Luciloo

A response could be found, burned into a wall beneath one such eerie scrawling.

The glyphs appear as though scorched into the stone by flame, still warm to the touch.

22 hours ago, NotEvilAtAll said:

Atlas actually looked pretty good in all honesty (even the freebuild areas).

It really didn't, it had some ******* dreadful builds even jammed between nation regions and so on. Like yeah there were some nice builds, but the majority were either half-finished or like "my first Minecraft house" builds.

When Lulu heard about Brynaelda's departure, she smiled. In time she remembered the kind lass who sat down with her and advised her about the difficulties she might encounter as Clan Mother, things Bryn had to overcome herself. Looking to her wrist, the sapphire-hued beaded bracelet glimmered in the light of nearby lanterns, a symbol of friendship from one Bekarumm to another. Slipping it over her hand, Lulu held it tightly in a fist, then brought it up to her breast, "Gud luck Bryn.. go be happy," she chuckled.

Every time Archi starts a sentence with a connective, I grow stronger.

Cool lore though, much more up-to-date for Old Gods and so on.

It's pretty neat. Solid themes. I'm sure Quav will be able to nit-pick mechanical issues better than I though.

Seems like a heavy-handed solution to players min-maxxing.

Edit: After some reflection, I realise that I don't really care either way. It seems a strange place to start combatting min-maxxing on the server, unless I'm very fortunate to have not been faced with Voistalker screechers throwing fireballs and alchemy. That said, unless you're going to mechanically change how quickly a Voidal user can learn alchemy, it seems a bit redundant to require them to roleplay an innate difficulty. How many people really roleplay any difficulty picking up Alchemy as is?

Lulubelle fastens the final strap of her gauntlets and flexes her fingers. Taking her halberd in hand, she steps out onto the street with a clinking of Legion platemail, the Longbeard beginning her patrol of the Urguani capital.

Every time Archi starts a sentence with a connective in his writing, a Boggart lodges itself in his wardrobe.

Niv cleared away the plates and cups of a recent dinner at her home, and moved the table and chairs back into place. Releasing a sigh, she remembered sitting at a table in the Talus Grove's tavern, pouring tea for Awaiti and Marie. Her eyes gleamed and the corner of her mouth tugged into a small smile, before stepping down into the kitchen to put a kettle over the fire, and prepared two mugs. Just in case.

Dark brows knit together, as the Umgorumm clan mother reads over the letter. Her nostrils flare widely as she huffs, "Smells like heresy.." she remarks with narrowed amber eyes. Placing the letter aside with the first from the same author, she looks into the fire thoughtfully.

6 hours ago, Kalehart said:

I tried my best to counter possible cursed (lol) interpretations of the children

Groooooossssss. I like it.

Boo, let me use it with Housemagery. Let me turn mountains into ice cream and mangroves into gumbo!

Just now, Jake! said:

ur not on the st team anymore who cares what you say

I was never on the ST honey. Like your lore was fine when you wrote it, but clearly issues have risen with the CA and its playerbase which need addressing. This doesn't address any of those issues, it's not good enough and I'm sorry you feel otherwise.

Just now, Jake! said:

keep myu name out of ur mouth, 

 

i like the rewrite, reading it can cause you to see the differences 

It's a bad rewrite, get better taste.

Lulubelle doesn't even see the missive, as she works dutifully in the forge. With hammer and anvil, she shapes the heart of stars and the iron of the earth into works of great beauty, weapons of battle and tools for the everyday work of her kinsfolk. An honest and hard-working craft practised for millennia by her ancestors, and a damn sight more important than the crumbling scripture and dead God of Umros.

1/3

IGN:

Nivndil
RP NAME:

Lulubelle Starbreaker

AGE:
132
ACTIVITY REQUIREMENT:

All of the above
CANDIDATE:

Levian'Tol Grandaxe

41 minutes ago, Burnsider said:

Here's why this is untrue. Because we have evidence otherwise. Here's someone fairly new (less than a year old account) who posted something that blatantly broke techlock in the same way that muskets do. He was told no, there was a little memery, but overall, people were polite, explained the issues, and wished him luck

 

 

 

Look mah, I'm on TV!

4 minutes ago, Urahra said:

would love to see some real good-faith critique rather than just a wave of "no's

I got you b

1. This doesn't use the correct format for a lore submission, so that should ideally be addressed.

2. Blackpowder must be created by an alchemist. How does this lore propose to work in conjunction with that bottleneck, considering alchemists can only make 3 things a day, even at their highest tier?

3. Although the 'consent clause' is considerate of other players on paper, I find two major issues with it. One, it leads to a big de-synchronisation of technology across the server, where you will have groups who have access to firearms and those who do not; which I theorise will lead to just jarring situations. Two, I suspect there will be a degree of minor, albeit present, bullying of players who refuse to indulge the gunpowder fantasies of this vocal minority who support firearms.