Your application is on its way to being acceptable, but it needs a few changes before it can be accepted. You have 24 hours to make these changes. If you need any help or have questions, comments, or concerns, you can PM me in-game @ LuLuuLuu, here on the forums, or on Discord @ Sunny!#0017.
1. Your metagaming definition is incorrect. Feel free to check out our wiki page on metagaming & powergaming to help you fix this. I suggest including an example, though it isn't strictly required.
2. Your character biography must include at least 1 lore reference. This can be a settlement name, religious lore, a historical event, et cetera. Below I have linked some wiki pages that might help you.
3. Your character's personality traits should be a little more expansive than "likes animals." Additionally, your character can't have magical influence upon them from the outset, that would need to be acquired in RP.
4. Your characters wants/what drives them should be at least 2 seconds long.
Helpful Links:
Metagaming Wiki Page: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
Main Wiki Page: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
Nations and Charters Wiki Page: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters
Races Wiki Page: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
Almaris Wiki Page: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris
LotC Discord: https://discord.gg/cdbbeJ4
New Player Hub Forum Post: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/