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    Rhys Val'Ullr-Ashwood-Puerir
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    Dark Elf

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  1. Changed Status to Pending
  2. Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows: Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help ❤️ https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @LordScisso#5640 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the New Player Discord as well. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/
  3. LordScisso

    TeboarX

    Changed Status to Denied
  4. LordScisso

    TeboarX

    Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to too many errors, though here are the changes that would need to be made: Your Meta and Power gaming definitions lack clarity. Please add an example for each of these. Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. https://app.grammarly.com/ In your Bio you need to fix the following errors You can not have had your character have experience with either alchemy or magic. These skills must be aquired in role play “Extra Terrestrial” Means aliens, not a higher power. Find a better word to use in this instance. In your Physical Description you state “Primarily grey” with no refrence as to what this is. Fix this In your Personality traits you state your character is “Sociopathic”, and intend to use this as a negative trait. This is a mental disorder, and is not what we are looking for as a negative trait. This negative trait would most likely only affect the people around you, and not yourself. Also, implying a mental disorder is inherently negative isn’t cool. In your Roleplay scenario you use “I” in your actions instead of “He/him/his”. Please correct this, as this is the standard usage in roleplay on the server. Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @LordScisso#5640, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/
  5. LordScisso

    TeboarX

    Changed Status to Under Review
  6. LordScisso

    DoubleDee0569

    Changed Status to Denied
  7. LordScisso

    DoubleDee0569

    Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to too many errors, though here are the changes that would need to be made: Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming In your Meta and Powergaming Definitions you use some examples that don’t really apply to LOTC, please replace these. Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. Specifically, please add a weight and height Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one! Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. Your Character Biography states that your character is from “Cierzo” Which does not exist in the server. Please replace this! Your Character Biography states that you are a “Master of war and hunting” This is against server rules, you can not be a master of ANYTHING yet. You need to aquire these skills in role play. Your Character Biography says your family was killed by orcs! This is a common trope, ergo is against the rules. Please reconsider, In your Character biography you claim to have done alot. I mean, ALOT that you can’t do out of character like this. You can’t kill drakes, or warlords, or thousands of orcs, unless you do this in character. You also can’t just tame a whole pack of wolves. YOU CAN NOT BE INFAMOUS BEFORE STARTING, gain this notoriety in character. Your story needs to take place IN Arcas. It is the only available continent to be from currently. You can’t be from anywhere else. Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @LordScisso#5640, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/
  8. LordScisso

    DoubleDee0569

    Changed Status to Under Review
  9. LordScisso

    Tyrael242

    Changed Status to Denied
  10. LordScisso

    Tyrael242

    Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to too many errors, though here are the changes that would need to be made: Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. https://app.grammarly.com/ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters In your bio, you state that your character has received some rather extensive training. I would recommend curbing this a bit, as it could be viewed as powergaming to already be a skilled warrior even before you start. In your Personality traits you state your character is skilled with a bow. Please do not include this in her personality traits, as it is not a part of her personality. Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home Snow elves skin tends to be very pale, and not lilac as you have it. Please fix this. Your Physical traits are unclear at the end and need to be rewritten. After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @LordScisso#5640, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/
  11. LordScisso

    Tyrael242

    Changed Status to Under Review
  12. LordScisso

    Kryger48

    Changed Status to Denied
  13. LordScisso

    Kryger48

    Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to to many errors, though here are the changes that would need to be made: Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming In your Bio your character seems to already be able to make top rank arms and armaments, that are used against dragons. This could be considered powergaming, please remove or replace this. You can not start as a master craftsman Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home In your Physical Description you have blue eyes. Dark dwarves cannot have blue eyes. Please refer to the Dark Dwarf Wiki when making your character. After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @LordScisso#5640, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/
  14. LordScisso

    Kryger48

    Changed Status to Under Review
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