williewonka01

Is awesome 10/10.

I want to help, I'll build something cool.

Aye ye seem very smart, I will follow ye ta the death!

Moved to Accepted Forum

Accepted Congratulations you have been accepted on to Lord of the Craft. Wait patiently for a Moderator to promote you in game.

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied -Your definition of power gaming is a bit off and needs to be changed and added too. -Biography must be at least two paragraphs long, yours was one paragraph. The Biography does not make sense in certain areas. -You can't join the server having knowledge of magic this must be learned through role play, by joining certain guilds or being taught by another mage. -There is power gaming in your character he seems to have no weaknesses but plenty of strengths. -Your answers to the Open Response Questions were too short and lacked any detail at all. Overall it was a good start, most people don't get it on their first try. Make sure to take your time, it will take you at least a few hours to correct the errors in your application. Almost every answer you have on your application is too short and lacks detail. Good luck and feel free to message me on the forums with any questions on how to improve your application.

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied -There is a lot wrong but the biggest issue is everything is too short. Your answers to the questions, and the definitions are way too short. I would take a few hours or so to add more detail into every question on your application.

Must have been a mistake moved to accepted.

Agreed this was very helpful.

Minecraft Name: williewonka01 Link to Accepted App: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/48196-williewonka01s-kharajyr-application/

Thank you very much, it was late once I finished my application so I missed a lot of the smaller things.

Moved to Accepted Forum

Accepted! Welcome to Asulon, wait patiently for a GM to upgrade you in game!

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied I hate to deny this because I see a lot of promise that you will become a great addition to the server. But there are a few mistakes but if you fix those you should be good to go. -Your definition of role-playing has improved but is a little off. -Your definition of metagaming is only half right you're missing one basic concept. -A few of the answers to open response questions were one line an short. On a positive note you created a strong character and stuck with him throughout your entire application. Message me if you have any questions about what to work on and fix in your next application, I'll be happy to help.

Moved to Denied Forum