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ΩMercenΩ

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  1. Seeing all this terrorism making its way closer and closer to my home is horrible. The fact that this attack happened in my own city is infuriating, and the fact that so many innocents were harmed sickens me.

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    2. Volutional

      Volutional

      ( Humanity is the one doing it, too. )

    3. Kaiser

      Kaiser

      Well, that's pointless, Vol.

      If a black man stole my car, it's stupid to be racist against blacks than.

    4. EmeraldStag

      EmeraldStag

      I would much MUCH rather be able to go out and stop the evil, then let someone who has to go about it in a specific manner or else he "Breaks the Rules"

  2. Seeing all this terrorism making its way closer and closer to my home is horrible. The fact that this attack happened in my own city is infuriating, and the fact that so many innocents were harmed sickens me.

  3. Your Application has been: CONGRATULATIONS, AND WELCOME!
  4. Your Application has been: You're so close! I bet you'll get in on you're next app. Reasoning for denial: Your Bio lacks any lore whatsoever. Refrain from living in unnamed villages, use actual cities, flaunt your lore knowledge. In your open responses, don't say 'I would' or 'If ____ happened'. Simply write out what you would do in character. Give us a glimpse of your RP, don't have a conversation with us. PM me with any questions.
  5. Your Application has been: A few things though, not too major: Refrain from villainy, as in your final ORQ, as an extensive application is needed for that. I'll let it slide as it was one simple instance. We have moved from Asulon to Anthos, the halflings live in Lenfarthing now. I'll let this pass because it's not on the WIKI. Finally, metagaming isn't limited to providing coords.
  6. Your Application has been: You failed to make the requested changes.
  7. After thinking this through greatly your application has been: I didn't see many changes besides the change to Lenfarthing, so I was ready to deny you. However, your excellent bio and ORQs have reassured me. I think you'll fit in perfectly.
  8. Your application has been: Reasoning: You can elaborate on your metagaming and power emoting definitions. Use examples to, it can only help! In your bio, try to incorporate more lore, flaunt your knowledge. Also, avoid using unnamed villages it suggests you're too lazy to go find a real city's name. Your open response questions are great, but in your second one you power emote a bit. Also, just thought I should say, we pay in minas, usually not gold.
  9. Your application has been: Congratulations, and welcome to Anthos!
  10. Your Application has Been: Reasoning: Your power-emoting definition isn't quite right. Try to use examples to further help with your definitions. Your dwarf is very cliche, something I witness a lot with dwarves. Only child, family killed one way, and miner. Go beyond this, if your family died use this as a motive to do something specific! You cannot use a Honeydew skin. Your Open Response questions contain power emoting and lack detail. We see these as a sneak peek at your rp, really go into great detail and flaunt your rp skills. Also, write these in third person, not first.
  11. Sadly, your application has been: Reasoning: Use examples in your definitions to really show you know what you're talking about. Your bio, even though it has minor changes, still contains the gist of before. If your mother committed suicide, use that to influence your character, you simply use it as a way for you to be raised by your uncle. You cannot state that you are one of the best miners, that's something you must get in RP We look at your ORQs to see your roleplay quality, go above and beyond with them!
  12. Under Review Your application has, after much deliberation been: I must inform you though, we are currently in a new realm named, Anthos, Arethor is gone, along with Armaluna, just be aware of that. Asulon is gone. Also, I need you to send me an updated skin as yours is simply a steve with new clothing, it's not very RP. You can ask a member of the community to make one, or just find a better fitting one.
  13. Under Review Your Application Has Been: You show great promise, and I strongly suggest you make another application. Reasoning: -Your power-emoting definition isn't quite right, look into that with more detail. -The dwarves no longer live in the city of Karik. They live in Kal'azgoth -Your bio seems a bit too cliche: Don't just be the everyday dwarf who drinks ale and mines. Think of a really strong backstory that influences a dark side in your character, or a good side. -Your ORQs need to be more than a sentence each. Describe in real detail what your character would do! Again, you show good potential with your knowledge of the city names, and PM me with any questions you have.
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