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  1. MC Name:

             Astrophysical

     

    Character's Name:

             Qa'a

     

    Character's Age:

             N/A

     

    Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

             N/A

     

    Transformed form:

             Sorvian

     

    Creator's MC Name:

             uchihagirl332

     

    Creator's RP Name:

             Nefertiti

     

    Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

             

    Sorvians in essence are servants constructed of clay with a wooden skeleton. Normally ranging from 3-6 feet in height (or 2-3 feet if a newt), these constructs are sculpted in the shape of a humanoid fitted with a mask with two identifiable eyes and a mouth marked with incantations marked in their creator’s blood. This in turn gives the Sorvian a small part of the creator’s soul essence. Once the husk and the mask is complete, the Sorvian is awakened once the mask is placed upon the husk, consuming it in light for a moment.

     

    Sorvians of course are soft and are easily hurt, with limbs able to be cleaved off easier than a descendant. Although Sorvians have a dulled sense of pain, they can still feel it like an ache. In the case that a Sorvian is injured, they cannot heal like a normal descendant and must visit a sculptor for repairs. And in more dire cases, such as death by destruction of their mask by three solid hits, puncturing their chest cavity with the soul essence, or decapitation, the sculptor must retrieve the mask or recreate the mask with the incantation and place it on a new husk to revive the construct.

     

    Sorvians are made to serve, meaning they cannot go against a direct order from their creator nor willingly harm them. The only expectation is if the creator intends to harm their mask in which they will protest and try to dodge, but never attack. Mentally Sorvians are not true men, always chasing an ideal. This ideal is core to their very mind and will go to any length to not be separated from it.

     

    If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look? 

    Qa’a is a 5’6” clay Sorvian fitted with a smiling porcelain mask with a long nose. He is garbed in a gray tabard and hood.

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

             N/A

     

    Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:

             Yes

     

    Are you aware that if this creature is shelved, your character may be given the option to revert or be indefinitely shelved?

             Yes

     

    Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

             I Understand

     

    Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             N/A

  2. As a co-writer of animism, I am not biased at all.

     

    I will admit that animism has its flaws. For the main issue, we wanted a ritual heavy magic for shamanism that unfortunately forces players to get multiple animists in one place. This however became the biggest hurt for the magic as the amount of player animists needed to gather in one place is almost impossible.

     

    On the other side, I have heard plenty and plenty enough that animism has no combat capacity and its useless as a magic. To be frank Im tired of hearing it. This only compiles the main issue of the lack of players despite its easy to learn process (even if the lore is somewhat difficult to read).

     

    If Elementalism could come back without all the powergaming capabilities we wanted to avoid with animism, that would be great. However as it stands people seem to want old elementalism as I have seen, which is not possible in this current state of the server.

  3. A Chef’s Plight

     

    [!] The following is posted across the lands of Aevos along taverns and Restaurants.

     

    I cannot stand silent any longer about my sorrowful tale after catching word of our former King’s rejection of humanity. The man you know as Aleksander II is a cruel, evil, and no-good villain, as you all are aware. However, I plead for any fellow men and women of the taverns and restaurants of the Kingdom Hanseti-Ruska and Aevos to heed my warning! Under no circumstance should Aleksander II be allowed within your fine establishments!

     

    It was a cold and stormy night in the Kingdom. A blizzard has taken hold of the region, burying everything in a blanket on powdery snow. After a slow day, I was about to close my restaurant, sweeping the floors, cleaning the dirty dishes, my fellow workers should know. Just as I turned the sign to close, I heard a loud and forceful knock on my front door. I jumped with fear as if GOD had taken my soul! As I was about to announce we were closed, the door burst open, letting a cold wind blow through the foyer! Within the portal stood none other than Aleksander II and two guards who oozed a smell of rotten eggs and meat.

