example that would suit this server. Please read here for help http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying Your powergaming definition is wrong please check link above. Your biography is too short make it at least two paragraphs long. Good use of server lore I remember that tree well... Avoid becoming an assassin sheathe cliché character please so just keep this is mind when updating your biography. Talents? I need talents. What is your character good at? I don't see your skin but if it looks like an assassin then I suggest changing it. Please add a screenshot of your skin. You have 24 hours to complete these changes or face denial. Message me once the changes are complete and if they still need adjusting I will guide you further. Needed to repost since forums couldn't allow me to edit my response...
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