I think that you need to give it a few years before you're ready for this server. With spelling like that you'd spoil the experience for others who talked to you, and since you don't seem to use a spell-checker, a lot of your mistakes wouldn't be translatable by others who don't know english as their native language.
Also, posting a picture of your skin itself isn't useful to me, I have no idea what that would look like in-game.
Lastly, saying that you've played role-playing games doesn't convey to me any sort of knowledge or experience role-playing with other people.
The content of your backstory itself was alright, though. It's sweet, and I enjoyed it.
For now: