You will have 24 hours to make the following changes to your application!
Your metagaming definition is almost there, to demonstrate you know the definition please add an example of metagaming.
Your powergaming definition is almost there, to demonstrate you know the definition please add an example of powergaming.
If you need clarity with either of the definitions please refer to the following page.
Your backstory has a few issues.
Firstly, you cannot create a character who is a part of a notable or noble family, royalty would be included in this generalization. Please remove any mention of the royal High Elf families of Xilnala.
Secondly, you cannot have references to magic in your application. This “blessed jewel” that you mention must be removed as it has magical properties.
Thirdly, I see that you referred to the Hou’zi as Wood Elves, Hou’zi are a race in Arcas that look like monkeys, whereas the Wood Elves would usually be referred to as Mali’ame.
Please ensure that when you add your corrections, you maintain at least two references to the lore.
The wiki link for Elves can be found here.
Here is a wiki link for the High Elves.
As well, a link for the city of Haelun'or.
As for your character age, we highly recommend that new players make their Elves an age of at least 50, although it is NOT required.
The height of your High Elf also seems to be off, if you take a peek at the High Elves wiki, they usually average 5’6” - 6’6”.
Your personality quirks seemed to be good, as it has two positive traits and one negative trait, however you do need to remove the mention of a royal family, as stated above.
In your roleplay scenario, I see that you have provided the four sentences required, however you must also include at least action.
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