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  1. You have been denied for many reasons! Fix these issues below. Your roleplaying definitions needs to be expanded. Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are wrong I suggest reading here but do not copy any of it. http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying Your biography is too short and needs to be atleast 2 paragraphs and to have included server lore such as towns and events. I suggest reading here http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Humans Being raised by orcs do not make sense as a lot of orc childhood involves showing off your strength etc. A human wouldn't just fit in. This is my suggestion to improve your biography for next time. Traits and ambitions need to be expanded. You may reapply in 24 hours after the time of this denial.
  2. You have been denied for many reasons! Fix these issues below. You failed to wait 24 hours after your denial. If you do this again face a ban, You biography is also too short. Your skin does not suit the server. Please include more server lore into your biography. You may reapply in 24 hours after the time of this denial.
  3. You have been denied for many reasons! Fix these issues below. Can't apply as Half OrcYour powergaming and metagaming definitions are both wrong I suggest reading here http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying but do not plagiarize.Your biography is not long enough must be two paragraphs long.Your biography contains zero server lore I suggest reading here http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page for more information.Expand on your traits, weakness, strengths and ambitions.List more details of your character appearance.You must supply a screenshot of your minecraft skin you are going to use.You may reapply in 24 hours after the time of this denial.
  4. You have been denied for many reasons! Fix these issues below. You did not follow the rules of replying after 24 hours of your recent denial . This is a warning if you do this again you will face a 1 week banYou also plagiarized both powergaming and metagaming definitions. Do this again and face a one week ban.Your biography is a mess just fix it up in general by rewriting it.. I would avoid being a leader of people when writing your bio and leave this until you are accepted to try and rise to power. You also powergame during your biography by killing literally everyone...You also need to add server lore to your bio such as towns and events. Keep in mind we are currently within Vailor. I suggest reading this for help http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Dark+ElvesYou skin barely matches a dark elf I would suggest looking here http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Dark+ElvesYou may reapply in 24 hours after the time of this denial. Remember do not plagiarize again or face a ban and make another application after 24 hours.
  5. Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.
  6. Welcome to Lord of the Craft!!! Good work on fixing the mistakes. Please wait patiently until you are implemented to server. If you have any questions feel free to message me.
  7. Your application has been put on pending for a few reasons. Do not fear though once the changes are made and they're right you will be accepted. For you powergaming and metagaming definitions please try and expand them by giving examples. If you need help check this http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying but do not plagiarize.Please also try and fix your font the white hurts my eyes.Good biography so far but please include a bit more lore such as a town. The festivals you have included are great but just needs a tad more to flesh out your biography then you're set. You have 24 hours to complete these changes or face denial. Message me once the changes are complete and if they still need adjusting I will guide you further.
  8. Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.
  9. After being on the server for 4 years this hands down is the best application I have ever read. The lore, the story just everything is just beautiful. On that note I welcome to Lord of the Craft. Please wait patiently until you are implemented to server. If you have any questions feel free to message me.
  10. 2 times I've ventured out on my Graven looking for some rp... killed both times in 5 minutes. Great rp all. 

    1. Crowbill

      Crowbill

      Death rp can become a thing you just need to work for it...

  11. Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.
  12. Sorry for late reply timezone differences! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!!! Good work on fixing the mistakes. Please wait patiently until you are implemented to server. If you have any questions feel free to message me.
  13. Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.
  14. Welcome to Lord of the Craft!!! Good work on fixing the mistakes. Please wait patiently until you are implemented to server. If you have any questions feel free to message me.
  15. Your application has been put on pending for a few reasons. Do not fear though once the changes are made and they're right you will be accepted. Your age of your character is slightly off. The year is currently 1537 which means you character would be born later than the date you selected.You also need to include server lore into your biography such as towns and events not just Vailor. Please check this link for some infomation http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Elves Also make sure you skin is a darker colour just pale. Check the link I gave above for more reference. You have 24 hours to complete these changes or face denial. Message me once the changes are complete and if they still need adjusting I will guide you further.
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