     

    The king demanded that I serve him, which I should have refused given the time, but it was an honor that royalty himself has asked for my food! Of course, I sat him down at the largest table in my establishment and asked what he desired. Aleksander II then turned to me, and gave a malicious grin that would send a shiver down any good man’s spine. He then snapped his fingers as the guards put a bloodied sack on the table, opening it to reveal two little babes! I was shocked and almost released my stomach upon the floor. The evil customer saw my displeasure and let out a cackle which echoed through my restaurant. I wanted to deny his request, but his guards looked menacingly at me, threatening my life.

     

    I had no choice.

     

    I went to the kitchen with the two children and came up with a plan. I would give the children a rightful burial, but to do so I needed a replacement. I frantically searched the kitchen until I found a rotten shank of lamb. I hid the poor corpses within my storage, saying my prayers to GOD for not only those poor children in front of me, but for my own life. I cooked the rotten lamb upon the stove, spicing it as if it were any other meal.

     

    I served the replacement before the crown, he observed it carefully for a second before taking his utensils into hand, cutting into the flesh. I was sweating heavily, as if a raincloud was over my head. Then he took one bite. He chewed and chewed before spitting it out at my face!

     

    “Vy call this a meal? the royal monster barks as he slams his fist upon the table, “I shall close your restaurant so that you never cook again!”

     

    I was ruined! The guards then grappled onto me and tossed me out of my own establishment and home into the unforgiving blizzard. I thank GOD to this day that I have lived to see another day, yet I cannot say the same for the children…

     

    For those who have read this, I thank you for listening and heeding. May he never step foot within a tavern or restaurant again!
     

    By,

    A Concerned Chef

     

    Spoiler

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  4. 33 minutes ago, wowj said:

    I know theres fifty bajillion alchemy lore submissions so its hard to track and read all of it but three of these potions already exist in some form or another:
     

     

    [T2] SCENT MASK [OPEN]



     

    [T3] EPISTLE SMOG [RARE]

     

    everything else though is cool!

     

    *A scream is heard from the depths of the orcish capital*
     

    L E C T O R S !

  5. Knight: "Hey, I'm going to spook test you!"

    Me: *logs out*

     

    Honestly,

    I personally find aurum testing, salt testing, fire testing, and whatever an essential thing to the server, but it is executed in a very lazy way. As Unwillingly said these people who want interaction with villans are the same people that try to make their communities a "safe-zone." Due to this, darkspawn won't interact with that community. So who is really at loss here?

     

    I found the best way to avoid these roleplayers is to not include a ca tag since shift right click meta is very real, and blend in with large groups (if you even can with all the settlements right now).

  6. MC Name:

             Astrophysical

     

    Character's Name:

             Broth

     

    Character's Age:

             Ancient

     

    Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

             Goblin

     

    Transformed form:

             Ghoul

     

    Creator's MC Name:

             Antisociety

     

    Creator's RP Name:

             Aratakrast

     

    Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

             

    Ghouls are the profane creations of Necromancers using rotting flesh and bone to give rise to artificial life. Necrotic in appearance, they appear as shambling monsters of decomposing flesh and hollow bones, thus only holding the strength of a human regardless of the source of the raised corpse. In addition to this, their bones are fragile and easily broken only taking a good strike of a blunt weapon to break. Their bodies are prone to the burning sensation of aurum as well as a mental discomfort of it. Ghouls are also weak to flame, having trouble concentrating unless the flames are put out quickly lest they meet their demise.

     

    Mentally, ghouls are obsessed with their previous life, or the fading memories thereof, often leading to grievous jealousy of the living. These obsessions accompany the necromantic curse, often seen in the form of negative traits such as paranoia and general dislike of the living. One caveat however is un undying servitude to their necromancer. This however does not mean mindless submission. 

     

     

    If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look? 

     

    Broth is the reanimated remnants of a goblin chef raised into a rotting construct of flesh and bone. With only a tattered chef’s hat and apron on his body, he walks with a hunched shamble.

     

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

             N/A

     

    Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:

             Yub

     

    Are you aware that if this creature is shelved, your character may be given the option to revert or be indefinitely shelved?

             Yub

     

    Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

             I understand

     

    Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             N/A

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