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  1. How did...100 reputation...what?

    1. Zarsies

      Zarsies

      Yup yup yup yup yup~ :3

    2. Zarsies

      Zarsies

      Yup yup yup yup yup~ :3

    3. High Prophetess Mezua~ ♥ ツ
  2. I just lost the game.

    1. High Prophetess Mezua~ ♥ ツ

      High Prophetess Mezua~ ♥ ツ

      YOU KNOW WHAT. THAT'S RUDE.

  3. Sometimes I just wish I was never born...

  4. Why did I deny you? Your ORQs were incredibly short, and you need to roleplay in them. Answer all questions, and include examples for the definitions. Give your character some flaws, quirks, personality traits etc. Some Places That May Help You Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/ A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/ A FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/ Server Rules: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/?page_id=8 Latest Format: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/43580-official-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/ Definitions (Seriously Useful): http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/45364-roleplayingmetagamingpowergaming-definitions/ Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial. If you have any questions, add me on Skype, or PM me on the forums.
  5. Why did I deny you? Your character would have experienced the move to Asulon, the destruction of Aegis. That would be included in his biography. Your ORQs were extremely short. Remember, you can go anywhere with them. Your definitions for metagaming and powergaming were incorrect. Include examples, and beef them up a bit. Some Places That May Help You Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/ A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/ A FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/ Server Rules: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/?page_id=8 Latest Format: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/43580-official-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/ Definitions (Seriously Useful): http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/45364-roleplayingmetagamingpowergaming-definitions/ Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial. If you have any questions, add me on Skype, or PM me on the forums.
  6. Why did I deny you? Alright, you followed everything I said again, and for that I am thankful. I just noticed however that your elf speaks a fair bit like a dwarf. Your biography also doesn't have much character depth, try to add personality quirks and suchlike. Beef it up a bit. Also, maybe improve your formatting so this is nicer to look at? And give examples in your definitions to make them longer and help us understand that you understand how to roleplay, what metagaming is and what powergaming is. Some Places That May Help You Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/ A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/ A FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/ Server Rules: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/?page_id=8 Latest Format: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/43580-official-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/ Definitions (Seriously Useful): http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/45364-roleplayingmetagamingpowergaming-definitions/ Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial. If you have any questions, add me on Skype, or PM me on the forums.
  7. 5 more people for the Artharia Charter! Norse sort of Nation with 7 religions and a whole heap of lore. Go sign it, and when you do, tell me.

  8. 4 more days...just...4...more...days

    1. JoakimVonAnka

      JoakimVonAnka

      Indeed... 4 more painful days...

  9. Denied. Too many tacos. Maybe include some pizza next time? Otherwise, your character has a really bland biography.
  10. Blah! Family Functions! *shoots himself*

  11. I will probs be doing an Amnesia livestream today at 3PM AEST today! Be there!

  12. The baddies in this movie have REEALLLYY bad aim.

  13. You know that moment when your toe itches, you slam your head into the desk on reflex, then your knee jumps up, then you fall off your chair wincing in pain?

  14. Why did I deny you? Alright, you are definitely getting closer. I see you took my advice, and I am extremely thankful for that. I accidentally left something out of my review last time, and it was that your bio was too short. It included made up locations, no actual lore regarding the move to Asulon, and had no flaws, personality aspects, fears or quirks. Fix that up, eh? Also, I am really happy that you changed your definitions. The powergaming definition though, is definitely part of powergaming, but is not the type that we are looking for. I really, really suggest for you to look at the links below. Also, when I said 'roleplay' in the ORQs, I meant act as if your character is there, as if you are writing a book and your character is well, the character. For example, 'William run's up, flanking the men, sweating, huffing, puffing. He was not used to this kind of strain, but he would fight all the same.' That is roleplaying, and that is what I want you to do in your ORQs (Open Response Questions) Some Places That May Help You Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/ A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/ A FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/ Server Rules: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/?page_id=8 Latest Format: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/43580-official-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/ Definitions (Seriously Useful): http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/45364-roleplayingmetagamingpowergaming-definitions/ Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial. If you have any questions, add me on Skype, or PM me on the forums.
  15. Alright, it is decided. I am doing an Amnesia livestream sometime this week.

    1. Aryon

      Aryon

      Your tears shall bring joy to my soul

    2. Viper3X

      Viper3X

      Good luck man. The game is still scary at my place when there is 10 teenagers playing it (custom stories ftw).

  16. Amnesia is back in, is it? Would anyone enjoy hearing my screams?

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    2. Kickstarted and Running

      Kickstarted and Running

      I am gonna do a livestream or something...

    3. Kickstarted and Running

      Kickstarted and Running

      I am gonna do a livestream or something...

    4. hypercrit
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