Alys

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied I'm just going to outright deny this. Your definitions of power/metagaming were copied from another app. The new roleplay definition you gave me in the PM was also taken from the same application. Unfortunately, I'm going to ban you from reapplying, since such are the rules. If you wish to dispute this, take it over to ban appeals. http://www.lordofthe...er-ban-appeals/

Please do NOT implement this guy. His application here: http://www.lordofthe...my-application/ Is an exact copy of this one: http://www.lordofthe...-a-application/

A rather nice application. However.. You have the wrong definition of roleplaying, and Elona doesn't exist in Aegis. This little snippet here is also out of place. A character cannot be evil without a villain app, and it doesn't really reflect any other parts of your application. Since these are minor details, I'll give you 1 hour to fix your application. PM me once you have done so.

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied The biography doesn't tell enough about your character. His past is shown, but not how it has affected him nor what he's like. Remember that a biography is "history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc." You have the basics of power/metagaming down, but your answers seem uncertain. Since you are new to roleplaying, I'd suggest doing a little more research on these two. It wouldn't hurt to display your character more in the "what if" questions, either. Wait 48 hours before reapplying. Take this time to read over your application and make necessary edits. Questions? PM me. Some recomended reads for applicants: Application Submissions FAQ|Proper Etiquette * Advice From the Application Team * Implemented Application Section

For all you watchers: *squints* No skin? Even if you are in the process of obtaining one, I'd like to see a placeholder skin anyway. Here's a lovely range of selections for you: http://www.planetminecraft.com/resources/?p=1&keywords=drow Also, define roleplaying and powergaming a bit more, if you will. Answer the powergaming question from a roleplay perspective. Other than that, everything seems fine.

Moved to Accepted Forum

Accepted Nothing really out of place. Please wait patiently for a GM to implement you. Your journey in Aegis will begin soon!

Moved to Accepted Forum

Accepted Wonderfully done. Please wait patiently for a GM to implement you. Your journey in Aegis will begin soon!

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied I see you've found the template, that's a start. Next time, fill it out and format properly. I would suggest looking at applications in the implemented section for guidance: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/forum/67-implemented-apps/ Wait 48 hours before reapplying. Take this time to read over your application and make necessary edits. Questions? PM me.

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied Several things I found lacking: - Definitions of powergaming, metagaming, and powergaming. Tell us, what are they? - Answer to the scenario questions. - Also, your bio contradicts lore. Azaria does not exist in Aegis. - You did discuss personality more than I usually see. I liked that. Wait 48 hours before reapplying. Take this time to read over your application and make necessary edits. Questions? PM me.

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied - Insufficient definitions of roleplaying, metagaming, and powergaming. It is required that you show familiarity of each before entering LotC, so expand. - The biography is quite vague. Although yes, you do enter LotC to develop a character, to do that you should have a basic idea of who your character already is and what made them that way. - A screenshot of your skin is mandatory, and a huge one is okay. If the forums won't allow it, then you can try an image hosting site. Feel free to PM me for help on this part. Wait 48 hours before reposting. Take this time to read over your application and make necessary edits.

If something seems fishy, you can pick a somewhat unique word and paste it in the search bar. In this case, something like the word "situatuions" (which is oddly spelt). Sure enough, there have been three applications today that have plagiarized these definitions from Kronix's app.

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied Argh, you were so close. This is copy and pasted from Mr_Birdie's Application. I hate, and would rather not, do this since you clearly put a lot of effort into your application, but the rules strictly do not tolerate plagiarism. You are banned from reapplying.

Thanks for a neat and helpful guide. I'm surprised people haven't snatched up most of the names already, because they should! I remember how difficult to come up with a meaningful Elven name, for my character's child, that wasn't super lengthy or odd. We settled on Aylir.

Everything is great except for your definitions of roleplaying, metagaming, and powergaming. You'll need to expand on the first two, and you didn't even touch on powergaming. PM me when you have done so. Now, I'm reluctant because your grammar in the Minecraft Forums does not match the grammar in your application. However, I can't hold that against you since I don't know the circumstances, and there are no signs of plagiarism. Just keep in mind that in Aegis, you will be expected to use proper grammar. EDIT: If not fixed in 24 hours, goes into rejection pile.

Under Review I will indicate whether or not you've been accepted in just a few moments.

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied - Your definition of metagaming and powergaming are off. - Please note that your last sentence regarding roleplay does NOT apply on this server. - Your biography contradicts lore. - I know Ergent Seth! Although this doesn't particularly relate to your app rejection. Please wait 48 hours before reposting. Take this time to read over your application and make necessary edits! It'll be worth it when you get accepted.